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new shayari @ pg 76- by me (Page 11)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by busybee..

Originally posted by debaparna77

Originally posted by busybee..

Hey i m back with new shayari...hope u all will like it...Smile


<font color="#ff0000" size="3">kuch mahine sath chal kar khushi de gaye,</font>

<font size="3"><font color="#ff0000">ek din achanakhath chod kar gum de gaye,</font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#ff0000">palatkar dekha muskurahaat bhari nazron se kuch youn,</font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#ff0000">ki vapas zindagi me aane ki ummed de gaye.</font></font>



Excellent bhavitaClaphaye,aap humesha dukhi dukhi shayeri keu likhte ho?


Thanks deba:-):-) Embarrassed
I said na I wrote all these shayaries when I was very sad ... That's why...

Yaar sahi hai..Dard me jo shayari nikalti hai..uski baat aur hi hoti hai...ekdum pure and true...Embarrassed

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sujatha.rao

Pata nahi kyon but Ashutosh fascinates me most as a character...maybe he because he has seen so much of pain and loss all his life...and his relationship with Nidhi is so beautiful that it begs for poetry to be written on it...i don't even know if what I write can be classified as poetry...but it is an attempt  to express Ashutosh's emotions in his language ( and not mine)...once again please excuse any errors in grammar or language!

Meri Ma

 

Tera chehra nahi

Hai mujhe  yaad

Na bahon ke garmi

Na awaz ki mitaas

Mamta ki chadar

Tere aanchal ka chaon

Che Saal ka ta

Jab chod diya saath

Kehte hain khuda ne

Maa ko banaya

Apne hi parichayi mei

Mere zindagi me ti

 dono jage khaali

Phir woh din aaya

Jab pyar banke khuda

mere paas aaya

Aur unke parischayi

 Mei usse  saath laaya

Ab na hai koi fikar

Na hai koi dar Meri Ma

Bas Sangini ke roop me

milgayi tum dubara!





Awesome yaar...Clap..I will write Ashu's POV...But in 3 stages..as i have thought..B'ful description...

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:51am | IP Logged
@ sujatha . Awesome one Clap

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Sujata: good one.. U hv kept right amount of emotions in ur shayari..

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabzonedge

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Awesome yaar...Clap..I will write Ashu's POV...But in 3 stages..as i have thought..B'ful description...



Thank you so much, Divya...looking forward to your take on Ashutosh...am sure it is going to be beautiful...if I may suggest three stages..

1. When Ashu the orphan is adopted by BB
2. Ashu after BB leaves him and before Nidhi comes into his life
3. Ashu's love for Nidhi

Of course, would love to have something on Ashu's pain on losing love just after finding it ( the Kerala epis) and also Ashu's pain at having caused Nidhi pain ( post the Mallika track)

Hope you don't mind my making so many requests...

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by busybee..

@ sujatha . Awesome one Clap


Thank you so much, Bhavitha!

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ithasme

Sujata: good one.. U hv kept right amount of emotions in ur shayari..


Thank you Harshal!

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sujatha.rao

Originally posted by rabzonedge

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Awesome yaar...Clap..I will write Ashu's POV...But in 3 stages..as i have thought..B'ful description...



Thank you so much, Divya...looking forward to your take on Ashutosh...am sure it is going to be beautiful...if I may suggest three stages..

1. When Ashu the orphan is adopted by BB
2. Ashu after BB leaves him and before Nidhi comes into his life
3. Ashu's love for Nidhi

Of course, would love to have something on Ashu's pain on losing love just after finding it ( the Kerala epis) and also Ashu's pain at having caused Nidhi pain ( post the Mallika track)

Hope you don't mind my making so many requests...

Not at all sujhatha..Rather it helps me too write thinking these things in mind..surely i will write on all your requests..Thanks for encouragement...Smile

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