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rabzonedge

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged

BB's POV-

Ek Sannata tha

Andhera tha

Charon aur ghiri deewaar thi..

Ghutan thi

Tinko tinko mein Bikhra

mera ghonsla tha..


meri pehchaan ghum thi

Mere armaan khoye they

khud se anjaan tha main

mere saare sapne bilakh bilakh 

kar roye they


Beti thi..jise vida na kar paaya

beta tha jisse chodh kar chala aaya

doobti naav ka patwaar tham liya tha

apne dono aankhon ko maine kitna sataya


Aaj jab lautha hoon..

mood ke dekhta hoon..

Kuch andar se saalta hai..

koi hai mere andar jo

mujhe Dhikkarta hai..

Kayar ban ke gaya tha...

Kyaa ban ke waapis aaya hoon..


Andhere galiyon me

ab Roshni Hai halki halki..

Beti ki beti mili mujhe

usme beti hai jhalki...


aaj tak kisi se keh nahi paya...

Main kitna Tanha tha..

main kitna tanha tha...


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@ divya Clap really nice..
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Wow. this is marvellous .. Clap Totally sums up BBs feelings perfectly..

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by busybee..

Hey i m back with new shayari...hope u all will like it...Smile

 kuch mahine sath chal kar khushi de gaye,
 ek din achanak hath chod kar gum de gaye,
 palatkar dekha muskurahaat bhari nazron se kuch youn,
 ki vapas zindagi me aane ki ummed de gaye.
 
 

 

Wow Bhavita..too good...Loved it...Clap

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rabzonedge

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by busybee..

@ divya Clap really nice..
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Thanks Bhavita...EmbarrassedHug

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabzonedge

Originally posted by busybee..

Hey i m back with new shayari...hope u all will like it...Smile

 kuch mahine sath chal kar khushi de gaye,
 ek din achanak hath chod kar gum de gaye,
 palatkar dekha muskurahaat bhari nazron se kuch youn,
 ki vapas zindagi me aane ki ummed de gaye.
 
 

 

Wow Bhavita..too good...Loved it...Clap

 
Thank u so much divyaSmileEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Armu4eva

Wow. this is marvellous .. ClapTotally sums up BBs feelings perfectly..

Thankoo Sherni...Ab mujhe Likhne ke keede ne kaat liya...Khub likhne wali hoon main..But am happy...Dancing

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Awesome poetry teddy ji...keya baat hain...bade khush lag rahi ho aaj Wink
btw, BB's pov means bhavita na!!

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