new shayari @ pg 76- by me - Page 33

Bhavita: dear, aapke ye yaadien kis taraf ishaara karte hain.yeh hum jante hain.. Kuch mazedaar naye pan par likhoge to aapke shayaris mein taazgi dehkane ko milegi hum sabko... No offence...

Originally posted by: busybee..

@ divya n deba : abhi tang nahi karungi sad shayaries post karke...
Shayari ka stock khatam 😭   😭

Originally posted by: ithasme

Bhavita: dear, aapke ye yaadien kis taraf ishaara karte hain.yeh hum jante hain.. Kuch mazedaar naye pan par likhoge to aapke shayaris mein taazgi dehkane ko milegi hum sabko... No offence...

Thanks harshal 😊
I'll surely try to come up with something new:-):-):-):-):-)

Originally posted by: debaparna77

Awww...toh keya hua...sad ki stock khatam to romantic likhna start karo...😳

I'll surely try 😳   😳

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Mujhe Laga koi Mere Jiju they...Ab MB ko jiju nahi bol sakti main..😛

😲   😲. 😲   😲
What????????!!!!!!!!!!!
Na yaar abhi to bohat der he... 😃

Originally posted by: busybee..

😲   😲. 😲   😲
What????????!!!!!!!!!!!

Na yaar abhi to bohat der he... 😃

Romantic shayri likhna start kar..jiju dhund Jaldi...😳

Originally posted by: busybee..

Ok I m back again with 2 sad shayaries ... 😳


Zindagi

Jab Gaye aap hame chod kar,
khushiyan Bhi chali gayi Hamse muh mod Kar,
Aapki yaadein Sath thi issi liye zinda he hum,
varna ruh toh kabki chali gayi iss zindagi ko chod kar.


Dukhon ke alava kuch nahi mila zindagi se,
aakhirme maut ke alava kuch milega Bhi nahi zindagi se,
Sath lekar aaye ho bhale hi dhero khushiyan aapno ke liye,
par jate waqt unhi ki aankho me ansu hoge iss zindagi se.
-BHAVITA

Do like or criticise 🤗

Oye bhavita phirse ek sad shayeri😭😭kisne rulaya tujhe naam bol😡

btw, wonderful dukhbhari shayeri re🤗

😆   😆
I never said before but my inspiration is always MB...
When he left d show I was really very sad.. Tabhi Maine ye sab shayari likhi thi...
Share nahi Karna chahti thi ye baat kyunki shayad kuch members ko pasand na aata.. But u asked so shared ...

Btw thanks for liking shayari 🤗

Aur don't get angry ye last set tha sad shayari ka ab mera shayari ka stock khatam 😭

Bhavitha,  cant love you more...

first it was your shayari.. in the last poem I was concerned more, arre... yeh kya hai...itna dard bhari...😲 ...that kavita was so sensitive nevertheless... now this second one is really awesome... it brings tears re...

Then your boldness... whether others like it or not, you expressed your opinion through these fantastic poems... waise MB ko shukriya aada karna padega... his exit brought out shayari within you... but ... dearie...itna sad banna achi baat nahi hai.

Poem in reply to Deepu's Shayri...

Kal Pyaar ki Pehli Baarish ki Khushi thi

Aaj wahi Mausam Rukha sa Sard Hai

Kal Chamakte Sitare they Jin Palkon Par

Aaj Wahi par thehra 'Uska' Diya Dard hai

Zindagi Palat Jaati hai Har ek pal mein Yaara

Jo lamha surkh tha kabhi aaj woh zard hai...

Khusi ki Na khusi rakh,Na gham ka gham

Jo raah mein chod gaya wo kaisa Humdard hai??

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Poem in reply to Deepu's Shayri...

Kal Pyaar ki Pehli Baarish ki Khushi thi

Aaj wahi Mausam Rukha sa Sard Hai

Kal Chamakte Sitare they Jin Palkon Par

Aaj Wahi par thehra 'Uska' Diya Dard hai

Zindagi Palat Jaati hai Har ek pal mein Yaara

Jo lamha surkh tha kabhi aaj woh zard hai...

Khusi ki Na khusi rakh,Na gham ka gham

Jo raah mein chod gaya wo kaisa Humdard hai??

👏👏👏👏
👏

@ mudra: 🤗   🤗
Thanks dear ❤️

I know Itna dard accha nahi but it was a phase in life... I was very attached with this show ... May be that's why...
N about boldness I was very afraid to write that but I thought i m not wrong then why I should afraid... So I share with all of u.. N I m not feeling bad that I write for MB... I can proudly say MB is my inspiration for writing...

Thanks once again for understand my feelings n liking my shayaries

🤗