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OS: BETWEEN THE LINES (Page 4)

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
'Sometimes love is not enough' & 'There is a thin line between love and hate' what beautiful words! Sorry I will have to repeat each line of yours if I go on!

I love how you have brought out the change in priorities and Arnav's preference for solitude over Aakash and even his sister. 'She has a new plaything'.. If this Anjali is anything like the Anjali in the show, she only needs a 'toy' that is totally in her control...

The tug of war between duty and love, his love for Amma and Buaji and respect for Payal very well portrayed!

Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 4:26am | IP Logged
I bow to thee oh prolific writer... Amazed at how easily you change the tenor of your OS's, so many of them yet each one way different from the others... But all of them equally beautiful...

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:02am | IP Logged
wow..this touched my heart..i don't know how to express it..but this is great..

The first para was so poignant and made me pensive..More than once, i stopped reading and brooded over of the sentences.. You have an eloquent style in writing, and your words stirred emotions in me which baffled me..

Reading on, the subtle references and inferences made my heart jump with joy..This was an amazing OS.

thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged
SOOO BEAUTIFUL... I TINK U SHUD CONT DIS, PUHLEEEZZZ... :P

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:23am | IP Logged
That was real emotional felt for Arnav and felt how happy he was

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nimra21 Senior Member
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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
That was beautiful. Arnav's emotions were described perfectly. Well done! :)

P.S: You should continue this.It has great potential!


Edited by nimra21 - 22 July 2012 at 6:35am

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Awesome one! ill give a longer comment later!

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sparikh IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 8:07am | IP Logged
A is more emotional fool than anyone...that was beautiful!

Can we get one w/K's perspective??? Pls?

-Sona

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