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new shayari @ pg 76- by me (Page 20)

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
This one is for SWASTIK.. He request me to write something for episode 41..
In which ashu came with Nidhi to her house for CB's birthday...

NIDHI:
Kabhi na samja aapne mere jazbaton ko
Aaj Bhi aapne galat thehraya mujhi ko
Meri mehnat par do Lafz tarif ke Sunna chahti thi
Par aap to Khafa the mujse iss bat pe hairan thi

ASHU:
Kya sach me hui he mujhi se galti
Soch Soch kar hirran hu main
Jab sacchai samne aayi to ye ilm hua
Kitna bura laga hoga use
Dhundne nikal pada use pure aspatal me
DIL ko sukun to tab mila jab mili jalak uski..

NIDHI:
Pura din Maza karungi socha tha magar barbad ho Gaya Itna khaas din
Soch kar Nikli jab bahar unko dekha apni car me baithe hue..
Jaise bohat kuch kehna chahte ho.
Par jab haq se unhone apne saath chalne ko kaha
Laga jaise aaj Intezar Pura hua mera

ASHU:
Maafi to mang li Maine kaha ki galti ho gai mujse
Par kuch nahi bola usne kya bohat UMMED kar li Maine
Par jab hum phas Gaye Sabke beech
Maine kaha ki Kabhi khatam na ho ye pal..
Ruk jaye ye zindagi Yahi lag raha tha jaise keh doon

Aap hame mile kuch aise,
zindagi hui khushnuma jaise,
such me bhul gaya main wo din tha ya raat,
Kya Farq padta he jab aap hain mere Sath .

NIDHI:
Unki baton ka asar kuch Aisa hua muj par
Ki bavri Hoti chali gai me..
Unki muskurahat me kho gai EK pal ke liye
Lihaz Bhi na raha ghiri hui hu main logo se..
Kya sochte he wo mere bare main kya pasand karte he mujhe
Yahi janne ko bekarar thi

ASHU:
Achanak hua andhera .. Par meri zindagi to andhhero se ghiri hui thi
Achanak dur se dikha maddham ujaala..
Dikhi EK sapno ki pari mujhe dhundhle se ujaale me
Komal pairo ki aahat se mere DIL ke andar halchal macha di
EK khubsurat sapna tha jaise samne mere
Zara se ujaale me damak raha tha uska chehra samne mere
DIL ke aas pas ke saare kavach tod ke jaise
Koi mere andar Sama Gaya ho..
Achanak aapne sapno ke mahal se bahar aana pada mujhe
Na chahte hue Bhi usse aapne jazbaat chupane pade mujhe..
Dil ko aapne tham kar chala aaya main
Soch Soch kar hairan hu Aakhir chahata kya Hun main



Hope u all will like this...
Ur criticism is also needed to improve My writing..
So Plz like or criticize ..


Edited by busybee.. - 24 July 2012 at 4:45am

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
@harsal Dev and Sujhatha..Thanks for Appreciation...

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Thank you Divya Smile

Bhavita, can you please change the colour of the font...it is tough to read...thank you!

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sujatha.rao



Bhavita, can you please change the colour of the font...it is tough to read...thank you!



Done Smile

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged
@ Bhavita...Lovely contrast shown between two characters..loved it..but yaar change the colour..its difficult to read it...

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabzonedge

@ Bhavita...Lovely contrast shown between two characters..loved it..but yaar change the colour..its difficult to read it...


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Done Smile

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Thank you Bhavita...very nicely written...both their povs come across so beautifully!

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sujatha.rao

Thank you Bhavita...very nicely written...both their povs come across so beautifully!


Thank u so much sujatha Smile
I was very afraid while posting I wrote this in half an hour so not sure that u all like it or not..
But glad u all liked it:-):-)

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