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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

cute

Thanks Kheya๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: kiran_arti

VERY CUTE UPDATE

CONTI SOON
THANX FOR THE PM

Thanks Kiran...๐Ÿค— 
Yes! will update soon๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: shafyyy

That was very very nice part.

Now there marriage have taken a new turn.. 


Thanks again Shaffy๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Their marriage...yes...it did take a turn then but m not sure if that is what is looked for by all๐Ÿ˜†


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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Awesome update.

Thanks Bhawna๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: shafyyy

loved the song...

Haina...even I like that song a lot!๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

nice 

sweet 
cute
romantic
awesome
magical
so beautiful ... amazing writting.
continue soon
thanks for thep m.



Thanks thanks...m so happy U could like it in so many ways ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Mini4

hey PAYAL!!!๐Ÿค—

A very cute update!!!loved d way u write d cute moments between mayank n nupur so beautifully..great imagination n wonderful story telling skilll!๐Ÿ˜
loved d way mayank was initially trying to hide his actual feelings for nupur when he saw her in saree...n den d fighting n sharing during crossword solving was really beautifully written!!n d end their kiss was xtra special one!!๐Ÿ˜ณ 
lovely choise of song from d movie just married!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
thanx fr d reply u gav fr my previous comment.๐Ÿ˜ƒ..
thanx fr d pm...๐Ÿค—
continue soon!

Thanks Mini ๐Ÿค—
my imagination is just a fragment of what real MN were...love them โค๏ธ
All these parts I was dying to write actually, kabse soch ke rakha tha and so m extra happy since U'll liked it๐Ÿ˜†

That song naa...I always loved it...n MN pe toh saare gaame aur bhi beautiful lagte hai naa๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: arti_17

Omg they kissed ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Clearly nt expected ๐Ÿ˜› I think dis was d best update of ur ff... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ It had mayur convos,as 2 my liking ๐Ÿ˜† Sweet mayur moments..their nok-jhoks...d shocks dat mayank was giving 2 nupur n all d readers ๐Ÿ˜† esp dat casual remark 2 nupur...'tum roz aise hi toh hug karke soti ho..' ๐Ÿ˜† Poor nupur...n d song blended perfectly wid d update...do continue soon in d same manner...thnx 4 d pm...
-shilpa ๐Ÿ˜Š

Yes Shilpa they did๐Ÿ˜†
Hmm...it was not expected I see๐Ÿ˜† but then when U look at how their relation is developing in an uneven pattern, U can expect the unexpected ๐Ÿ˜†

I know U asked for MN convos๐Ÿ˜ƒ n I said its coming up in the next update itself๐Ÿ˜†
m glad that U liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
about Mayank's casual remark...I think Mayank could say that U know๐Ÿ˜†
In the same manner?...uh...agle kuch updates aise nahi hone wale hain actually...don't wanna kill me okay!๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
awwwe...so cute n romantic update

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww such a such a lovely update Pallu..I love such kinds of sweet and romantic moments between the two...specially in ur FF...coz its happening soo gradually๐Ÿ˜ณ...like it should be!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
and that part when he says "mujhe kya pata chalna chahiye??" coming a little close to her...I love this kind of naughty Mayank...making her go speechless...and making us also go speechless๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
 
and night wala part was also sooo romantic...when loved this line--- she also wanted to tell him that like today, she wanted them to be a team always, always talking and sharing their two lives as one.
 
Sooo beautiful!!
Me enjoyed the Crossword part too...reminded me of apne asli wale Mayur...I culd actually imagine the two of them๐Ÿ˜
 
and the kiss in the end..Omggg...that was sach mein unexpected...๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
 
Pallu..Update ab jaldi se..and I m really sorry for commenting soo late
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Posted: 11 years ago
So awsome part..
loved it..๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

awwwe...so cute n romantic update


Thanks dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: aysha_mayur

Awww such a such a lovely update Pallu..I love such kinds of sweet and romantic moments between the two...specially in ur FF...coz its happening soo gradually๐Ÿ˜ณ...like it should be!!๐Ÿ˜ณ

 
and that part when he says "mujhe kya pata chalna chahiye??" coming a little close to her...I love this kind of naughty Mayank...making her go speechless...and making us also go speechless๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
 
and night wala part was also sooo romantic...when loved this line--- she also wanted to tell him that like today, she wanted them to be a team always, always talking and sharing their two lives as one.
 
Sooo beautiful!!
Me enjoyed the Crossword part too...reminded me of apne asli wale Mayur...I culd actually imagine the two of them๐Ÿ˜
 
and the kiss in the end..Omggg...that was sach mein unexpected...๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
 
Pallu..Update ab jaldi se..and I m really sorry for commenting soo late

Thanks so much Ayeshu for dil khol ke commenting on my updates ๐Ÿค—
Gradual I am, kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki hadd gradual ho jaati hoon mein [=))
but m so glad U liked it...MN sweet n cute moments...its something I can't stop craving for n imagining๐Ÿ˜ณ
Mayank's casual remarks are his USP I guess...๐Ÿ˜†
Those thoughts of hers naa...thanks thanks๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Crossword wala part toh I had imagined in so many ways...finally likh hi diya...๐Ÿ˜†
m more than happy that U'll liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ:))
arrey its okay if U comment late๐Ÿ˜† par mere next update se pehle U have to keep commenting haan ๐Ÿ˜ณ
m updating abhi๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: shafyyy

So awsome part..

loved it..๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks Shaffy๐Ÿ˜ƒ