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new shayari @ pg 76- by me (Page 64)

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Armu4eva

@Teddy.. aap to bhai. .full fledged Shayar ban gaye ho. .kya baat.. kya baat haiClap


@ Bhavita.. lovely shayari dearClap


Thank u so much tanu Embarrassed   Smile
Glad u liked it Embarrassed   Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Absolutely fantastic Divya...

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged

Originally posted by SwastikAshNi

Absolutely fantastic Divya...

thanks Bishal..Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Divya...that was a truly beautiful poem...your best effort, in my opinion!

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabzonedge

ashu's POV

after that rainy night

Umr ke Iss padaw mein

Ye kaisa Jhukaaw hai...

Uss alhad ladki Ki Taraf..

Barsaati Nadi hai...wo

Jo sukhe huye zameen par..

Baras ke Hariyaali faila deti hai..

Uss Shaadi ki halchal mein

Kis haq se wo Mujhe

Khinch ke le gayi...

Aur main bawla 

chala gaya...

Ek shaitaani hai

Uski Ankhon mein...

Dastak de rahi hai

Mere Khud ke khade kiye

Deewaron par..

Agar koi bhi neev(Base)

kamzor rahi ..

wo aa jayegi unhe Tod ke..

Kal ki Kadakti Barasti Raat mein

Wo jhum jhum ke bhig rahi thi...

Jaise zindagi karwat le rahi hai

naya naya sa sabkuch hai..

Usne mujhe phir khincha tha..

Aur main Bebas Sa..

Khada ho gaya Bhigne..

Sametne jo Zindagi mujhe

dena chahti hai..

Main khud ko Rok nahi paa

Rahaa...

Kitne saalon baad...

Bhig kar Andheri raat mein

Adrak ki chai pi...

Uske saath...

Pagli bawari...Kaise Sach

Bol gayi...

Usne mere 'jute' Churaye they..

Uss samay Man kiya

Uski masumiyat par...

Usse gale laga loon...

Wo Apni Duniya mein Mujhe

Khinch rahi hai..

Sayad Anjaane mein..

Kya usse ehsaas hai...

Wo alhad Ladki..

Mere liye kitni Khaas hai..

Kya usse ehsaah hai...

Main Ye kya soch raha hoon

Kyaa Mujhe khud Ehsaas hai...???



Exactly Rabz.. aap toh Ashutosh ke antaratma bangaye ho...Clap..aap ke shayari ka jawab nahi...hum sab kavita ke nadi mein behte huye... har ek pal ko enjoy kar rahe hai...

Aap taareef ke bhi upar ho...

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged


Originally posted by Sujatha.rao

Divya...that was a truly beautiful poem...your best effort, in my opinion!

OMG Sujhatha really...Shocked...i m Humbled...Thanks..Hug

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mudraswathi

Originally posted by rabzonedge

ashu's POV

after that rainy night

Umr ke Iss padaw mein

Ye kaisa Jhukaaw hai...

Uss alhad ladki Ki Taraf..

Barsaati Nadi hai...wo

Jo sukhe huye zameen par..

Baras ke Hariyaali faila deti hai..

Uss Shaadi ki halchal mein

Kis haq se wo Mujhe

Khinch ke le gayi...

Aur main bawla 

chala gaya...

Ek shaitaani hai

Uski Ankhon mein...

Dastak de rahi hai

Mere Khud ke khade kiye

Deewaron par..

Agar koi bhi neev(Base)

kamzor rahi ..

wo aa jayegi unhe Tod ke..

Kal ki Kadakti Barasti Raat mein

Wo jhum jhum ke bhig rahi thi...

Jaise zindagi karwat le rahi hai

naya naya sa sabkuch hai..

Usne mujhe phir khincha tha..

Aur main Bebas Sa..

Khada ho gaya Bhigne..

Sametne jo Zindagi mujhe

dena chahti hai..

Main khud ko Rok nahi paa

Rahaa...

Kitne saalon baad...

Bhig kar Andheri raat mein

Adrak ki chai pi...

Uske saath...

Pagli bawari...Kaise Sach

Bol gayi...

Usne mere 'jute' Churaye they..

Uss samay Man kiya

Uski masumiyat par...

Usse gale laga loon...

Wo Apni Duniya mein Mujhe

Khinch rahi hai..

Sayad Anjaane mein..

Kya usse ehsaas hai...

Wo alhad Ladki..

Mere liye kitni Khaas hai..

Kya usse ehsaah hai...

Main Ye kya soch raha hoon

Kyaa Mujhe khud Ehsaas hai...???



Exactly Rabz.. aap toh Ashutosh ke antaratma bangaye ho...Clap..aap ke shayari ka jawab nahi...hum sab kavita ke nadi mein behte huye... har ek pal ko enjoy kar rahe hai...

Aap taareef ke bhi upar ho...

mudra..thanks you liked it...Really ashu is a multi layered Character..And to explore him thru poems is so Satisfying..cant tell you...Love you Always..You are always Encouraging...Hug

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabzonedge


Originally posted by Sujatha.rao

Divya...that was a truly beautiful poem...your best effort, in my opinion!

OMG Sujhatha really...Shocked...i m Humbled...Thanks..Hug



Truly , Divya...this poem touched me far more personally than any of your previous works...he was a lonely desert...and she the rain that transformed him into an oasis...beautiful...Hug

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