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ArHi SS:**Eternal Love**...updated part 8, pg 40 (Page 12)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luckyarnav

Hey I read all the parts together and they were amazing.

I hv sent u a buddy request plz accept

Plz update soon

Thank you
 
Thank you for your comment, I've accepted your request!! Big smile xxx

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:40pm | IP Logged
fantastic update
thanks for the PM

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Yazzy91

Originally posted by Haz78

I really liked it, the pre-cap seems to be okay-ish, it would have been better if it was a couple of months later rather than 1 and half year... dunno why but it makes me sad that Arnav and Khushi lived without each other for 1 and a half year(s)... butits your story and do continue... I really enjoyed itClap



Heyy, im really glad you shared your opinion, i know it's sad to think that arnav and khushi have been apart for 1yr n hlf Cry...initially i was in two minds, whether to make this a seperation a short or a long one, but then i thought i want a khushi who is successful, independent and has learnt to live a life by herself; and that can't be done in 3months or 6months!! LOL...anyways thank you for your comment, much appreciated!!! xxx



It's ok, but seriously this is a really good story and I know where you are coming from now... and meeting after a longer time will be amazing too... :D

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 6:58pm | IP Logged
Great OS and loved all the three parts.
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Glad you are turning this into an SS, it will give us more reading.  Amazing concept and the way your story is shaping up. 
 
Loved the way you showed the emotions of Khushi, Arnav, the Raizadas, especially Anjali, Nani and Buaji.  Well, I wished the CVs would give us some more meaningful episodes, more depth to each charactor, especially the main ones - Arnav, Khushi, Anjali and Nani. Show us more of their feelings and how they are coping with day to day happenings.   NK is doing a fab job, helping Khushi out in her problems.  A Good friend, indeed.
 
Anyways, reading your OS which is shortly going to turn out into an SS is so much more satisfying.  Great job done!!! Star


Edited by lara3110 - 23 July 2012 at 6:58pm

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:28pm | IP Logged
awsuuum dear...lovely update..uh oh time for them to come face to face...loved it very much dear...

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Really NIce Update.  loved the precap Smile

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
nice!!!!
like it!
pls update soon!!!!!111

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cant wait for next part ..

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