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Mayur FF - It so happened #2...Part 49 Page 47 (Page 13)

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
nice 
sweet 
cute
romantic
awesome
magical
so beautiful ... amazing writting.
continue soon
thanks for thep m.


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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged
hey PAYAL!!!Hug
A very cute update!!!loved d way u write d cute moments between mayank n nupur so beautifully..great imagination n wonderful story telling skilll!Day Dreaming
loved d way mayank was initially trying to hide his actual feelings for nupur when he saw her in saree...n den d fighting n sharing during crossword solving was really beautifully written!!n d end their kiss was xtra special one!!Embarrassed 
lovely choise of song from d movie just married!Thumbs Up
thanx fr d reply u gav fr my previous comment.Big smile..
thanx fr d pm...Hug
continue soon!

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Omg they kissed Shocked Clearly nt expected Tongue I think dis was d best update of ur ff... Big smile It had mayur convos,as 2 my liking LOL Sweet mayur moments..their nok-jhoks...d shocks dat mayank was giving 2 nupur n all d readers LOL esp dat casual remark 2 nupur...'tum roz aise hi toh hug karke soti ho..' LOL Poor nupur...n d song blended perfectly wid d update...do continue soon in d same manner...thnx 4 d pm...
-shilpa Smile

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteritz

extremely cute & romantic Embarrassed
i loved it
thanks for the pm
update soon

Thanks Cuteritz Hug

Originally posted by Maria.

very cute part Payal..well written!!! loved it:)

Thank you Maria...am glad U enjoyed reading it Hug
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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Wow just loved this part...
Honestly can anyone be much cuter than this two...NEVER EVER...they r so unpredictable...first mayank ws admiring his wife, and half-hugged her at the end...on the other side nupur ws playing with his hands and when he caught her red-handed she turned into a blushing queen...
And aww the last part ws so cute...Loved it..
Beautifully written...
Cont soon...

PS: Thanks for praising my vm too...i love getting appreciation for my MN vms as they r SPECIAL to me..:)
Thanks Auroni Hug

Honestly, there can be no one cuter than our MNLOL
m so glad U liked reading the update Big smile

About that VM...yeah well U deserve a big round of applause for that one...do make more on MNEmbarrassed
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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Sanchu--

THIS PART WAS SUPERB and not to forget damn cute too :)
please continue soon...we would be waiting for more such cute parts :)
Thanks Sanchu...Big smile

Originally posted by shafyyy

that was so sweet and cute update...
Very nicely you described Nupur's feelings 
when she was close to Mayank and also nicely described Mayank's feelings...
Loved it..
That Crossward part was also very nice..
and speacially part.. which instant They kissed each other,...

nice . very very nice part
Thanks a lot Shaffy Hug
You always generously comment on the updatesBig smile...makes me feel like a writer sometimesLOL
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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

OMG this was the most beautiful and amazing part of this ff...
i just adore they way they are...

loved it to core...
they way the talk argue and love... and he is dam causal ways.. that make him wht he is...
lovely


Thanks for such an overwhelming response Fiza Hug

I just hoped that you'll would like itLOL

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Irum.

OMG !!!!Their first kiss.
Beautifully written.
Thnx for pm.
Yup their first kissLOL
ThanksBig smile

Originally posted by -SupriyaluvsMN-

Such an cute n sweet update payal! i'm stil having smile on my face!Big smileDay Dreaming
ur ff is so full of small sweet moments of MN.. which is so reminds me of  our MN!Embarrassed 
do update soon!Tongue

M happy that I could bring that smile on ur face SupriyaBig smile
They remind U of MN? Wow that's a big complimentEmbarrassed I always remember MN while writing on them :))
Thanks Hug

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