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Mayur FF - It so happened #2...Part 49 Page 47 (Page 46)

aysha_mayur IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
First of all Sorry Pallu for being soo irregular with my commentsTongue...All thanks to my exams and studies that have made me eid ka chand here...But Mind It!!...I read all the parts...so no complaints ok!!!
Stern SmileLOL 
So here I m..back with my vishesh tippani...I know I know you like it...LOLLOL
 
That was BEAUTIFUL Pallu...really beautiful.ClapClap..Actually the last part made me a little senti while reading it...brought soo many memories back...LOLLOL
 
Finally they have actually started feeling the feeling of togetherness...of being together in love...showing the tender care to each other which each of them desire to have
 
The first part where Mayank loves being taken care of by Nupur...I loved it...Heart
 
and the last part was amazing...silence..closeness...passion...and a feeling called love...you potrayed them soo well...just small gestures and words are enogh to convey everything to each other...I loved it absolutely..besides being romantic...it had such a lovely essence of love in itHeart
 
and the final lines you wrote-----Today, they had learnt how their feelings could talk so conveniently with each other. And the best part was that everytime it seemed like a start, a new start with the other. A start for a foreseen happy life which was so looked-forward to. They didn't even know exactly when they fell in love…may be from the start, may be just a few days back…may be just now…
 
No wordsHeart...just brilliantHeartHeart

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Payal-15

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Hey when are you updating ???

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Payal-15

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aysha_mayur

First of all Sorry Pallu for being soo irregular with my commentsTongue...All thanks to my exams and studies that have made me eid ka chand here...But Mind It!!...I read all the parts...so no complaints ok!!!
Stern SmileLOL 
So here I m..back with my vishesh tippani...I know I know you like it...LOLLOL
 
That was BEAUTIFUL Pallu...really beautiful.ClapClap..Actually the last part made me a little senti while reading it...brought soo many memories back...LOLLOL
 
Finally they have actually started feeling the feeling of togetherness...of being together in love...showing the tender care to each other which each of them desire to have
 
The first part where Mayank loves being taken care of by Nupur...I loved it...Heart
 
and the last part was amazing...silence..closeness...passion...and a feeling called love...you potrayed them soo well...just small gestures and words are enogh to convey everything to each other...I loved it absolutely..besides being romantic...it had such a lovely essence of love in itHeart
 
and the final lines you wrote-----Today, they had learnt how their feelings could talk so conveniently with each other. And the best part was that everytime it seemed like a start, a new start with the other. A start for a foreseen happy life which was so looked-forward to. They didn't even know exactly when they fell in love'may be from the start, may be just a few days back'may be just now'
 
No wordsHeart...just brilliantHeartHeart
OMG you commented...Shocked woh bhi exam ke beech mein...thanks a lot Hug

as you already know I love your vishesh tipanni LOL
m glad you liked it...:D this comment motivates me to write the last partLOL

@underline...what memories did you talk about...?
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 10:03am | IP Logged
@Cuteritz, mayuloveu...I have been extremely busy in multiple things actually LOL will try updating soon...:D

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Loved ur updates, amazing part...beautifully written by you, the way you express their feelings is too good

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
continue soon

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 4:25am | IP Logged
waiting for update
its long u didnt update

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Shaffy, Kiran_rati...am here to update...I wont leave the FF unfinished LOL

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