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new shayari @ pg 76- by me (Page 15)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mudraswathi

Superb Rabz...
You are simply excelling your self with every other shayar and you are giving us more expectations..

It is such a difficult task to understand a multi-layered person like ashutosh... But you have dug into all those fathoms.

your command on the language keliye kya kahoon...Clap

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Mudra i wait for your Comments...You understand Poems so well...Please Be critique...I want to improve..Feel free to point out short comings..I will be really Happy...SmileHug

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by debaparna77

wah!! wah!! teddy ji...aaj to aap shayarana ho gayi hain...bahot badhia...dil ko choo jaati hain Heart Heart


hai..na...maine bhi yehi kaha ...HeartSmile

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabzonedge

[QUOTE=mudraswathi]

Mudra i wait for your Comments...You understand Poems so well...Please Be critique...I want to improve..Feel free to point out short comings..I will be really Happy...SmileHug



Thank you Rabz for giving me this honor..and honestly, I dont think twice to point out if something is lacking...as we are all above that jhooti tareef and can take negative comments equally...Smile

par..ched chhaad karne keliye, aap toh kasar hi nahi chod rahi ho... and you know verywell, the Ashutosh- before marriage wala is a dream character I would like to analyse... aap voh iraada itni khubsoorti se poore kar rahi ho...HugHeart

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged

Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Dunno what 2 say Divya di! Only what can i say is The Pleasure is All Mine!!

Thanks

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged

Originally posted by debaparna77

wah!! wah!! teddy ji...aaj to aap shayarana ho gayi hain...bahot badhia...dil ko choo jaati hain Heart Heart

Thanks tigress...Tere Dil ko Choo Gayi Matlab Achchi Poem hai...Big smile

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mudraswathi

Originally posted by rabzonedge

[QUOTE=mudraswathi]

Mudra i wait for your Comments...You understand Poems so well...Please Be critique...I want to improve..Feel free to point out short comings..I will be really Happy...SmileHug



Thank you Rabz for giving me this honor..and honestly, I dont think twice to point out if something is lacking...as we are all above that jhooti tareef and can take negative comments equally...Smile

par..ched chhaad karne keliye, aap toh kasar hi nahi chod rahi ho... and you know verywell, the Ashutosh- before marriage wala is a dream character I would like to analyse... aap voh iraada itni khubsoorti se poore kar rahi ho...HugHeart

Yup we all are so Mature Here..I love this Forum...I will Write Poems on Ashu's mind sets At different point of Time in his life...Next will be After He gets Adopted by Baba and HK...Wat was his feeling and How Desperately he wanted to fill void in Baba's Life for that he was adopted...

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Woow it's really imotional shayari Clap
Really nice divya Heart

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 1:03pm | IP Logged

Shayari on 1st few Minutes of 23rd july Epi..

Nidhi's POV..

Balam se lagi gale main bawali

Pakda unhone sharm-o-haya udd chali

Seene par haath dhadkan ki lay

na koi aaspass na koi bhay

nihara unhone bhuji shama jalne lagi

thartharaye honth andar se main pighalne lagi

kitne paas hai wo sarasarahat si hoti hai

bahon ke ghere jaise lariyon ki moti hai

saans me saans ghul rahi hai Dil jhum utha

Saiyaan paas aaye Adhuri trishna ko koi chum utha

Unki Aankhon me shararat hai...Uchal rahi hoon main

Anjie ke sangeet me jana hai iss pal se nikal rahi hoon main..

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