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Mayur FF - It so happened #2...Part 49 Page 47 (Page 5)

vinan2050 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
congrats for the new thread band awsm update 

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love.mayurarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Congo for the new thread..may u keep writing on MN n keep finishing many more threads...I adore this ff because of its simplicity...the more I read this ff the more I fall in love with it...although I'm not at all regular in commenting but I read it regularly ...

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:51am | IP Logged
awsome part...

loved it...

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 6:42am | IP Logged as usual enlongating this FF a lot, no?LOL Keep reading if you'll canLOL

@Komz...a very Happy Birthday...though she never reads FFs, still dedicating this update to her since this is all I cud come up widLOL Wish you a very happy and successful life ahead Hug

                                                   Part 38:

Mayank found himself waking up from a weak sleep at the bed that he was provided to sleep in, in the hospital room. He went through that moment for a split second, the one that you suddenly wish that could turn out to be a nightmare after you have woken up from a sleep; the one which you have felt every moment as real but do want it to have fake presence in your life, being as undesired as it was to Mayank. Well, the discomfort of it not turning into a nightmare took him first, followed by a rush to go and check on Nupur by being right next to her, though her bed was just a feet apart from his. He plainly followed his rush.

Nupur seemed exactly in the same position as she was in when he had last closed his eyes, just a couple of hours ago that is. She was injected in exactly the same places as before, pointed needles were still dripping in her delicate skin, the bio-instruments still showed up her heartbeat pattern for very single second; he saw all that he could see yesterday. He wished he could see something that also showed up some improvement in her, he sighed because he knew he couldn't.

He went ahead and sat beside her while keeping his hand on her forehead and his other hand softly just touched her shoulders while he looked at her wounds again and realized that it could never get easy to look at them and believe all was well. He winced and went up to call the doctor trying to have them check on her immediately.

Yesterday's rude nurse wasn't there, rather a polite one told him that she had checked on her while he was asleep and Nupur would be fine. Mayank went ahead to enquire more about Nupur's condition and was glad when she did explain it to him to relieve him of his still-holding-him-up fears to a certain extent.

Mayank freshened up a little and went by Nupur who seemed to have woken up, to his delight.


Nupur again woke up with a throbbing pain in her left hand. Waking up to consciously be able to think, seemed like a task to her for today. She knew moving would ache her and so she stayed put trying to set her brain to present. What all had happened in the time she last remembered her eyes fully open?

Well, what hadn't happened!

She was on call with Mayank, she was dashed suddenly by some car that didn't seem in her vicinity only a while ago, and she had wanted to call out to Mayank. It was just a few seconds she knew but she could swear, it felt sort of a detaching feeling from him that she couldn't subside at all apart from the moment when extreme pain that she had ever felt, before the life went blank to her.

And right now she seemed to be in a hospital where no one around, not even Mayank. Her heart feared uselessly. She was suddenly conscious enough to remind herself of the day before, when she had seen their blurred selves. Still her eyes looked out to him. She even wanted to see Ma, Gunjan, Bauji; though she knew that the latter two couldn't be any near right now.

She moved her hand by a few millimeters when it seemed to have been feeling cramps to be staying in one position for long. Her whole body ached, she felt dirty, sweaty a bit and alone. It was not a very good feeling to be felt at all.

Before she could wet her eyes with a sudden emotion outburst, which was preparing itself deep in her, she saw her eyes go wet when she saw Mayank enter the room in a hurried fashion. He smiled his weakest, looked very serious, distraught. But what the hell, he was 'Mayank'.

 Nupur was sure she smiled back, her weakest too.


Mayank saw her woken up, ran to her side, saw her eyes welled up with tears. His bad attempt at a greeting smile faded away too. He ran to her, stooping at her he tried to hold onto her cheek and said in an assuring tone, "Hey! are fine"

Nupur got what she just wanted and then letting those weak tears fall became much easier in front of Mayank, it was a securing feeling.

Mayank moved his hand on her forehead while he said, "Shh...shh...Nupur...tum theek ho...okay?!!"

Nupur felt protected more by his words than she ever had felt. It felt stupid to shed more of those now and Nupur's tears stopped in an instant.

Mayank was already shaken up by the whole incident and Nupur's condition right now, touched him there. But he knew it was important to seem strong and act too, right now. Nupur seemed like a child right now, so insecure of her well being that she needed be told the best!

As he wiped her tears, his statement slowly turned its course reverse when he asked her, "Nupur...tum theek ho?"

Nupur winced without knowing and even though she wanted to say otherwise, she admitted the truth, "Mayank...bahut dard ho raha hai..." her voice shaky.

Mayank's face showed helplessness of a kind, she never knew he could potray.

Mayank assured her and called in the doctor again to make her have more pain killers. Nupur did feel much better in a very less time after absorbing those, but a little high headed. It made feel as if she is in a dream or life was just a little less real; a lot dizzy basically.

Mayank was all along by her side. She wished she could talk to him right now. There was so much to tell him. Not exactly stories this time, not even how she felt right now; just a little confession to him that he just stay there with her forever and that she just couldn't even imagine how she wouldn't share a long lifetime with him that she had just missed doing. There was so much to get started with in their life, so much to learn in togetherness, to get along with each other well and to open up to each other completely. How would she have missed living it all in this life, with him? And to tell him that love wasn't always best realized in the best of places and she had realized her own in an undefined moment even she didn't know when it actually occurred. She just wanted to tell him that she loved him more than she had ever realized that she could. Life's bigger setbacks sometimes went so deep so as to pull out your unknown needs, wants, self, love, dreams too.

But the problem was, she didn't know how and when to say all that! It was a hopeless confession to her ownself, before she saw all her pain, her dizziness and her helpless feeling get the better of her right then and there.

Mayank hastened her eyes to shut by keeping his own hand to cover them up and asked her to rest, just rest! God knows why she needed it so much?!!

Mayank went on a call as soon as he saw her drifting to sleep again.


Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL


Edited by Payal-15 - 29 July 2012 at 1:03pm

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..Surbhi.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Woowww. Just read the parts. Suuppperrbbb
Do pm me

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
it was so nice...inspite of their distraught conditions...they can make me smile (sometimes i do wonder how can i be such a sadist!!)

please continue soon ...
and thanks for the PM

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
@Surbhi...plz add me to your buddy list so that I can send you the PMs for the same...n thanks for liking itBig smile

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