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OS: BETWEEN THE LINES (Page 3)

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Ah... Beautiful bingala!!!! I wish the Arnav on show realizes khushi's worth n gets her back when she leaves him

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:24am | IP Logged
awesome !!!

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Manitaa Senior Member
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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Must continue.. This OS has all the capabilities of transforming into a beautiful SS.. What happens when they meet, how he convinces her.. A lil' flashback of how she settled.. Yada yada.. why im asking you to do that is 'cause the wooing track on your he epi is mind-numbingly pathetic.. Its so un-ASR-ish and hence unbelievable.. It lacks the essence of their original personalities. And plus you're one helluva writer.. So please my darling.. Do continue.. 

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
awesome os
thnaks for the pm
keep writing more

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:44am | IP Logged
loved it loved it awesome you need to put another part to it loved his emotions and his resolve awesome well written so cute he is on his way to lucknow to get his love back and this no one is stopping him love the os thanks for the pm

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:01am | IP Logged
very good

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:24am | IP Logged
superb..Big smile
thnx 4 pm

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Great os
Loved it!

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