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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

Shocked
 
 
That site really exists!!!! OMG!!!
 
 
I am filing in some details to check...name : Astonish Place : Garden City, Address; Major finance company. Wink 


Haila... Vis is giving supari on my name ShockedCry 

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
It's $12000 for you Asto...mere paas itne dollars nahi hai. Cry
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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged


Edited by Shagnika - 29 July 2012 at 5:26am

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged
I actually had done much more research... on how to host a website which cannot be tracked back to the person who hosted it.. LOL But then.. it would become very complicated and too technical.. so I just made the owner of a website hosting firm a culprit LOL
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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 5:42am | IP Logged

Omg supari and all..P

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

Originally posted by gadhadada


Now I reveal the Suspence, STORY number 1 was also MINE including Story Number 6, 
I m Sorry Astonish as I dunt know that keeping Eagle as a Pet is Illegal in India, as I dunt know abt that.!
the Second point which U and VIS DII both raise that Digest Abhi Sir remember His past, i just take it from Abhijeet kay ateet ka raaz where ABHI Sir only remember the Portion of His Past.!
khair I'll definately Care abt it in Future... wesay I m Happy that atleast I hide My Style to sum extent...LOL     
TO be frank...on the first glance...story no 6 was confirmed to be yours...I had no doubt...but when I read story no1, I felt the similarities...but didn't think that you might have written 2 stories.
 
Also you have written Abhijeet as Abhijit...on purpose, maybe...very few people use this spelling. Deba used to.Tongue But see, you couldn't hide the 'samjhe'...you always write it as 'samjhy'...it's there in both the stories. Evil Smile
 
The other thing is...story 1 has less of whatever I ask you to reduce in your stories...I am glad you have written it like this. Kept strato thing to a minimum. Clap

LOLLOLLOL ufff pakar liya, chalein Next time More Care, the Story 6 I completely written in my Own Style ta kay koi ek lamhay ko bhi nahi sochay kay main nay is kay ilawa bhi koi aur Story likhi hogi...Big smile
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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 9:40am | IP Logged
I have done the least amount of research in that case LOL

BTW, I am deleting my entry (entry 2) for now... because of some personal reasons. I might be posting it back sometime later. Thanks to all those who have read the story and liked it and also for giving the precious reviews Big smile
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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
I read Story 2...
Shagnika...really wonderful story...i enjoyed it throughout...fast paced story...i like DEAGLE part...
I have not found any loopholes except that Short circuit & i think there is one typing error also
"Vivek: Sir, maine Koogle mein jaake us code ko search kia to initially mujhe kuch nahi mil raha tha... To maine us code ke do hisse mein divide kiya - SVD 59 IE aur doosra hissa 65-123. Tab jaake mujhe pata chala ki SVD 59 ek type ka rifle ka code hai sir."
I think "IE" will be with 65-123...
Otherwise everything is so perfect...wonderfully used the theme...Story is Abhijeet centris...some dialogues are too good...give wonderful space to Vivek & Purvi...overall i liked it...

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