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Arhi TS: A Midsummer Night's Storm (lastpart) p17 (Page 14)

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
It's beautiful! Poor Khushi, the Raizada family zoo has battered her :( 

I SO can't wait to read what NK has to say to Weepy. You should definitely continue! :)

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
keep going!

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
beautiful!!! Please continue !!!!!!!

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
You've got to continue woman !! by the end, I was expecting a part 2 to be written down in the enxt post already, but since its been missing for tooo long now, I demand it back right now !! Pleasseee !! Dont make me wait anymore !!

And as for this OS !!
I love how you bring NK in !1 Be it here or in a Series of Fortunate Events !! Gosh !! I love how you play with his character and make him so much more than he is !! Well they do use NK, but not to the full extent in the show !! And Im so glad he's going to give Anjali a talk !! When he demanded that Anjali listen, I was like GO NK !! Im with you, my sweeto pie !! He's like Arnav and Khushi's hero/ friend / cupid together !!

And then, when Khushi cries !! I want her to cry in the show too !! She just keeps things stored inside her and its just breaking her !! But when she cried here , I felt good !! Happy that she cried, she might have felt a little light after that !! Khushi being the scapegoat was put perfectly well though NKs POV, cause now, even Im tired of everyone going mad at her for revealing the truth ! Had she not done it, then again it would have been that she didnt reveal the truth ! Gosh, the Raizadas need some treatment and I mean it !!

The way Arnav finally agrees that he's all shatterd and torn !! That he's tired of being tossed about , the emotions were written so well there !! I could imagine that emotion Barun puts up when Arnav's supposed to be all tired !! And then he starts explaining, finally saying things he should have long ago said , and in a way apologising for whatever he ever did !! Aknowledging to Khushi, that he needs not only his Di but her too ! That part was soo goood, I love how you frame out the lines, it made me want to cry !!

Loved this one, and Im waiting for a PM telling me that it has been continued !!

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Lovely story!  Please please continue!

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Amazing! Loved it<3 Pleasee continue

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:34am | IP Logged
ofcourse you have to have to have to have to continue
gosh it was superb
continue soonBig smile

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:44am | IP Logged
of course you have to cont. soon

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