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new shayari @ pg 76- by me (Page 18)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Wah Divya and Bhavita...mushaira jaisa mahaul bana diya donon ne milke..agar ek dard bhari hai toh doosre me aanewali khushi ka sandesh hai...lovely!

Kal ke epi ke shuruat ne mujhe itna chooa ki maine bhi kuch likhne ki koshish ki...Divya ki tarah meri vocabulary itni extensive nahi hai...phir bhi ek koshish...aur shabd ya grammar mei agar galti ho toh phir maaf kardena!

Ek halki si sparsh

Ek halka sa muskaan

Ab na sharm aur na haya

Bas Hone lagi main bawri

 

Woh paas mere aane lage

Apne sud bud main khone lagi

Mann mera bin kaboo raha

Jaise unke siva koi duja nahi

 

Labon ko labon pe sajane ka pal

Ek doosre mei samajane ka pal

Badi intezar ke baad mila hai yeh pal

Bohot tadpa aur bechain kiya yeh pal

 

Par yeh shaam hai yaari ke liye

Milke khushiyan manane ke liye

Do chaar pal aur intezar hi sahi

Saiyyan sang chali main dosti ki gali


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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
Divya: ur Shayari words hv lot depth.. I really appreciate it.. @Bhaivta: good yaar. Keep it up..

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by busybee..

@ dev : thank u so much Smile
anytym 4 u BB

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

nyc poetry by BB And sujatha ji. They were expressible! Touchy


Thank you Dev!

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
@Sujatha, wah wah! Saiyan sang chali mei Dosti ki gali! Like Anarkali Disco Chali lolz js kidding! The lines had shown the Passion of a Girl to go wid her Hubby,who dnt knw cheat and false! But nw a days People r False overreacting n Liers! Anyways, a true Poetry

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
@Lajjo di(rabz), ur Poetries were Extempor,feel the situation typo, touchy n wonderful

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

@Sujatha, wah wah! Saiyan sang chali mei Dosti ki gali! Like Anarkali Disco Chali lolz js kidding! The lines had shown the Passion of a Girl to go wid her Hubby,who dnt knw cheat and false! But nw a days People r False overreacting n Liers! Anyways, a true Poetry


Thank you Dev...Anarkali Disco Chali...what a line to recall here LOL...shayad hamari Anarkali bhi jayegi..aur is baar Salim bhi nachega!

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 3:22am | IP Logged
@ sujatha: lovely shayari Clap n thank u much for appreciation Smile

@ harshal : thank u so much Smile

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