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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
rabz darling continue karo na...

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mudraswathi

Hey! Rabz... No words yaar...Iam so numb!!

Yet again you have done it... Getting into the soul and clearly visualizing what must be going on... you have expressed so well...

It must be something like, Ashutosh and Nidhi may not be knowing themselves in such a detail...
.you chose the beginning to be a tired day's ordeal of Nidhi... howmuch ever she was tired, her mind was completely blocked by the thoughts about Ashutosh... gave a perfect effect!!! She really understood what he went through when his classmate mentioned about her teenage son.


The heart pouring of Ashutosh was what a revelation...it took some time for me to read... but Girl! you have mastered this technique... Only you could write this way... the continuous flow of thoughts...I mean the clear thoughts... it was giving every minute angle of Ashutosh's love, pain for the samaj, pain for the insecurity (about what would she think if she comes to know), his inability to express...

that entire blue coloured part... I liked each and every sentence...I sat and started staring at Ashutosh at Husratganj park...just simply watched his delight when Nidhi came and revealed herself... and clapped at the union of this lovely couple...

It is strange that you havent written this till now...

You have such a command on the language...Clap


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Clap aap mujhe dedicate kiya... itna... I dont deserve dear...I ahve neither depth in thinking  nor clarity like you.

Please write more... and yes... one suggestion... is it possible to create a thread?

I liked this part very much..( of course I loved every bit of it..)

Apni hi cheez toh maangungi unse phir main kyu jhijhku'.par mera streepan mujhe rok leta hai..har baar'.mere andar ki aurat jaise chikti hai..chillati hai'.khud se ladti hai'Dr Ashutosh ke saamne ek Mukhota dale rehna ki jaise wo kewal mere ek senior hai..Kitna bada chall hai..mere wajood ka hissa hai wo'.Meri zindagi ka pehla aur aakhri pyaar'.

Umr mein Bade hai..toh kyaa mujhe koi fark nahi padta'.Pyaar ki nadi jis raaste se bhi guzre milti saagar mein hai..apni manzil par'


and yes... I loved the idea of email ID... I have great respect to this girl who worked hard in the right way to get to him... Ashutosh's character was described as a hard working, intelligent and dexterous surgeon..and this contemporary girl is the correct suitor for him... my respect towards Nidhi has increased four fold...Smile


Mudra Hug..after reading your words i m numb...you only inspired me to write...so this OS is dedicated to you...I have always written poems in hindi...writing OS is my first attempt and that too in KTLK forum...i m so happy...My mom was hindi teacher..so i have command over hindi..you can say its in my genes..LOLI will try to write OS more often...I get mental peace after writing...Thanks a ton for inspiring me..i will always owe this to you...Love you always...I am indebted...Heart

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aazeen02

Divya... U r a multi talented person yaar... From poetry to writing an OS... N ur other neumerous posts...

An excellent attempt of writing that u succeeded well in... M so proud that we have so many talented writers on this forum... Good luck honey...

Thanks Aazeen...Your words are so encouraging...Yup i love this forum..we have so many creative people here..They have inspired me...Smile

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:18pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by niniborn2rule

AWESOME OS...Clap

nini shukriya re..to ke bhalo laglo...Likhbo aar likhbo...Embarrassed...

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabzonedge

Originally posted by niniborn2rule

AWESOME OS...Clap

nini shukriya re..to ke bhalo laglo...Likhbo aar likhbo...Embarrassed...


ur bengali is soo sweet...Tongue

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sujatha.rao

Bohoti khoobsoorat...

Padke bohot mazaa aaya...jaise aapne un dono ke andar ghuskar unke mann ko pad liya ho...bohot hi intimate tha...sorry par main nahi jaanti intimate ko Hindi mei kya kehte hain...jaise hum readers ko unke bohot kareeb legaye te aap...ek taraf thoda jhijak bhi hua...I don't know if I am explaining myself right...par jaise hota hai jab hum kisi ke personal diary ko chup chup ke padte hain na...waise jhijak...

Aur jo shabd aapne chuna, aap ke style of writing, bohot hi badiya...aur padne ko man kar raha ta..please aur likhiye zaroor,,,shukriya..

P.S - Hindi meri matrubasha nahi hain...na hi maine formally sikha hain...phir bhi mera mann kiya ki aapke is post ki tareef Hindi mei hi karoon...agar kuch galat hai to phir gustakhi maaf!

Sujhatha...Aaap khud itni awesome writer hai...aapki style of writing marvellous hai...aap khud ek character ke mind ko capture kake likhte ho...aapse aisi taarif(apreciation) mana...is so exiting for me...aapki hindi bahut achchi hai...sach bol rahi hoon...har ek insaan khud ko express kar pata hai ek language mein..mere liye wo lang hindi hai...jab hindi mein likhti hoon toh flow aa jata hai writing mein...

Maafi toh aap mangiye mat..itni achchi tarah se likha hai aapne...main poori koshish karungi aur likhun...phi se shukriya for your kind words..Hug

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by niniborn2rule

Originally posted by rabzonedge

Originally posted by niniborn2rule

AWESOME OS...Clap

nini shukriya re..to ke bhalo laglo...Likhbo aar likhbo...Embarrassed...


ur bengali is soo sweet...Tongue

Aami jani kichu gondogol korechi banglay...emni aamar bondhu ra aamar maja odaye na...Ouch

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Umr mein Bade hai..toh kyaa mujhe koi fark nahi padta'.Pyaar ki nadi jis raaste se bhi guzre milti saagar mein hai..apni manzil par'
Divya di, above lines frm whole OS was js perfectly elaborating the Title,justifieng the Title.
Also aapne Hindi me likha wo b hume bahut bhaya hai,itne dino baad kuch Romantic padha hai or wo its like Treat to Read! Vaise E-mail wali baat ek acha Idea hai ,me b Ek Docter ban raha hun aur Kabhi Pyar-vyar hua to iss Idea ko jarur Use karunga!
Umar ka takaja nai dia Ashu ne, js simplicity wid Maturity thi. Dr.Nids also perfectly describd.

Some lines by me-
"Pyar ki Nadii Pyari si
Dil ki pukaar bus thi yahi,
Milen hum santo janam bus aisehi,
ki pyar b bole Nadii Pyar-biswaas ki"

Ab toh i'm thinking k ye Pyar jaldi ho jaye muje , i also want to knw whats dis Pyar-vyar? Kya aisa sach me hota hai?

Keep WRITING pls!Hug

Regards future docter DevEmbarrassed

Dev...Thanks for appreciating OS...Bachche meri Dua hai tumhe Pyaar ho jaye..tum bhi iss khubsurat emotions se guzro ...par pyaar me agar judaai mili toh bahut dard bhi hota hai...

Teri poetry bahut sweet hai...I will keep writing Dear...Embarrassed

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