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Mayur FF - It so happened #2...Part 49 Page 47 (Page 29)

-Anila- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...
loved it to d coreee
waiting eagerly for the next part...
love ya SIS...HugHugHug

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Mini4 Senior Member

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
nice updateThumbs Up...
i love d way u hav described d beautiful bond f love dat s present between nupur n shilpaClap...(She should be awarded a perfect 
"mother-in-law award)Star!!!
seems like nupur s currently suffering from emotional suffocation about who d hell s Mayank's first love!!!TongueWink
waiting to read how nupur is gonna confront mayank on dis topic f his first love...Day Dreaming
thanx fr d pm!Hug
continue soon!

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Passion_17 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 3:48am | IP Logged
it was a nice update missed mayur a lot in it...hope d nxt update has more of mayur in it...Big smilecontinue soon...thanx 4 d pm...Big smile

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love.mayurarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 6:52am | IP Logged
lovely update

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
plz continue soon

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
sweet update Payal  :)

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 12:01am | IP Logged

@all...I hope I m not too late for the update this onceLOL

btw do comment and tell me how this one turned out, I am very skeptical about this one...soch rahi thi post karun or I shud re-write this oneLOL

although it has most of the things I did look forward to put in there...LOL

For now...ReAdBig smile

                                                Part 44:


It was quite late in the night when Nupur realized that she just couldn't sleep. She didn't even know if Mayank was at home already or not. She decided not to ask a sleeping Gunjan beside her and to check on him, herself.

Besides, that wasn't the point, she plainly and clearly 'wanted' to meet him somehow, and it was high time already for her.

As she reached the door of their bedroom, she saw him. There he was arranging for his bed on the couch of the living room, in his casual black t-shirt and grey pajamas. Didn't he just look so awesomely handsome in almost anything that he wore…no that can't be a question!

Nupur stood there watching him for a while. How organized he was in everything that he did! The way he had arranged the couch for sleeping, it seemed like a good bed; and it didn't suggest any discomfort even by the looks of it.

He did all well by himself, did he even need her foranything at all?


As Mayank finished arranging for his bed and his gaze moved in Nupur's direction, he was surprised to see Nupur standing there; looking deep in thoughts that pulled all his attention to her; still bearing bandages, wearing a 3/4th night dress, with her hair tied in a tight pony tail and had an unrelaxed expression on her face, though she beamed as she saw that he had noticed her presence.

He asked automatically, "Nupur, tum yahan?"

Nupur smiled while replying sarcastically, "Tum nahi aaye naa…" This pinched her more than she thought it would, to put it into words. Yes, it wasn't his fault to come to think of it that Mayank hadn't had time to meet her since ages. Yes, he always took care of her, more than even necessary sometimes; but the fact that it could be more of a responsible behavior that made him do that rather than his affection for her, that she was looking for, diluted the whole meaning of her existence in his life all the more.


He walked upto her to support her to walk towards the couch.

She was all that always, he had well noticed; she never asked for support, never acted too fragile even when she was - like right now or never did she demand too much care out of him and that made him more curious, alert towards her needs.


Nupur tried to smile and said, "Arrey Mayank, ab main bilkul theek hoon….koi tension ki baat nahi hai…"

While Mayank still couldn't leave her till she sat down, with him beside her; Nupur felt curious.

She felt happier to just be beside him; he had some aura around him that somehow always relaxed her a bit, no matter what!

Did he even miss him one bit? 

To say that she had missed him was so incomplete a statement. She had cherished him, missed him, respected him, grown to know him, loved him, dreamt of him would be a more proper gist of what Nupur had gone through in some petty long days that she was living at present.

It was a very different emotion that she was going through right now; what to convey to him out of all this was hard to conclude.

She had so much collected in her heart and his silent deep gaze were inviting her even more heart skips; and with him so close, it was easy to go ahead and hug him tight. Her wounds hurt a little after being pressed upon and a little hurt she was uneasy insecurity that came with Mayank just plainly holding her back. She held him a little longer but Mayank was as still as rock today; conveying that he hardly understood her plea. She finally had to pull back embarrassed at her own self.


Mayank was shocked a little by her action. She didn't say anything at all and just held onto him. He was a bit scared to hug her back when her wounds and bandages glared at him well. Some of it still had blood stains, the reason he felt more alarmed. How could Nupur hurt herself so easily?

He could just hug her back without any hint of hurting her with his actions.

While she pulled back, he just had to ask, as he saw her eyes distressed, "Kya hua Nupur ?"


Nupur felt so stupid being asked so.

What had actually happened? Nothing!

Why was she suddenly being so emotional and vulnerable to him - some incomprehensibly stupid emotion was playing at her!

What was she going to say to him? Now, that was a good question!


Nupur smiled to lie, "Kuch khaas nahi…woh aise hi…"

Mayank asked checking her temple, "Tabiyat toh theek hai naa?...kuch pain kar raha hai kya…" he continued while he scanned her eyes. She was surely suffering for some reason unknown to him.

Nupur took his hand off her temple and said, "Maine kaha naa ki main theek hoon…"

Mayank could just utter, "Huh?"

Now Mayank wasn't at fault actually. She suddenly turns up and without any explaination or hint hugs him to her heart's content, seems emotional and denies all possibly valid reasons flatly. Now that's Nupur for you!

Nupur suddenly suggested something feasible, "Mayank…thanks…tum ne jo kuch bhi mere liye kiya….shuru se lekar ab tak…thanks!!!" She smiled genuinely at that, this was one of the more things that she wanted to tell him.

Nupur was confusing Mayank a lot today. Why did she keep on saying 'thanks' to him 'n' number of times; she didn't need to, even once.

He did all that because he would always do that for Nupur, this was like a reflex action for him, and to be honest, he did that all for himself; he loved her right!

Mayank gave her a stern look again, "Nupur…phir tum se tum…for the last time…you don't need to…"

Nupur cut him short, "Par main kahungi…when I want to…samjhe Mr. Modest!"


Nupur suddenly got up and walked towards the window, pulling Mayank's attention to a sudden shower of rain outside.

Nupur declared to the room behind her, "Yeh Mumbai ki bearish aur Mumbai ke ladko ka koi bharosa nahi…jaane kab meherbaan ho jaaye…"

Mayank followed suite and said standing next to her,"Right…yeh Mumbai ki bearish aur Nupur ke mood ka koi bharosa nahi…jaane kab course-of-action change kar lein?"

Nupur laughed at his analogy and he laughed back in sync with her.

Nupur suddenly looked out and seemingly lost somewhere, smiled.

Mayank smiled with her infectious smile and asked, "AB kya hua Nupur?" with a bit of uncertainity and raised eye-brows.

Nupur said, "Mayank tumhe yaad hai…jab hum pehli baar miley the…aisi hi bearish thi naa…tab main auto ki line mein khadi thi aur tumne mera mobile girne se bachaya tha…"

Mayank pulled her out of her thoughts by saying, "Wrong!...pehli baar nahi woh hamari dusri mulaqat thi…pehli baar tum mere auto mein aa kar baithi thi aur mujhse argue kar rahi thi…"

Nupur furrowed her brows and said, "Arrey haan!..." and Mayank continued in a matter-of-factly tone, "Aur tum dono din office ke liye 1 hour late thi…!!!" and he held on to his expression of dis-believe which he had given her that very day - how could one be so late for their office every day!

Nupur defended herself, "Do din hi toh late thi main…par tum toh mujhse aisa bartaav kar rahe the jaise mere boss ke jasoos ho aur abhi khud hi mujhe naukri se nikal doge…"

Mayank stated, "Nupur please, main tumhare valid reasons achche se jaanta hoon…waise maine aisa bhi kuch nahi kaha tha…aur…main tumhe jaanta hi kitna tha…"

Nupur ignored the first part very conveniently and asked with a certain innocence, "Aur ab…ab jaante ho?"

Mayank leaned in a little and spoke a bit smiling, meeting her innocent gaze, "Lag-bhag…"

Nupur smiled a bit unsure, went a little red which was out of her control and came back to earth preparing a question in her mind, as she spoke, unsure, "Mayank….yaad hai…tumne mujhe kaha tha…ki…main tumhe pasand hoon…"

Mayank tried to smile teasingly to show-off while he was being self-conscious a bit, "Haan…toh?"

Nupur now asked something that left Mayank clueless for a while, "Toh kya tumhe main…umm….usse bhi jyada pasand hoon?"

Finally, Nupur had asked it and she felt her heart beat hauntingly fast while she looked at a confused Mayank.

Mayank asked shaking his head, "Kya?" He again shook his head absent mindedly and asked, "Kaun?"


Nupur smiled in a painful-sarcastic way and turned around to leave since now she half tossed the possibility of skipping the answer to her own question.

Mayank didn't know what exactly was going on and why was Nupur suddenly behaving so strange and mysterious today…she usually spoke to the point…and what did she even mean?

As he held her hand to stop her from moving away…he turned her carefully towards him and trying not to losse his patience, putting her hair locks behind her ears, he asked gently, "What is the matter with you Nupur?"

Nupur just looked at him with a helplessly and asked a bit angrily, "Who tumne jo kaha tha uss din…who ladki…jisse tum…py-pyaar karte ho…" tears failed her as she felt a pain develop in her chocked throat.

It was just so hard to voice it, how could she imagine to hear all that she could possible hear ahead of it?

She somehow put her courage at stake to voice more, "Tumhe koi aur pasand tha Mayank toh tumne…"

Mayank looked at her utterly perplexed and moving extremely close, he slowly broke her pain as he pulled her into him for a hug as he declared in her ear, "Are you crazy Nupur?...I love YOU!!!"


Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL


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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 12:54am | IP Logged
finally he says it
beautifully written

Edited by clustersofstar - 23 September 2012 at 12:54am

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