man u r just too awesome a writer... ur comparisons... ur maturity..
d way u write without using d so called obvious words..
in one word... u r UNIQUE!!
i am waiting for this story to unfold wid all its layers... watever u write its very effective... n this was too...
n U r 17 ??? r u kidding me?? π i suddenly feel so old n nothing done in life... he he heπ well u r talented..
hope u would wanna take writing as career...