new shayari @ pg 76- by me - Page 10

This content was originally posted by: rabzonedge

so sweet of you..🤗

🤗

Verywell written BB... fantastic...

@rabz... I hope you dont mind calling you with this IF name...

I have become nostalgic with your shayari... dil ko choota hai...

Ek Anokhi khushi hain
Jo dil ko choota hai...
purani yaadon mein khoyi hoon main
ab baahar aane ki mann hi nahi...

This content was originally posted by: mudraswathi

Verywell written BB... fantastic...

@rabz... I hope you dont mind calling you with this IF name...

I have become nostalgic with your shayari... dil ko choota hai...

Ek Anokhi khushi hain
Jo dil ko choota hai...
purani yaadon mein khoyi hoon main
ab baahar aane ki mann hi nahi...

no Mudra...y should i mind you calling me by this name...So sweet of you to say such Cute lines for me..I will try to keep up your expectations...🤗..Thanks...

Edited by rabzonedge - 11 years ago

Superb written Divya,Sujatha and Bhavita..👍🏼

Rabz, Sujatha...

I liked all Sujatha's requests...

Ashutosh's love on first AKC night...( pl include Mallika's interruption...please please)

This content was originally posted by: SwastikAshNi

Superb written Divya,Sujatha and Bhavita..👍🏼

Thanks Bishal...😳

This content was originally posted by: mudraswathi

Rabz, Sujatha...

I liked all Sujatha's requests...

Ashutosh's love on first AKC night...( pl include Mallika's interruption...please please)

OK sure..I will include it in 2nd part of Ashu's life...Poem...

This content was originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Pata nahi kyon but Ashutosh fascinates me most as a character...maybe he because he has seen so much of pain and loss all his life...and his relationship with Nidhi is so beautiful that it begs for poetry to be written on it...i don't even know if what I write can be classified as poetry...but it is an attempt  to express Ashutosh's emotions in his language ( and not mine)...once again please excuse any errors in grammar or language!

Meri Ma

 

Tera chehra nahi

Hai mujhe  yaad

Na bahon ke garmi

Na awaz ki mitaas

Mamta ki chadar

Tere aanchal ka chaon

Che Saal ka ta

Jab chod diya saath

Kehte hain khuda ne

Maa ko banaya

Apne hi parichayi mei

Mere zindagi me ti

 dono jage khaali

Phir woh din aaya

Jab pyar banke khuda

mere paas aaya

Aur unke parischayi

 Mei usse  saath laaya

Ab na hai koi fikar

Na hai koi dar Meri Ma

Bas Sangini ke roop me

milgayi tum dubara!

Wah..Wah..Sujatha...
Ashutosh's character was designed that way..several angles and the most complex one...though, for the past few episodes, it has become just bland and single dimensional...😭

This content was originally posted by: mudraswathi

Verywell written BB... fantastic...

@rabz... I hope you dont mind calling you with this IF name...

I have become nostalgic with your shayari... dil ko choota hai...

Ek Anokhi khushi hain
Jo dil ko choota hai...
purani yaadon mein khoyi hoon main
ab baahar aane ki mann hi nahi...

Thanks mudra 😊   😳 glad u like it 😳

This content was originally posted by: SwastikAshNi

Superb written Divya,Sujatha and Bhavita..👍🏼

Thanks swastik 😊 😳