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Arhi TS: A Midsummer Night's Storm (lastpart) p17 (Page 26)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Brilliant!!! Wish ASR would actually come out with his feelings to KKGSR just like he did in your story. Smile well wishing and hoping that some good might happen to both of them in the coming track. cheers to all fans.

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 3:46am | IP Logged

Brilliant!

I would love the NK - Anjali convo - loved the talking -to that Anjali got. NK, bravo!
And the Arnav-Khushi interaction, it was so very realistic. Your dialogues bring your story to life!

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Beautiful ending<3 loved it :)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:05am | IP Logged
You know something...I'm REALLY irritated right now. You know why? Coz I can't find any words to describe how MUCH I LOVED this Two Shot. Tongue  LOL The first part was beautiful but the second part surpassed it...which I didn't think was possible! But you clearly proved me wrong. Embarrassed


This was exceptional. I just can't get over how well you write. How do you do it? Tell me, what do you eat? LOL 

Every single word...mind it, EVER single word just fits perfectly in its place as if it was always meant to be. Ever emotion was described with brilliance and beauty!

Amazing!

I loved it to the core. Big smile

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ipkknd_gbdfan Senior Member
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Loved NK!!! Although while reading it, I felt that he had a lot of patience. If I had to meet Anjali, knowing what NK knows, then I would have literally cut her hair and pushed her down a flight of stairs, or even pushed her outside the house, telling her to go live with the snake. She would have been rejected the offer, and seen for real how bad her pati is...and then she would have come home. Jeesh, I hate women like Anjali and Payal. 

Sorry for the rant...but loved it. Thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:47am | IP Logged
NK, you rock! And Anji baby, you had that coming!

Loved the way Arnav Bitwaa managed to silence his Biwi, his legally wedded wife.

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:47am | IP Logged
omg! amazing!!ClapBig smile

wish this happens if nt exact, atleast sumwat the same!!

pleez sumone knock sum sense into Anjali. Confusedthough i knw it will take tym since creepwas cuming bak!!LOL


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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
thank you for the pm... a very moving update... the lines that touched my heart were: 'Why don't you understand?' he growled, grabbing hold of her forearms, shaking her as though half-hoping it would knock some sense into her, 'Why don't you understand that I can't let you go, dammit? I'm sick of it, Khushi, I'm sick of this! I'm tired too! I'm tired of being left hanging between you and Di! I'm tired of trying to prove myself to my sister after I spent a lifetime making her happiness my first priority! Risking everything, risking us! I'm tired of losing your heart and your faith every time you trust me with it, Khushi!' sheer poetry in the last line!
 
don't have the words to tell you how much you moved me with that superlative description of arnav pouring out his pain and fear... each and every word seemed to draw tears of blood!
 
thank you for making nk such a strong character who calmly and coldly made anjali face the truth of the illusory world she was inhabiting!
 
a truly great piece of writing! THANK YOU


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