new shayari @ pg 76- by me - Page 44

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Alka: cool dear, aap kisi par bhi shayari likhane mein achi ho... @Divya: hmmm... U hv made me agree..

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Edited by rabzonedge - 11 years ago

I posted this "A heart pour from Ashutosh to Nidhi" a few days back... M posting it again in this thread...

This is for my 1st friend on IF...

This content was originally posted by: Aazeen02

I posted this "A heart pour from Ashutosh to Nidhi" a few days back... M posting it again in this thread...

From Ashu to Nidhi...

Ek ladki thi anjaani si... meri car se wo takrayi thi...

ladh jhagadkar jab mili hospital mein, mujhe dekh chakrayi thi...

Apni hi duniya mein jeeti thi... Apni hi dhun gaati thi...

Jaane kahan se sabko, apna bana le  jaati thi...

Har adaa mein uski ek shararat thi...

Uske har dhang se mujhe badi hararat thi...

Jaane kaise wo titli meri zindagi mein rang bharne lagi...

Jaise meri khamoshi mein kuch karne lagi ...

Jaane kaise us ladki par main dil de baitha,

Par kuch na kehne par main tha aitha...

Dil se door karna tha muskil, basaana bhi na tha aasaan...

Main toh kar deta izhaar, par wo na ho jati pareshaan...

Aakhir Dosti ne mila diya pyar ko khuda ke darr pe,

Phir sawaar hua suroor pyar ka hum dono ke sir pe...

Apne pyar ko dete anjaam, par hum dard sehne lage...

Takleef ke daur mein jab apne hi KUCH TOH KEHNE LAGE...

Maut ko bhi salaam karke main uske paas laut aaya,

Dard mein lipti uss ladki ko kahin gumsum sa paaya...

Meri har khushi lautayi usne bas wohi nahi thi...

Sab kuch tha mere paas, bas uski hi kami thi...

Sachha tha pyaar, aur pyaarey they apne,

Aakhir poorey ho gaye humare sapne...

Wo meri, main uska, koi aur na tha dooja...

Dil tha uska mandir, pyar tha meri pooja...

Laakh chaha todna humare pyar ko, meri meet ne...

Par dobara pyar usse karne par majboor ki uski jeet ne...

Tum aayi toh, hoon main aaj, warna tha adhoora...

Nidhi, tum aur sirf  tumse hai jeewan mera sawera...

With loads of love

ASHUTOSH

@ Divya di... now plz tell me, hows it... ok...

excellent Azeen..i loved it bravo..Gal...Continue writing and Posting..Love you sweety..👏

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This is for my 1st friend on IF...

Jinko kehti 'THI' main Dr. Ashutosh ki sister,

IF ki anokhi si, 'Comedy Minister'.

Jinki 'nazar' bin aankhein dhundhla jati,

Life kitni bhi ho tough, lekin humein hansake behla jati.

Jinka '7' ka obsession kabhi khatam nahi hota,

Jinke 'non- romantic' hone ka raaz hazam nahi hota.

Jo mar mit ti thi Ashutosh ke 'scar' pe,

Jo kuch bhi karti 'Gulab Jamun ' ke pyar mein.

Wo thi IF par meri 1st frnd jisne dil pe mere kiya tha knock,

Jinse har kabhi karte they 'Heart to heart' talk.

Aap na hoti toh kaun karta 'Hamari nazar se' post,

'Deepa Di' you are my sweetest dost...

awww..Deepu is lucky to have a frend like you..and so am i now....Azeen is my frend too...Gal you keep writing i am telling you..you write very well...you know how to express...🤗

[QUOTE=Aazeen02]I posted this "A heart pour from Ashutosh to Nidhi" a few days back... M posting it again in this thread...khubsurat hai kahaani,woh bhi aapki jabani                                                                                                  yeh bhi sach hai jamaneme dil hi jaane dil ki kahaani                                                                                 doston pe to hur jaan kurbaan  hai                                                                                                                       unhise hai duniya zinda armaan hai

Thankoo so much di... It means a lot 2 b appreciated... Actually I used to write poetries both in english n hindi from past 9 years... But then it started taking a toll over my studies, so had to subside it... Aaj-kal free they, aap logon ko shayari karte dekha, toh fir se bujhi shama jal padi...

Yeah I guess now m really makin frnds here, jo ab sirf meri buddy list mein add hi nahi hote, balki r also adding up to the space in my heart...
I dont know abt u all, but m indeed very luck 2 have frnds like u all... Thankyou all for accepting me so whole heartedly... Muuah... :*
n thanx 4 updating the title wid my new poem...

awesome post aazeen...kya baat...

Awesome one azeen 👏   👏
Totally loved them ❤️   ❤️
Keep writing dear u r a brilliant writer 👍🏼

This content was originally posted by: Aazeen02

This is for my 1st friend on IF...

Jinko kehti 'THI' main Dr. Ashutosh ki sister,

IF ki anokhi si, 'Comedy Minister'.

Jinki 'nazar' bin aankhein dhundhla jati,

Life kitni bhi ho tough, lekin humein hansake behla jati.

Jinka '7' ka obsession kabhi khatam nahi hota,

Jinke 'non- romantic' hone ka raaz hazam nahi hota.

Jo mar mit ti thi Ashutosh ke 'scar' pe,

Jo kuch bhi karti 'Gulab Jamun ' ke pyar mein.

Wo thi IF par meri 1st frnd jisne dil pe mere kiya tha knock,

Jinse har kabhi karte they 'Heart to heart' talk.

Aap na hoti toh kaun karta 'Hamari nazar se' post,

'Deepa Di' you are my sweetest dost...