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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shagnika

Kya kar sakte hain !! I expected even less initially. I extended the time till the evening and thats why got 2 more people voting ! or else it was 5 Ouch
 
I would have made it 8, but I couldn't finish all the stories in time.

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Hmm... And when will you post your story? I am waiting ... Even Mallika ! Where is she? I was waiting for you people's stories. Post it na ! 

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Posted: 31 July 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Congrats Vis and Astonish..:))

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Posted: 31 July 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shagnika

Hmm... And when will you post your story? I am waiting ... Even Mallika ! Where is she? I was waiting for you people's stories. Post it na ! 
 
I'll get a chance finally to work on it this weekend, so I'll finish it up and post it by Monday or Tuesday.

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 11:59am | IP Logged
I will read Astonish & Ravi's stories so soon...& will comment sure...i am trying to finish it within this week...Smile

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Thanks to all of you. I really loved reading all stories (2 stories I haven't read yet). I missed CID from last few weeks. Instead of watching serial I preferred reading stories first. I really enjoyed it. Big smile ClapClap.

 
Entry 1
Great connection and story was linked beautifully. Exceptionally connected story, great suspense about Eagle. But eagle as pet ??. Nice to know Abhijeet remember his past LOL. Anyways  Loved the way Saamdaar was introduced and utilized in story. Serjent Suri, Saamdaar, Zorawar were exceptionally connected to the plot. Fully justified. Loved reading this story.

 


 

Entry 2
Temporarily deleted ?? why
 

Entry 3

One could see scenes happening in front of eye, exceptionally described all the scenes. Altogether different type of story. Enjoyed reading it. Although I had to re-read to get to few things but  I loved the way story is woven.  Totally Abhijeet centric  story.  Hallucinogen--  good use of it in story and motive so that CM doesn't stand in elections  quite different.

Your style of writing grasps readers mind more than story. I don't know but it happens with me. I don't know its positive thing or negative thing but your style of writing always make more impressing on me than story.  Even if story is awesome your style of writing still can't beat that, you are just awesome writer.


 

Entry 4
In Second scene Vivek is clicking photographs and yet CID team has to discover the body. (??). Story was very fast paced. Climax lacked the punch because I felt story was going on some other track and suddenly to fulfill the plot writer changed the track. It was all sudden. Track introduced and climax it was all of sudden. Few confusions 'how come no one knows that Matron and Jyoti are mother-daughter in relation. After giving poison she hanged the body of Megha and locked door from inside, how??
 
Entry 5
One of the brilliant story with lots of suspense. I really loved the pace and killing method used, Discussion among team related to serial killing and the way CID team solved the case loved it. Exceptionally well written story.  I think money is little less to kill a person.
The process to do all task was explained brilliantly. If they know how to clear logs (which can be done) then it would have been little difficult to catch them.   
 
Entry 6
Nice story. Each skillful, orphanage killed-- unique motive. Psycho Killer. Quite soft side of Abhijeet is shown in this story. (Just kidding) and loved Freddy's gyan being actually used and implemented.  Story was clear with no confusion. 
When Geeta was killed at forensic lab Salunke saying behoshi ka spray kardiya when he is forensic doctor and can confirm rather than just speculating.

 
Entry 7
Another great story. As always love the flow of this story.  Quite high drama towards end. Loved the explanation by diagram I could visualize whole scene as I was reading.  Loved DCP unintentionally was link. His one phone call (although to scold) linked CID team who were working as separate team and heading towards same place.  Enjoyed this story a lot.
Quite good use of facebook. MK Technologies people (Anjani) if they were so concerned that 3 software engineers doesn't get in contact with someone from outer world they would have blocked the websites and given them access to limited websites instead of checking their trustworthiness.


Edited by sunnyp1414 - 19 August 2012 at 1:43am

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sunnyp1414

Thanks to all of you. I really loved reading all stories (2 stories I haven't read yet). I missed CID from last few weeks. Instead of watching serial I preferred reading stories first. I really enjoyed it. Big smile ClapClap.

yes Now adays its Good to Read IFiens Stories rather Watching CID Episodes...LOL
SUNNY First of all... THANK YOU so much that U extract Time and Read all Fantastic Stories written by Big Writers including ME...Wink
Thank alot... Hope to have Ur Precious Comments and Feedback in Future...Smile

 
Entry 1
Great connection and story was linked beautifully. Exceptionally connected story, great suspense about Eagle. But eagle as pet ??. Nice to know Abhijeet remember his past LOL. Anyways  Loved the way Saamdaar was introduced and utilized in story. Serjent Suri, Saamdaar, Zorawar were exceptionally connected to the plot. Fully justified. Loved reading this story.

Thanks alot about Liking this Story... Bundles of Thank You for These too Big Big Compliments from a well Known Writer of CID forum...Big smile
abt ABHIJEET Sir Remembering Past Idea... I took it from ABHIJEET KAY ATEET KA RAAZ... in that Series ABHIJEET Sir only remember the Incident without Refrence and Background... but obviously I did not Handle it Correctly so i'll care it in Future...Smile
the EAGLE part... yes I had the Idea that I used it as a Touching Stuff which touched by Serjent Suri but when I wrote that patch, I found that jusy by Touching its Difficult to Confirmed that the Impression on anything was EAGLEConfused... after that at the End I had this one and without any Research I put it in Story either ASTONISH told me that Keeping EAGLES are Banned in India, but I tried to use that Pet to an NRI...LOL

Entry 6

Nice story. Each skillful, orphanage killed-- unique motive. Psycho Killer. Quite soft side of Abhijeet is shown in this story. (Just kidding) and loved Freddy's gyan being actually used and implemented.  Story was clear with no confusion. 
When Geeta was killed at forensic lab Salunke saying behoshi ka spray kardiya when he is forensic doctor and can confirm rather than just speculating.

Thank You AgainSmile... and Yes the Stuff was only a Speculation.. He and Nobody Confirmed about it till ABHIJEET Sir told by Himself that the Culprit Inject something and He was turned Unconcious...Ouch

 

I am again Very Thankful to USmile... the Feedback, Comments, Praise, Criticism from a Good and Big Writer really Boost a Low level Writer like me to atleast try to work Better...Smile

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Sunny, thank you so much for taking time out to read them...it's a big motivator. Smile
 
 
About the minor issues in my story...see, the 3 guys are hackers...they can break through any restrictions Anjani places. He has hired them for a certain task...they have to use the net. He cannot completely block them off...they are smart too aren't they? Tongue
 
 
The drama part - the story theme was like that...ask the organiser why she wanted this. LOL


Edited by visrom - 06 August 2012 at 9:30pm

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