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Mayur FF - It so happened #2...Part 49 Page 47 (Page 19)

drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
pls update

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged

@all...sorry for being late once update will be jaldi pakka pakkaBig smile

this is again a past wala update and last one at that...kuddos to U'll for bearing wid my past present confusion yet againLOL

Thanks for all the comments...sorry m not able to reply them this once ut loved them all...thanks Hug

I hope U'll like the update!!!Big smile

                                                 Part 41:

She smiled encouragingly, raising her eyebrows and Mayank smiled back with the slightest nod of his head. And then in an instant, he moved ahead and in a prompt action, he kissed Nupur on her smiling lips. It was so instantaneous that even he was slightly shocked with his action but what shocked him more was that Nupur kissed him back too, surprising herself.

Just like a moment ago, now it was not so easy for Nupur to look into his eyes, though they were now too as much close with their faces being exactly a few inches apart, as it had been like a while ago as when they were so involved in playing their crossword together. Nothing much had changed though from that time, apart from them now playing a new game with each other; a game of stealing glances, a game of deep insights about the other, a game of avoiding to talk of their own action because the other's mattered more!

Nupur suddenly knew, she just knew that Mayank had been looking at her amused and she was almot sure that he must have a teasing smirk stuck on his face. Well yes, she hadn't seen it but she was almost dead sure about that.But then, more than anything that fumed her. Oh yes, it did!

One, that told her that he was in a much stronger postion than her and that she was the one who was weak kneed in front of him. Two, it told her that since he didn't have anything to say to her, probably, he just did't have anything to say to her. Nothing at all?!!

Now this was a bad sign. She knew proximity came naturally in marriage, even in arranged marriage for that matter, but that bothered her. Suddenly she wanted love involved in it, from his side most precisely.

She had never actually thought that she wanted this but now she did; most unexpectedly and most naturally she did.

And there came the question, did she love him?

Now that marred all her complaints that were rising in her. She didn't know, that was confusing to think about. She knew that she had some feelings for him which she wasn't too sure that they meant love.

Well, now she could easily be a hypocrite, she chided herself.

She looked at Mayank and making an excuse, excused herself from there, not beig too sure what her expressions were that he faced!


Mayank hadn't estimated Nupur to be so complicated as she seemed just now to him. In one moment she looked shy, in another she looked angry, confused and then the diversiy of her expressions out did all that he could guess and assume. And then next he saw her walking away on the pretext of something silly.

No he wasn't going to propose to her, that wasn't his idea ever. It was just a good thing that love prevailed and he was just happy cherishing that with her but right now he was't too sure about her for now.It was strange, the girl who spoke so clearly and in detail, about her thoughts and was always outspoken about herself, more so eversince he had started talking more to her, was now suddenly seeming too mysterious to crack.

He realized he wanted her to speak of her such dreams now. Was she even happy with him?


Nupur felt very vague about everythings, she jut stood there near the kitchen stand doing almost nothing lost in her own thoughts. At present, she just hated the wall of silence that existed between them. Sure it had grown too strong than anyone of them realized. But to also tell herself the truth, it was just so hard to tell him that she felt for him and later to learn that he didn't; she couldn't think of a reason that would tell her that he did. Though now he surely seemed to like her, she had certainly noticed a change in him, the one that she liked! He spoke more to her, was there around her more, and was closer to her more than ever. Could it be possible that he would love her or did already?

She sighed! She didn't know what her problem was right now. She had to determine if he loved her as well as if she loved him too! Both were hard, damn hard! She wished if Mayank could give her a little help there? When she imagined him either giving her a strict stern look or laughing hard on her like he was today laughing at her when he saw her solving the 'Bollywood crosword'. She had to remind herself that Mayank wasn't the kind to consider something mundane like 'Love'. What was she even thinking considering asking him about the same?

She kicked this thought out and tried to engage herself in cleaning up the kitchen cupboard which suddenly seemed very dirty and a nice thing to do to stop her head spinning with questions!


It was night, Shilpa Sharma had gone sleeping just a while ago and Nupur walked over to their room suddenly realizing how awkward she had made things for herself. However, she tried to behave casual, but couldn't somehow.

Strangely, Mayank smiled at her trying to make herself comfortable as he said, "Tum kahan thi abhi...tumhari favourite movie aa rahi hai..." indicating the television screen to her which moved the images of one of her favourite movies actually.

Nupur smiled and said, "Woh bana rahi thi...mere sar mein dard hai!"

Mayank teased her as he always did, "Ab dimaag par itna zor dogi toh yahi hoga naa...apni favourite movie dekho, abhi 10 minute mein saara sar dard gayab ho jayega..."

Strangely, Nupur too just settled with a reply, "Acha?"

Mayank just had to ask, "Nupur tum theek toh ho na?"

Nupur replied back smiling, "Haan!"

Mayank looked at her hand and asked, "Toh coffee kahan hai?"

Nupur bit her tongue and went back running to get it. Forgetfulness gripped her whenever she was lost in her own thoughts; not one of her best traits again. How would she ever be able to pull off a good image in front of Mayank? She took a long breath and carried two cups of coffee in her hand back to Mayank and handling him one said, "Woh main jaane hi wali thi coffee lene..."

Mayank couldn't decide if he could ever finalize which of her expressions, he found the cutest! Probabaly now, probably yet to come!

He took the coffee that she was handing over to him and said, 'Thanks!'

As he took it, lights went off.

He heard Nupur saying in a little panic, "Oh light?!!"

Mayank assured her, trying to speak in the direction he felt that she was, owing to the mild moon light from the window, "Nupur darro mat...main candle leke aata hoon...aur Ma ke room mein bhi I'll open the windows,shayad woh so gayi hain..."

Nupur replied back instantly, "Main dar thodi na rahi hoon Mayank..." and taking an advantage of the darkness she said over-riding her half scared expressions, "sirf andhera hi toh hai..."

She wished she could take back her words now, since he was gone suddenly and was taking forever to com back to her now. She went near the window and sat there waiting for Mayank to come back and to try not to think of any of the horror scenes that she was somehow managing to remember right now with utter bad timings.

Mayank came back, finally. He followed her silhouette and walked to her saying, "Candles toh shayad khatam ho gaye hain...nahi miley...Maa toh itne adhere mein bhi chain ki neend so rahi hai..."

Nupur spoke before she knew,"Acha?" How could manage to sleep in complete darkess with none around?

She was glad that Mayank sat beside her at the window sill.

She grabbed his arm and moved closer when he said, "Nupur...kahin jaana mat haan...woh kya hai naa 'mujhe' darr lag raha hai..."

She hit his arm and said, "Mayank...mera mazak mat udao...ab lag gaya darr toh lag gaya naa..hamesha nahi lagta darr...ek toh itne kisse sune hain maine,darawane...tumhe kya pata..."

Mayank laughed and said, "Tell me one of your stories..."

Nupur exclaimed, "Itne andhere mein?"

Mayank laughed and said, "Tumhe usme bhi darr lag raha hai Nupur...?"

Nupur just had to defend herself now, "Nahi toh...mujhe toh laga ki tum darr jaoge...par theek hai suno..."

Mayank listened to several of her stories and announced, "Nupur...yeh sab sirf kahaaniyan hai...please don't believe them...sab bani-banayi stories hain..."

Nupur replied back, "Haan tum toh super hero ho tumhe darr nahi lagta..."

Mayank replied back, "Ab nahi lagta toh nahi lagta darr"in her style and continued"tum kyun darti ho?" and flicked her nose.

Nupur suddenly realized how close he was and how easily she had forgotten everything about her thoughts suddenly. She tried to ignore it again and said, "Kaha naa mujhe hamesha darr nahi lagta...woh toh aaj..."

Mayank so loved to tease her now. She was coming across as an adorable kid to him. Besides, he liked the way she always seeked comfort in him in these times, it gave him some different proud feeling.

He moved towards her and asked, "Kyun aaj kya special tha?"

Why couldn't he just leave digging into her in these regards??!

Nupur looked back and said, "Main toh bas yeh dekh rahi thi ki tumhe darr lagta hai ki nahi...mujhe nahi lagta..."

Mayank then asked something that made Nupur go speechless, "Aur isiliye tumne itne zor se mera haath bhi pakad kar rakha hai naa?"

Before Nupur could defend herself, he held her hand that was holding his arm, assuring her that she need not explain more!

There was silence for a moment!

Suddenly Nupur broke the silence with the most odd question she had ever asked Mayank, "Mayank tumhe kabhi kissi se pyar hua hai?" She felt her heart race while she waited for his reply.

Mayank spoke truthfully about Nupur, hiding that it was about her since he was more interested in her reason of asking this,"Haan! Par woh toh shadi se pehle ki baat thi...ab kyun pooch rahi ho?"

Nupur felt something heavy fall on her heart as she heard that. He was right, why had she asked it!

Nupur told him off about it, "Aise hi...par phir tumne ussi se shadi kyun nahi kar li...tum bhi khush hote woh bhi..."

She said this and walked away from him in an instant, when she heard him say behind her back, "Arre Nupur...tumhe achanak kya hua?"

Nupur announced to him while she walked over to the bed, "Kuch nahi...mujhe neend aa rahi hai...waise bhi kal office jao warna tumhara computer jaisa dimaag kal kaam kaise karega...?"

Mayank was expecting an answer from her rather than her cut-off tone.He realized that she wouldn't admit the reason but now he wanted to tell her that it was her.

She acted so well to be asleep as he went beside her. He decided that he would have to wait till he gets to tell her that.

Yes, admitting to his love wasn't such harm after all though he had never felt such a need to admit it earlier, now he had wanted to. It would make him happy and he guessed Nupur too.


Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL

Edited by Payal-15 - 26 August 2012 at 1:02pm

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Irum. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 8:33am | IP Logged
nice Update.
Thnx for pm.

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shafy_MN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged
awsome part..
Is this was reason behind their fight..

Misunderstands are always leads to big big figths..

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 8:42am | IP Logged
lovely update

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--Sanchu-- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Oh my!!
this was so cute and romantic :)
the ambience against which u set the situation made it amazing...
i could vividly imagine Mayank and Nupur sitting by the window in the faint light of the stars and moon that was ROMANTIC

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 9:11am | IP Logged
awesome ff yr well done keep it up yr 

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 9:18am | IP Logged
wonderful n cute update
there so adorable

Mayank sharma... kuch nhi hosakta in ka.. galat adhori baat..
tu nupur islyn ghusa hai

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