Originally posted by: kheya-mayurcute
Originally posted by: shafyyyThat was very very nice part.
Now there marriage have taken a new turn..
Originally posted by: kheya-mayurcute
Originally posted by: shafyyyThat was very very nice part.
Now there marriage have taken a new turn..
Thanks Bhawna๐Originally posted by: Bhawna_artiAwesome update.
Originally posted by: shafyyyloved the song...
Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayurnice
sweetcuteromanticawesomemagicalso beautiful ... amazing writting.continue soonthanks for thep m.
Thanks Mini ๐คOriginally posted by: Mini4hey PAYAL!!!๐ค
A very cute update!!!loved d way u write d cute moments between mayank n nupur so beautifully..great imagination n wonderful story telling skilll!๐loved d way mayank was initially trying to hide his actual feelings for nupur when he saw her in saree...n den d fighting n sharing during crossword solving was really beautifully written!!n d end their kiss was xtra special one!!๐ณlovely choise of song from d movie just married!๐๐ผthanx fr d reply u gav fr my previous comment.๐..thanx fr d pm...๐คcontinue soon!
Yes Shilpa they did๐Originally posted by: arti_17Omg they kissed ๐ฒ Clearly nt expected ๐ I think dis was d best update of ur ff... ๐ It had mayur convos,as 2 my liking ๐ Sweet mayur moments..their nok-jhoks...d shocks dat mayank was giving 2 nupur n all d readers ๐ esp dat casual remark 2 nupur...'tum roz aise hi toh hug karke soti ho..' ๐ Poor nupur...n d song blended perfectly wid d update...do continue soon in d same manner...thnx 4 d pm...
-shilpa ๐
Thanks dear๐
Thanks so much Ayeshu for dil khol ke commenting on my updates ๐คOriginally posted by: aysha_mayurAwww such a such a lovely update Pallu..I love such kinds of sweet and romantic moments between the two...specially in ur FF...coz its happening soo gradually๐ณ...like it should be!!๐ณ
and that part when he says "mujhe kya pata chalna chahiye??" coming a little close to her...I love this kind of naughty Mayank...making her go speechless...and making us also go speechless๐๐and night wala part was also sooo romantic...when loved this line--- she also wanted to tell him that like today, she wanted them to be a team always, always talking and sharing their two lives as one.Sooo beautiful!!Me enjoyed the Crossword part too...reminded me of apne asli wale Mayur...I culd actually imagine the two of them๐and the kiss in the end..Omggg...that was sach mein unexpected...๐๐๐Pallu..Update ab jaldi se..and I m really sorry for commenting soo late
Thanks Shaffy๐
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