Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

OS - Love in Rain Updated Epilogue/ Pg 30 (Page 23)

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
amazing update...
loved it alot...
waiting fr epilogue...

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beautiful OS...

thanx for pm...

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Geettt I am not going to leave you now''. Maan was screaming after Geet threw water on his face as he was not getting up'''. Geet threw the water and ran away to their little doll Roshni'''


Geet was sitting with Roshni making her drink milk as she was already awake'' Maan came behind and hugged Geet from behind kiss little doll''. Looking at her dad Roshni who with great difficulty was having milk but as soon as she was her dad she left and screamed Papaaa'''.


Maan took Roshni in his arm and kissed Roshni started kissing him''..


Geet: Roshni''' come down and finish this milk fast'''.


Roshni: No mama'''.


Geet: Maan''.. Bring her down only because of you she left this milk''..


Maan: Jaan''' why are you blaming me for that''' if she does not want to have milk leave it''. She will have after some time ha na gudiya''.


Roshni: Yes Papa''' Thank you''..


Geet: Maan don't spoil her this way'' Anyways when you both get together you both become one and then why would anyone listen to me''. Ye lo glass and make her drink the milk ''.. I am going I have enough work to do''' and then I have to go and do some shopping also'''..


Roshni and Maan looked at each''.


Roshni: Papa neeche utaro na'''


Maan: Why????


Maan put Roshni down and Roshni took the glass of milk and finish it''


Maan: Good girl gudiya and then turns towards Geet and says see my daughter is so nice she just finish her whole milk and you were blaming her'''


But Maan was unknown that his so called sweet daughter ke dimag me kya chal raha tha'''


Roshni: Mumma I am on your side now will you take me for shopping'' and then turns to Maan and says Papa I am mumma's doll''


Maan; Ohhh shaitan just because your mumma is going for shopping you became on mumma's side ha wait''..


Maan started running behind Roshni who was running in the whole house''.


Roshni went to her great grandmother to hide from her papa'.. After sometime Maan came to his room and saw Geet was keeping all their things in the bag''. He came from behind and hug her from waist and gave a wet kiss on her shoulder'''..


Geet: Maan''. What are you doing???? Kuch to sharm kijiye'' aapki beti bhi badi hogayi hai''' She has become 3 years old and humari shaddi ko bhi 5 yrs ho gaye hai aura b bhi itni badmashi''''


Maan who was still busy nuzzling his nose on her shoulder said: So that does not stop me from loving by beautiful wife''.. Waise Geet aaj subha ka badla lena baki hai mera''.


Geet moved away: What Badla???? What have I done????


Maan: Don't be so innocent my adorable wife as if you don't know what you have done''.. Who was the one who threw the water on my face and ran away''.


Maan said by kissing near the corner of the lips''.


Geet: Maan'''


Maan: hmm''' He was just torturing her by kissing at the corner of her lips and nibbling it''..


Roshni who had come with Pinky and Dadi in search of her Mumma and Papa saw her parents lost''


Roshni:  Papa mumma ko kissi de rehe ho'''. Mujhe bhi chaiye


Maan and Geet both came out of the trance and was shocked to see Roshni, Dadi and Pinky looking at them innocently'..


Pinky and Adi fall in love with each other and Maan and Geet helped them to realize their love and finally both also got married'' Pinky giving a smirk smile to Geet: Chalo Roshni beta we will go and have something from the kitchen'


Savitri: Beta darwaja to band kar lete'''.


Saying this she also went away from there'''.


Geet gave an angry glare on Maan: you could not close the door''.


Maan just gave a puppy look to Geet saying sorry'''.



Geet was about to move but Maan hold her'..: Ab to who log chale gaye now we can continue with our romance'''


Geet hit on his hand: Leave me and go and freshen up then we have to leave also to go to our farm house'''.


After Geet came down teasing session continue till they were about to leave for their mini vacation'''


Later at night Adi, Pinky, Dadi, Maan, Geet and Roshni and Rano reached the farm house''''  With the insistence of Maan, rano also started satying with Maan and Geet''' Dadi was more than happy with Rano coming and staying with them as she would also get a company''.. Geet left the London job and started working with Maan''.. After their marriage they use to regularly come to the farm house and use to celebrate their wedding anniversary and Roshni's birthday''  Fortunately Roshni's birthday also falls on the same day as on their wedding Anniversary''   


Next day they celebrated their wedding anniversary and Roshni's birthday only with the family''..   Roshni was sleeping with her nani and great dadi ma'.


 Later at night Geet was standing at their balcony'''.. It was raining with full force''' She had put her hand in the rain'''' Maan came from behind and put her chin on her shoulder and one hand below her hand''..


Maan: Happy Anniversary Jaan''''


Geet: Happy Anniversary my darling hubby'''.


She turned and kissed his cheeks'''


Maan: Kya baat hai itna pyaar mujpar'''


Geet: That means I don't love you''.


Maan: Let me think''


Geet: Maan''.


Maan: I was kidding yaar and gives a peck on her lips''..


Geet hugged him and said: Maan this rain is so beautiful na'''.


Maan: hmm''. Because of this rain we are one''' I should thank this rain because of which I got you'''.  By the way Geet I gave you your favorite gift where is mine''.. I have still not received it'''


Geet: Who mai'''..


Maan: Who mai kya bhul gayi na''.. Mujhe pata tha you will forget it'..


Geet felt little dizzy and was about to fall but Maan hold her in time'''


Maan: Geet what happen to you suddenly''' Wait I will call Mom and Dadi''


Geet stop him: No Maan no need'''.. I know this reason''.


Maan: What???


Geet: I am pregnant'''. I came to know today itself after Doctor called me to confirm it'''


Maan was shocked at present and then recovered it and put his hand on her tummy and said: Means we are going to be parents once again'' Not bad Maan Singh Khurana so we can have our football team hai na'''


Geet: Maan''.. That was a joke right'' 2 is enough for us'''


Maan: No''. I am not joking''.. I am serious''. I had told you before only that I want a football team'' So''


Maan was cutely looking at Geet's reaction to come''


Geet turned and put her palm on her face: Maan''. Mar jaugi mai''.


Maan hugged her by her waist and said: mere hote hue kaise marne de sakta hu tumne''' Tum to meri jaan ho''..


That night turned into a most passionate night'''.  


Maan along with others took care of Geet and Roshni was more than happy to hear that she is going to become a elder sister''' Roshini was very careful of her mother''' They were blessed with a sweet little boy''''.


This sweet small family lived happily with all love and supported each other in all the problems which came in their way'''..

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This is the small epilogue for this short story... I hope I you all like it... Please press like and do comment... Will be waiting for your response

Edited by ana1411 - 26 August 2012 at 7:29am

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 7:36am | IP Logged
update happy ending roshni is cute devil

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged

  wow lovely update dear...lovely cute os...i too  fallen in love with  LOVE IN maaneet start they love in rain and  became one in te same rain...i love it so so so much...

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