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new shayari @ pg 76- by me (Page 64)

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged

Originally posted by SwastikAshNi

Absolutely fantastic Divya...

thanks Bishal..Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Divya...that was a truly beautiful poem...your best effort, in my opinion!

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabzonedge

ashu's POV

after that rainy night

Umr ke Iss padaw mein

Ye kaisa Jhukaaw hai...

Uss alhad ladki Ki Taraf..

Barsaati Nadi hai...wo

Jo sukhe huye zameen par..

Baras ke Hariyaali faila deti hai..

Uss Shaadi ki halchal mein

Kis haq se wo Mujhe

Khinch ke le gayi...

Aur main bawla 

chala gaya...

Ek shaitaani hai

Uski Ankhon mein...

Dastak de rahi hai

Mere Khud ke khade kiye

Deewaron par..

Agar koi bhi neev(Base)

kamzor rahi ..

wo aa jayegi unhe Tod ke..

Kal ki Kadakti Barasti Raat mein

Wo jhum jhum ke bhig rahi thi...

Jaise zindagi karwat le rahi hai

naya naya sa sabkuch hai..

Usne mujhe phir khincha tha..

Aur main Bebas Sa..

Khada ho gaya Bhigne..

Sametne jo Zindagi mujhe

dena chahti hai..

Main khud ko Rok nahi paa

Rahaa...

Kitne saalon baad...

Bhig kar Andheri raat mein

Adrak ki chai pi...

Uske saath...

Pagli bawari...Kaise Sach

Bol gayi...

Usne mere 'jute' Churaye they..

Uss samay Man kiya

Uski masumiyat par...

Usse gale laga loon...

Wo Apni Duniya mein Mujhe

Khinch rahi hai..

Sayad Anjaane mein..

Kya usse ehsaas hai...

Wo alhad Ladki..

Mere liye kitni Khaas hai..

Kya usse ehsaah hai...

Main Ye kya soch raha hoon

Kyaa Mujhe khud Ehsaas hai...???



Exactly Rabz.. aap toh Ashutosh ke antaratma bangaye ho...Clap..aap ke shayari ka jawab nahi...hum sab kavita ke nadi mein behte huye... har ek pal ko enjoy kar rahe hai...

Aap taareef ke bhi upar ho...

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged


Originally posted by Sujatha.rao

Divya...that was a truly beautiful poem...your best effort, in my opinion!

OMG Sujhatha really...Shocked...i m Humbled...Thanks..Hug

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mudraswathi

Originally posted by rabzonedge

ashu's POV

after that rainy night

Umr ke Iss padaw mein

Ye kaisa Jhukaaw hai...

Uss alhad ladki Ki Taraf..

Barsaati Nadi hai...wo

Jo sukhe huye zameen par..

Baras ke Hariyaali faila deti hai..

Uss Shaadi ki halchal mein

Kis haq se wo Mujhe

Khinch ke le gayi...

Aur main bawla 

chala gaya...

Ek shaitaani hai

Uski Ankhon mein...

Dastak de rahi hai

Mere Khud ke khade kiye

Deewaron par..

Agar koi bhi neev(Base)

kamzor rahi ..

wo aa jayegi unhe Tod ke..

Kal ki Kadakti Barasti Raat mein

Wo jhum jhum ke bhig rahi thi...

Jaise zindagi karwat le rahi hai

naya naya sa sabkuch hai..

Usne mujhe phir khincha tha..

Aur main Bebas Sa..

Khada ho gaya Bhigne..

Sametne jo Zindagi mujhe

dena chahti hai..

Main khud ko Rok nahi paa

Rahaa...

Kitne saalon baad...

Bhig kar Andheri raat mein

Adrak ki chai pi...

Uske saath...

Pagli bawari...Kaise Sach

Bol gayi...

Usne mere 'jute' Churaye they..

Uss samay Man kiya

Uski masumiyat par...

Usse gale laga loon...

Wo Apni Duniya mein Mujhe

Khinch rahi hai..

Sayad Anjaane mein..

Kya usse ehsaas hai...

Wo alhad Ladki..

Mere liye kitni Khaas hai..

Kya usse ehsaah hai...

Main Ye kya soch raha hoon

Kyaa Mujhe khud Ehsaas hai...???



Exactly Rabz.. aap toh Ashutosh ke antaratma bangaye ho...Clap..aap ke shayari ka jawab nahi...hum sab kavita ke nadi mein behte huye... har ek pal ko enjoy kar rahe hai...

Aap taareef ke bhi upar ho...

mudra..thanks you liked it...Really ashu is a multi layered Character..And to explore him thru poems is so Satisfying..cant tell you...Love you Always..You are always Encouraging...Hug

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabzonedge


Originally posted by Sujatha.rao

Divya...that was a truly beautiful poem...your best effort, in my opinion!

OMG Sujhatha really...Shocked...i m Humbled...Thanks..Hug



Truly , Divya...this poem touched me far more personally than any of your previous works...he was a lonely desert...and she the rain that transformed him into an oasis...beautiful...Hug

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by busybee..

Heya friend I m back again with my boring poetry Confused
But kya kare Hume aur kaun sehen kar sakta he IF friends ke sivay Big smile

Now come to the serious point Smile I m posting new shayari here for my all IF friends jinhone kahina kahin kisina kisi tarikese har tarah se meri madad ki he.. This is a small gift from my side to all of them..
Hope u all will like it... Sorry in advance if I hurt anyone's emotions... Embarrassed but Plz suggest me guide me .. Comment like critisise my work :-):-):-)

Suno sab he baat aaj batani kuch khas
Sabhi ko sunana he ye raz
Sab yahan IF me hai bade matwale
Alag alag baat me mahir he sare
Suno baat aaj bataungi sabhi ki main
Plz Batana agar kahin galti Karun mainEmbarrassed

Sabse Pehle baat he Jinki sab se pyari he yahan
Karti baatein methisi Jinke sujav nyare he yahan
Are koi aur nahi hai TANU uska naam
Jinki WU ki baat hi he nyari
Jinke post bina forum me chaye udasi
Aur Jo he kajol ki deewaniHeart

Baat kuch modte he Saat rasto ke beech
Jinki nazar padhe bina Hume na aaye nind
Masoom si baatein karke hasati sabko
Kabhi dard bhari shayari se Rulati sabko
Jinka kaam hi he Unki pehchaan
DEEPA he Unka naam Big smile

Baat agar chal hi Rahi he shayari ki
Kaise bhule tarif Karna Unki lajawan shayari ki
Sab ko honsla deti woh likhne ka
Han Han DIVYA hi he naam usi ka Tongue

Badhte he ab yadon ki gali me Sahej ke rakhte he Jo yadon ko
Do shaks aise he Jo Jane he ya kala bakhoobi se
Dete humko Roz Nayi nayi tasveerein pyari
EK hamesha karti pyari baatein
Aur EK madad karne ko Hoti he taiyaar
Aur koi nahi DEBA aur SHEE he unke naam Hug

Ab karte he EK anokhi reporter ki baat
Jinhe khoob aata he KTKP ki khabrein sunane ka kaam
Par karti baatein hamesha khari
Fun post banane ki unke paas he jadu ki Chadi
Han han MUDRAji aap hi he vahiEmbarrassed

Fun post ki Nikli he baat
To kaise bhule unka naam
Theme queen hum use kehte
Jinka Nazariya he sabse hatke
Deepa ki judwa behen kehte unko
Aaj kal bohat miss karte he SUMI hum Aapko Cry

Cute cute si baatein he hamesha karti
Siggies Naye Naye pyare pyare he banati
Unki kahaniyon ke Bhai fan he hum
Jinko pyar se kehte ANA (cool_sk) he hum Heart Heart

Aab baat karte he kuch aise doston ki
Jo karte he hamesha muje support
Jinke comments ka karti hu main Intezar
SARIKA ,HARSHAL ,SWASTIK aur DEV he unke naamSmile

Abhi abhi Jinka hunar pata chala he Hume
Likhti he pyari pyari shayari nayi
Sweet si baatein karti he Dono
AZEEN aur ALKA han wahi to he woTongue

Ye he KTLK forum ke chamakte hue sitare
Sab he alag alag mahol se shehr se Bhi he juda
Par Jode hue he sab ko EK hi kadi
Ashni ki Jodi he sabki chahiti BadiHug

With lots of love
-Bhavita :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)


Plz comment:-):-):-):-)
Hug   Smile


awsum poetry bhavita.. too good...

thank u so so so much !


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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 8:42am | IP Logged
@ deepa thank u so much dear Hug
Glad u liked it Embarrassed   Smile

@ divya ab tumhari treat pakki Tongue tanu aur deepa Dono ne comment kiya Party

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