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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh wow that was heat beautiful the spider metaphor was so new and different and it worked so well! Excellent job!
Posted: 11 years ago
am sorry but i couldnt resist i had to ask this i didnt understand the story i am a very curious follower of all your writings

can you please brief me?
Posted: 11 years ago
man u r just too awesome a writer... ur comparisons... ur maturity..
d way u write without using d so called obvious words..
in one word... u r UNIQUE!!
 
i am waiting for this story to unfold wid all its layers... watever u write its very effective... n this was too...
 
n U r 17 ??? r u kidding me?? πŸ˜› i suddenly feel so old n nothing done in life... he he heπŸ˜† well  u r talented..
hope u would wanna take writing as career...
Posted: 11 years ago
Omg...this was beautiful!!!
Amazing!
Posted: 11 years ago
omg very very sad, can't wait to see what caused her  too seprate and how it happened...continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
I am a little disoriented from the wedding to now...can you please explain..this last part was even more disturbing than previous one.
Posted: 11 years ago
Its scary but i want to know more!
Posted: 11 years ago
tat was scary...
but d comparison u wrote was fabulous...
hw did kushi reach there?
wer was arnav?
awsum update...
do pm me wen u update
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow.. I really dont know what to say! The comparisons to a spider were amazing. But truthfully i really dont like the implications! Was the part with her just a dream! 

Nicely written. Thanks for the pm

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