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Mayur FF - It so happened #2...Part 49 Page 47 (Page 32)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:09am | IP Logged
oooh -hoo...thats a lovely part...;)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 7:44am | IP Logged
HEY PAYAL BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN PART..Clap
Was very happy to read d part where mayank finally says I LOVE U to nupur...Big smileWink
mayank in dis ff is d most wonderful person...loved d way u hav portrayed his feelings,his nature,his love... through dis ff..Heart
thanx fr d pm...Hug
continue soon
P.S: I m in love vid dis Mayank Sharma..HeartEmbarrassed

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Awesome update 
loved it lods
Beautifully written
loved it to dcoree
Finally!!!!!!! Mayank said it..Sigh!
Beautiful!
loved it lodsss
waaiting for the next part
love u lodss SIS...HugHugHug

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
amazing updt payal
finally mayank said it
waiting for nupur's reaction
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged
love you payal for this update!!! finally he said it.

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
awsom update .
specialy d last p[art touchd my heart deeply .
plz update soon ,i cant wait

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Thanks all...for liking the update...made posting this one worthwhile Hug

I'll post the next update soon Big smile

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged

@all...here is the next update, sooner this timeBig smile

I am getting so nervous to post from the last two updates, for no particular reasonLOL hota hai...LOL

Kindly ignore this and give in honest reviewsLOL


                                          Part 45:

Mayank looked at her utterly perplexed and moving extremely close, he slowly broke her pain as he pulled her into him for a hug and declared in her ear, "Are you crazy Nupur?...I love YOU!!!"

Nupur was shocked for one, numb for another, caught in the moment.

Mayank did held her as lightly as if he were hugging a feather while he said those words to her but Nupur was touched too deep to react.

As Mayank pulled out to look into her eyes, he saw her standing still for a moment looking blankly, as if unable to think and fresh tears rolled out of her eyes as she finally looked up to meet his gaze.

Mayank confessed in a new fashion this time, "Nupur…I love you…and I hate to see you cry…" and did away Nupur's tears with a slight touch of his fingers.

 

To tell someone that their best dream has just come true when they were not even informed by themselves that they had been dreaming huge would surely take some time to strike a balance within them.

Something visibly similar had happened to Nupur.

She knew all the reasons what made her love Mayank. Okay, most of them! Some were just oddly unreasonable still. She liked all that was good in him but strangely, now that she had looked back, she knew his scoldings for her were a sharp call for improvement, his stern attitude has its own charm and his silent deep gaze at her, was just as intriguing.

She knew all this for herself but how, when and why did Mayank start loving her was what made her silent for now. Did he really love her…HER?

Well, yes, atleast she knew what the last part meant, he used to always come around somehow whenever she gave in to tears, now that was good on his part and bad on hers.

 

However, her endearing moment was so nearby and she wanted to breathe and make sure that she had heard him right.

As she looked at him, he just read her mind and re-confessed to her with that very gaze that she was a fan of. It felt as if - as deep his eyes were….so much deep he could bore into hers too. She saw her reflection in them and now knew what extreme joy meant to heart.

In a moment, it was like that world had changed around her when nothing really had. Well who was she kidding, everything did change for her!

 

 

Mayank never knew so complicated a thought process Nupur had that would make her estimate so high before she realized that may be she started it all wrong, prima facie.

If he would have known, he would have told her long back that he loved her, because he did! Did that mean that she loved him too? Ofcourse, she did! Why else would she take all this to heart and plus he had seen its hint from sometime now.

He held her face in his hands, wiped her confused tears now, which stayed still, unsure of their position now that they had stopped due to her pain fading away but stayed still as Nupur took so much time to understand the moment of truth.

Mayank let himself go on, because he wanted to, very contrary to his earlier hesitations of not speaking emotions how-and why, "Nupur….shayad maine tumhe kabhi bataya nahi…shayad tum feel kar sako, iss tarah kabhi jataya nahi…par I do love you…a lot!!!"

Nupur lived her moment, cautious, slowly realizing that this was all happening for real. Mayank continued as he saw faith in her eyes, for him, slowly turning into a shine, and some subtle glow in her eyes - the way she looked at him, as if her eyes smiled, while she just looked at him, unblinking.

"Nupur…tumhe pata hai meri kya halat ho gayi thi jab tum wahan hospital mein thi…? I felt weak, insecure, unsupported…" He hated to think of those moments but saying all this was somehow lifting off the burden of his chest.

Her smiles made him smile, her mood lifted his, her childish and prompt reactions made him await those, her maturity sometimes surprised him, her presence made his heart go warm. She was as cute as she looked, he was sometimes even surprised at the way she handled his bossy acts and brought him down to earth, to herself. She beats his arrogance with her cut-in statements just right. And to add to it, her rapport with his Mom was one to look for, it made him happy, peaceful, laid back.

Life with her was one to look out for. Without her, he would be just too lonely to even give it a thought.

No, these weren't the enough reasons, above all that, he loved her beautiful heart. He believed that in terms of heart, they were completely alike, however different as people they might be.

 

The secret was, Nupur would give away anything at all to hear all this from him, but she was yet to slowly realize all this herself, in time; as they lived through ages. Just the way Mayank was still to realize that Nupur's every dream would soon breathe with him being the major part of all those, as it had already begun its course.

 

He wished he could convey it to her properly, what she meant to him.

He looked at her surprised face that told him that it was as hard for her to take in his words, as it was for him to speak those up.

He somehow did away with his in a simple cut-through statement, "I don't like to be weak Nupur….phir se aisa kabhi mat karna mere saath…okay?!!!"

Nupur denied with her head, now her tears, a fresh stock of new complicatedly mixed emotions of happiness and sadness.

Why the hell did she make him do so, as she saw his tears holding themselves tight in his eyes' perimeter? No tears, at all now - was her new mantra.

She shook her head, sorry for her act of making him do so. She wished she would have seen it all without putting him through this, but she was only human - her emotions testing her enough to leave no room to keep a check on what she wished to.

She went ahead and hugged him tight, forgetting the hurt that she made herself go through, just wanting to absorb his pain and never letting him go. How did he always manage to grow up in her eyes every single time, she wondered?

She again fell for her husband for the umpteenth time, just like that!

She pulled out a little, kissed his cheek, as he took in the surprise gladly and hugged him back.

She pulled out not speaking much, smiled to enroute her shyness that was now gripping her hard. Soon she saw him grin at her smile and she smiled wide too, rightfully.

His gaze now teased, penetrated and held her.

Suddenly diverting away from the topic though sticking to the topic Mayank said, "Waise Nupur…mujhe surprise ho raha hai?"

Nupur agreed with a smile but confused since there were a lot of surprises coming up today. She asked cutting it short, "Kis baat se?"

Mayank continued bringing about the bush, for a change, "Ki tumne realize kaise nahi kiya?"

"Kya?"

"Yahi…"

"Huh?"

"Hamara pyar….mera matlab…uss din tumne bhi mujhe kiss kiya tha….jab hum cross-word solve kar rahe the…yaad toh hoga hi naa…"

And officially Mayank was back. Nupur just knew it that he had to bring it on her. Hello! He had kissed her first and she knew that she remembered it right. How could she forget her first kiss ever?

Nupur tried arguing, not being able to though, "Par tumne bhi toh…matlab…"

Mayank smirked and said, "Maine kab mana kiya…par tumne bhi toh Nupur…"

Nupur looked away as Mayank rejoiced his upper-hand again to the situation and also his cute wife getting pink beauty spots again.

Mayank smiled, in a mean-dashing way and Nupur hit him on the arm exclaiming, "Mayank!" and it was soon followed by another exclaim, "Ouch!"

Finally Nupur realized that the cloud of love wasn't as pain-proof as she thought it was. Her hit to him, hit her back and she saw her hand feeling a shiver effect while Mayank spoke in panic, "Nupur…usme se blood nikal raha hai…"pointing to her left hand while she saw the source of her pain.

He told her off again, "Isiliye tumhari baat nahi sunni chahiye…dusro ko apni baaton mein ghuma deti ho…aur apne strength ko test karne ka toh tumhe bada shaukh hai naa…kya zaroorat hai aise behave karne ki jaise kuch hua hi nahi hai jab sab kuch gadbad hai?...thode din shanti se careful rahogi toh tumhara kuch bigad nahi jayega…", he took in her role for a change.

Nupur brought a break to his train of words, "Arrey Mayank tum phir se aise…abhi toh itne pyar se…"

Mayank doubled his stern look and clarified, "Tum mauka kahan deti ho mujhe…ek toh…"

Nupur put her fingers on his lips and said, "Tum chinta mat karo…ab se main apna pura khayal rakhungi…Ma ka aur tumhara bhi…"

Her eyes spoke of commitment, and conviction.

She did that again to him, surprised him and shut him up, in just another new way of hers. He was glad to shut up and smile and cater to her first-aid needs.

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