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Mayur FF - It so happened #2...Part 49 Page 47 (Page 14)

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayuloveu

wow so much cute . very very romantic. I love it. 
Thanks dearBig smile

Originally posted by cutiepie12

OMG their fisrt kiss...awww sooo cute Day Dreaming
totally in mayur dreamland Heart


beautiful update
loved every detail of it

tc

Thanks Cutiepie...m glad U could look into the details and like them too Hug

Originally posted by Faria.

Very very cute part Payal.wonerful. loved it so much.

Thanks Faria Hug
Its so good to see you commenting here after longBig smile Howz U..?..n where r U gumsum aajkalLOL

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gopi06

cute & sweet updt payal
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Thank you GopiBig smile

Originally posted by clustersofstar

such a cute update

thanks for replay on comments its feels good that you read comments
ThanksHug
Ofcos I read the comments n always look forward to read them allBig smile

Originally posted by --WHATEVER--

beautiful update Payal..   :)

Thanks AnjaliBig smile


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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kheya-mayur

cute
Thanks KheyaBig smile

Originally posted by kiran_arti

VERY CUTE UPDATE
CONTI SOON
THANX FOR THE PM
Thanks Kiran...Hug 
Yes! will update soonLOL

Originally posted by shafyyy

That was very very nice part.
Now there marriage have taken a new turn.. 

Thanks again ShaffyBig smile
Their marriage...yes...it did take a turn then but m not sure if that is what is looked for by allLOL


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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Awesome update.
Thanks BhawnaBig smile

Originally posted by shafyyy

loved the song...
Haina...even I like that song a lot!LOL

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

nice 
sweet 
cute
romantic
awesome
magical
so beautiful ... amazing writting.
continue soon
thanks for thep m.



Thanks thanks...m so happy U could like it in so many ways Hug
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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mini4

hey PAYAL!!!Hug
A very cute update!!!loved d way u write d cute moments between mayank n nupur so beautifully..great imagination n wonderful story telling skilll!Day Dreaming
loved d way mayank was initially trying to hide his actual feelings for nupur when he saw her in saree...n den d fighting n sharing during crossword solving was really beautifully written!!n d end their kiss was xtra special one!!Embarrassed 
lovely choise of song from d movie just married!Thumbs Up
thanx fr d reply u gav fr my previous comment.Big smile..
thanx fr d pm...Hug
continue soon!
Thanks Mini Hug
my imagination is just a fragment of what real MN were...love them Heart
All these parts I was dying to write actually, kabse soch ke rakha tha and so m extra happy since U'll liked itLOL

That song naa...I always loved it...n MN pe toh saare gaame aur bhi beautiful lagte hai naaBig smile

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arti_17

Omg they kissed Shocked Clearly nt expected Tongue I think dis was d best update of ur ff... Big smile It had mayur convos,as 2 my liking LOL Sweet mayur moments..their nok-jhoks...d shocks dat mayank was giving 2 nupur n all d readers LOL esp dat casual remark 2 nupur...'tum roz aise hi toh hug karke soti ho..' LOL Poor nupur...n d song blended perfectly wid d update...do continue soon in d same manner...thnx 4 d pm...
-shilpa Smile
Yes Shilpa they didLOL
Hmm...it was not expected I seeLOL but then when U look at how their relation is developing in an uneven pattern, U can expect the unexpected LOL

I know U asked for MN convosBig smile n I said its coming up in the next update itselfLOL
m glad that U liked itBig smile
about Mayank's casual remark...I think Mayank could say that U knowLOL
In the same manner?...uh...agle kuch updates aise nahi hone wale hain actually...don't wanna kill me okay!LOL

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 2:00am | IP Logged
awwwe...so cute n romantic update

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Awww such a such a lovely update Pallu..I love such kinds of sweet and romantic moments between the two...specially in ur FF...coz its happening soo graduallyEmbarrassed...like it should be!!Embarrassed
 
and that part when he says "mujhe kya pata chalna chahiye??" coming a little close to her...I love this kind of naughty Mayank...making her go speechless...and making us also go speechlessDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
and night wala part was also sooo romantic...when loved this line--- she also wanted to tell him that like today, she wanted them to be a team always, always talking and sharing their two lives as one.
 
Sooo beautiful!!
Me enjoyed the Crossword part too...reminded me of apne asli wale Mayur...I culd actually imagine the two of themDay Dreaming
 
and the kiss in the end..Omggg...that was sach mein unexpected...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
Pallu..Update ab jaldi se..and I m really sorry for commenting soo late

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