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Pass this on to the IPKKND team...they are bound to make a hash of things or maybe not if they see writing like this. I have started to have immense curiosity about Kakkori in Lucknow...will google it. As usual effortless OS.

Really nice.. please write more.. waiting..

The deep emotions and the love that oozes out of every pore wrtten so eloquently by you brought moisture to my eyes.

Beautifully written

Thank you for the pm

Ah... Beautiful bingala!!!! I wish the Arnav on show realizes khushi's worth n gets her back when she leaves him

Must continue.. This OS has all the capabilities of transforming into a beautiful SS.. What happens when they meet, how he convinces her.. A lil' flashback of how she settled.. Yada yada.. why im asking you to do that is 'cause the wooing track on your he epi is mind-numbingly pathetic.. Its so un-ASR-ish and hence unbelievable.. It lacks the essence of their original personalities. And plus you're one helluva writer.. So please my darling.. Do continue.. 

awesome os

loved it loved it awesome you need to put another part to it loved his emotions and his resolve awesome well written so cute he is on his way to lucknow to get his love back and this no one is stopping him love the os thanks for the pm

superb..😃

I bow to thee oh prolific writer... Amazed at how easily you change the tenor of your OS's, so many of them yet each one way different from the others... But all of them equally beautiful...