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Adi Sir BDay STORY CONTEST -- **RESULTS on pg 16** (Page 22)

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Finished another story !!! Big smile
ENTRY 1
Though some point i feel some similarity with your style but i really do not expect Entry 1 is yours...as i am sure about Entry 6...
First of all i would like to congratulate for writing 2 stories...Clap
Secondly it is quite different Story from you...you tried your best to write something different & for me you are quite successful in it...Clap

"Vivek: Sir, keunke serjent suri ke sath ye ghatna police force ki joining mein hui thi tou police nay unhein pension jaari ker di..."
As far i know (may be i m wrong) pension is given to all the govt employees after their retirement so there is no link with Serjent Suri's accident...

Another point - we know that Abhijeet sir forgot his past totally then how he know about Sergent Suri ?? I mean how can he know about Police academy's incident ?? Confused

You used Ins Samaddar & Zorawar proper way though i am confused why Sergent Suri whisper 'eagle' ? Confused

Anyway good story...its better one than Entry 6...Smile

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shagnika

I have done the least amount of research in that case LOL

BTW, I am deleting my entry (entry 2) for now... because of some personal reasons. I might be posting it back sometime later. Thanks to all those who have read the story and liked it and also for giving the precious reviews Big smile
 
Where are the reviews from the host?
 
Also Demonstar and others...Come on this is not fair.
 
Shagnika, I would like to know...how many votes did you get? Max 3 or 4 as far as I know...I don't think these results are really correct. Sleepy


Edited by visrom - 30 July 2012 at 6:53am

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 9:34am | IP Logged

Yup Shagz... Even I wanna know how many people voted it.. I don;t think there were more than 5 ... Ouch

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by debasree04

Finished another story !!! Big smile
ENTRY 1
Though some point i feel some similarity with your style but i really do not expect Entry 1 is yours...as i am sure about Entry 6...
First of all i would like to congratulate for writing 2 stories...Clap
Secondly it is quite different Story from you...you tried your best to write something different & for me you are quite successful in it...Clap

"Vivek: Sir, keunke serjent suri ke sath ye ghatna police force ki joining mein hui thi tou police nay unhein pension jaari ker di..."
As far i know (may be i m wrong) pension is given to all the govt employees after their retirement so there is no link with Serjent Suri's accident...

Another point - we know that Abhijeet sir forgot his past totally then how he know about Sergent Suri ?? I mean how can he know about Police academy's incident ?? Confused

You used Ins Samaddar & Zorawar proper way though i am confused why Sergent Suri whisper 'eagle' ? Confused

Anyway good story...its better one than Entry 6...Smile

Sorry about all loop holes and Thank You for Correcting Me about Pension regarding information and all, and also Thank You for Reading it...Smile  

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
There were 7 votes in total !! I expected even less actually.. I will give my reviews. My college has started so could not be online all day. Will give my reviews this week someday !

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by debasree04

I read Story 2...
Shagnika...really wonderful story...i enjoyed it throughout...fast paced story...i like DEAGLE part...
I have not found any loopholes except that Short circuit & i think there is one typing error also
"Vivek: Sir, maine Koogle mein jaake us code ko search kia to initially mujhe kuch nahi mil raha tha... To maine us code ke do hisse mein divide kiya - SVD 59 IE aur doosra hissa 65-123. Tab jaake mujhe pata chala ki SVD 59 ek type ka rifle ka code hai sir."
I think "IE" will be with 65-123...
Otherwise everything is so perfect...wonderfully used the theme...Story is Abhijeet centris...some dialogues are too good...give wonderful space to Vivek & Purvi...overall i liked it...
Thank You Deba di Big smile Yeah, I know the short circuit error Embarrassed 

The second one was done intentionally. Actually, even if you type SVD 59 IE in google, u will get info about SVD 59 only ! And I didnt want Vivek to get the division correct at first chance. islie made him search for "SVD 59 IE"

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shagnika

There were 7 votes in total !! !


Ouch
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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Kya kar sakte hain !! I expected even less initially. I extended the time till the evening and thats why got 2 more people voting ! or else it was 5 Ouch

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