MG OS: An Unexpected Turn last part pg 23 10/08 - Page 18

Posted: 11 years ago
i feel bad that you had to complete this FF like this...don't know what to say or do...

i feel so sad seeing all the posts where people are talking abt less likes and comments.  From my side, I always try to comment along with pressing like but...

well I hope u don't have to do this again

nice concept
Posted: 11 years ago
awww u gave gist😭 😭but it is only the way left with u and i know it darling...
coming to it it was an amazing story darling...wow maan knew that she is his angel but didnt tell her finally pata chal bhi gayi...how kaminey's they are they killed geet's parents😡😡
but iam really very very happy that maan stood for her...finally finallly they are one...
their lives took many unexpected turns but they are one finally..true love can never fail and that happened with prince and his angel and that is maaneet..will she cont as army officer after marriage..i know stupid question😆 but asked out of my curiosity😳
thank u so much for such an amazing story darling..
loveu..muaazzz🤗
ur kiddo...😳
Edited by maneetlover1 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
last part
very nice dear...
Posted: 11 years ago
So sad..ending..we can't read find more maaneet moment..
Geet get justice to punish culprit..
Posted: 11 years ago
awesum os...
loved all d parts...
maan n geet r so cute...dey still loved each other even after so many years..
sachi..true love always wins..

Posted: 11 years ago
awesome sweet ending yar loved it a lot
Posted: 11 years ago


loved the update...

Geet is alive and she joined Army to punish her culprits...

but why army ?...Army is not the force to catch the businessmen who sell fake drugs...it can be Narcotics department or police...or CBI...

thank God she joined Army or else how she can meet Maan...

u ended ur story in a jiffy...the reason is that u r not getting enough response...but can u and other writers justify what is the fault of readers like me to get this treatment who are regular...

anyway thanx for pm...
Posted: 11 years ago
Feeling really and that it ended like this!!!

But me understands your feelings!!!

Loved this FF shona!!

Am really sorry for late comment, my net is troubling me a lot!!

The last part though seemed hurried but was still beautiful!!

Just one word for your writing dear!!! That is…

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