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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepa.e

just awesome!!!!! priya you have put some sense in anji's character atleast here, in your fiction!!ROFL hats off for that!!!Party she is right about chote though!! but what is she going to do with that creep?? am already damn excited!!!!Big smile

A Round of applause for this part!!!!ClapClapClap

brilliant work girl!!! as always my next que is wen will u update???lol!!! take ur time but update soon pls!!!! pls!!!!!

omg!! Big smile 
m sooo happy that you liked it.. 

thanks alottt.. 

will update the next part soon deeppaaa Hug

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM. Nice part. Smile

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 7:59am | IP Logged
at last anjali believes khushi and is on a mission to unite them

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrindagupta

at last anjali believes khushi and is on a mission to unite them

Big smileyess 
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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Baki

Thanks for the PM. Nice part. Smile

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Oiii!! You didn't even tell me you started writing an FF!!! 
I saw my PM just now! was reviewing it cos its flooded!! 

wow this is really nice! I like how you portrayed all the characters in this! Wish it could be like that in reality! 
Brilliant updates Priya!
I'll be looking forward to more! Big smile

You joined our dear club of writers too! yay! :D

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jessicad

Oiii!! You didn't even tell me you started writing an FF!!! 
I saw my PM just now! was reviewing it cos its flooded!! 

wow this is really nice! I like how you portrayed all the characters in this! Wish it could be like that in reality! 
Brilliant updates Priya!
I'll be looking forward to more! Big smile

You joined our dear club of writers too! yay! :D

Hugjessiii.. where have you been all these days? 

aww.. thankyou jessi.. i know.. though reality isn't like this atleast in our writings we can make impossible things possible na Wink
thankyouu. . bless me so that i can become a brilliant writter like how you are.. 

m still just like a baby in writing.. tried something for the first time Tongue.. 

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged

here i come with something new again Wink

did u ever see anjali doing drama/nautanki wantedly? weird right? 
read my new ss to know whats going on Smile

Love is not always the easy way. This is something they don't tell you in the movies. Love sometimes is the winding road. This is something you do not read about in fairy tales. There are moments when you hearts will seem to travel as two ships passing in the night. There are moments when you might ask "who is this stranger in my bed"? Dont look away from love. Look deeply at love, look longly at love, and it will ignite again.


--Anonymous

The excuse!

Part 5

the sun rises high bringing bag of new hopes in both RM and GH. 

AT GH:
Kushi welcomes the new early morning biding bye to her dream filled with her love.
she realises that credits of her fake sim got over.. she gets ready quickly with minutes and runs to the recharge shop to get her sim recharged..
buaji calls kushi to have breakfast as soon as kushi reaches home.. 

kushi was in so hurry to talk to her lion that he started to swallow large piece of the hot hot aloo puri which was served to her.. 

buaji and amma stare at kushi and the way she was swallowing the food with a "O.o" expression.

buaji:aayeee kushi!! are you okay?? why are you in so hurry? 

kushi : ammm. ummm.. mmm haan woo.. ummm umm *trying hard to talk while eating* 
she didn't wanted to waste even a single second so continued eating.. 

buaji: ee sanka devi!! konsi basha mein bathya rahin hoo? 

(buaji: in which language are you talking sanka devi?)

amma goes to kushi and hits on her head.. because of that kushi spits out the food

kushi: what amma? Confused

amma: chew.. chew and eat kushi.. are you in that much hurry that you can't even chew and eat food? what is so important? 

buaji: haan garima!! as k her like tat? don't know in which world she lives and god knows in which language she keeps talking 

kushi gives a blank look to  both buaji and amma. 

bauji: ayyee sanka devi! *shouting loudly*

kushi: wo.. wooh.. woh *thinking of some excuse* 
kuch nahin buaji.. hum teek hain.. you eat aloo puri na.. it is so yummy.. actually m feeling a little weak.. i'll go and take rest in my room..

before bua or amma could tell anything she ran into her room and closed the door.

amma: don't know what is wrong with kushi. from when she came from RM back to lucknow she is going under rapid mood swings.. 

buaji: haan garima!! daal mein zaroor kuch kala hain. she is hiding something from all of us. we have to find it out at any cost without asking kushi. because sanka devi never talks in a proper manner.. don't know what is sanka devi upto now..

suddenly someone knocks at the door

buaji gets up to open the door

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AT RM:

arnav doesn't sleep the whole night. he still locked himself in his room.
his eyes turn dark and the tears get dried,
he misses the nois polluution kushi used to create when she was there.. he feels as if he s gone deaf forever..

he stares at the stars kushi has left for him before she left RM.. he cries hard holding those stars near his heart forcing the tears to come ot of his eyes.. 

hp comes up with the coffee for arnav and knocks the door.. no response
he knocks the door once again.. he knocks it twice, thrice but no response from the other side of the door.. 

hp runs to  naniji's room and tells her about the situation.. 
nani hurry ups to arnav's room and calls him out "chooottteeeyy".. no response.. she keeps calling his name loudly.

payal, nani over hear naniji's voice and gather outside arnav's room near nani

payal: what happened naniji? 

nani crying: wo..wooo.. chotteeyy...

tensed anjali: chottey kya naniji?? what happened to chottey?? where is he?? tell me nani what happened?

nani: anjali bitiya! hp knocked chottey's door many times and even i called him out but no response from him.. he is not opening the door.. i'm scared now.. i hope chottey is fine..

*nk  enters*
payal consoles nani
anjali: i.. iii.. i'll try nani.. 

choootteyyy..chhhoooteeeyyy.. open the door chottey.. *she shouts as much loudly as possbile*
arnav i sware on myself if you won't open the door

nk:anjali dii! don't shout so much. it is not good for your health. you don't worry.. i'll break inside..

nk moves 4-5 steps backwards targetting the door..
nk talks to himself: comeon nk dude! you can do this. you're the super man who will save nannav.. comeone.. 3..2..1
and he runs as fast as possible towards the door

suddenly arnav opens the door and nk goes and falls straight upon the recliner 

arnav *puzzled*: what the.. *looking at nk.

listening to arnav's favorite signature roar the trio nani, payal and anjali give a sign of relief. 

nk: oucchh!! ye darara kisne kola.. my back hurts now awww.. 
*and he turns back and finds arnav*
nk runs to arnav and hugs him tightly

nk:nannav! mere bhai.. you're fine..

arnav slowly releases himself from nk's cluthes..and tells nk "it darwaza not darara"

anjali goes to arnav and cups his face

anjali: tum teek tho hona chottey? 
arnav *in soar voice*: haa.. haan dii!

nani comes and hugs chottey crying.. 

nani: chottey! where were you? why did u take so long to open the door or respond huh? you scared all of us.. what happened to you? 

arnav: m sorry nani.

nk:naniji! relax.. relax.. your chottey is fine na.. so chilll... 

*nk winks and anjali gets what nk was thinking of*

anjali: haan naniji! you look at chottey.. he is all fine.. 
*anjali winks to naniji*

arnav's cell start ringing and doesn't stop at all.. 

anjali: chottey! i guess you're getting someone's important call.. they are calling you back so many times.

arnav: ignore it dii.. i dont want to attend any calls at the moment. 
anjali:what are you talking chottey? what if it is something important from office? 

*anjali walks towards the mobile slowly while talking to arnav*

the cell shows "aman calling" 

anjali to herself: aman? he works for chottey's company right?
i guess there is something really very important.

anjali: hello?
aman: hello. can i talk to mr.arnav singh raizada?
anjali: he is little busy at the moment. i'm his sister anjali singh raizada! whats the matter mr.aman?

"I'M ANJALI SINGH RAIZADA" makes arnav get confused and makes nk, payal and nani show their 32 teeth.. the trio loved the change in anjali. 

aman tells everything about the contract and arnav's decision to anjali

anjali: whaatt?? 
aman: yes ma'am! now those clients warned us that we have to arrange a very big fashion show for them within a week in one of the best abd biggest places we own. we just have one week time for that ma'am. we should make all arragements with this period for the fashion show. 
anjali: mr.aman! i'll talk to chottey and inform you within sometime.
aman: okay ma'am. 

*the line is dissconnected*

anjali: chottey! i have to talk something very important to you right now.
arnav:haan dii. tell me.. whats the matter?

anjali: what are you planing to do chottey? how can you cancel sucha big deal.. don't you know that this is the high time for business?

nani:kya hua anjali bitiya? 

anjali tells everything to nani

arnav:dii! i dont want to go to office nor sign any damn contract.

anjali *encouraging the acting skills inside her gets ready to do drama* : chottey *in breaking voice* you're behaving like this because of me only na? the decision i took yesterday made you behave like this.. i'm reponsible for all this things.. bwahahaha *she turns towards nani and winks her and starts crying* 

nk, payal and nani understand that anjali is acting and thse trio too wake up their acting skills 
nani:anjali bitiya.. please don't cry. 
anjali:no nani! let me cry till my tears get dried up.. Cry
arnav: nahin dii.. noo.
 arnav gets closer to anjali to console her but suddenly payal comes in between and consoles anjali 

arnav mentally: what the.
 all of them do drama for sometime.
anjali: chottey! i give you an hour to decide. hope you won't dissapoint your dii this time. 

nani:bitiya come with me. you need to take rest.

all of them leave the room and confused arnav back. 

they all get into anjali's room.

naniji: anjali bitiya! why did u stop me when i was scolding chottey? why did u wink to me?
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At lucknow GH:

kushi locks the door and makes a high jump from the door to the bed.. 
she removes the fake sim which she hid in the pillow cover and puts it into her cell. 
she listens to the conversation which she recorded when she spoke to arnav last time.. 
she keeps revinding it again and again. 
she feels his voice like  the best music she ever heard in her lifetime in this world. 
her heart starts missing his beat alot. 
kushi finally decides to make another prank call to arnav.
she dials his number. . 
arnav's cell rings

AT RM :
tringtring... tring tring... 

arnav thinks that it is aman who is callling 
arnav to himslelf: @#$% this aman! he is over today. don't know what he told dii that she is again upset with me today.. 
he rushes to his cells and answers the call. 
 arnav: aman! how dare you talk to my dii about the contract you dumbo? i have already told you that i don't want to do any deal. didn't i? i don't care what happened to me or my company right now okay? i'm not intrested in all these profit-profit game anymore.. i've already suffered a very big loss now*in breaking tone*. i just don't care whether it is 5000 crore deal or $%^&.. you get that?  

kushi: eh? *kushi's english is quite poor as we all know.. so bechari! was trying to figure what arnav spoke so quickly* 

arnav *on hearing a girls voice from the other side*: what the.. 

kushi shuts her mouth tightly D'oh
and arnav looks the number from which the call came.. 
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precap:how did kushi continue the further conversation with arnav? arnav comes up with his decision.. who was at buaji's door? why did anjali stop nani? what are they all planing? 

Alas, I thought I knew so much
Of love, and yet I know so little!
For I cannot stop myself loving her
From whom I shall never have joy.
My whole heart, and all of me from myself
She has taken, and her own self,
and all the world,
For when she took herself from me,
she left me nothing
But desire and a yearning heart.

--Bernard de Ventadour


hope you all liked this part..  
do share your views and  suggest me so that i can do better than this.. 

waiting for all your responses Hug

-priya <3 


ps: part 3 and part 4 are simultaneous story of part 1 and part 2 Tongue

part 5 is the continuation 






Edited by priyalovebarun - 31 July 2012 at 5:06am

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