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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Only one person has sent in Marks to me ! What about others?? 

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shagnika

Only one person has sent in Marks to me ! What about others?? 


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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Okay !! LOL Lets see !! 
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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Only 2 more days left !!! I have to read two more stories and write reviews for the remaining ones

Edited by astonish - 27 July 2012 at 5:32am
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2 days???? I can't read today. Can make some time tomm afternoon only. I have 3 more stories to read.
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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Finished reading story no 1.

I had some difficulty in understanding it because of the grammar. Request the writer to give some attention to this aspect.

However the story was very good. Smile it was nice idea to take up the Zoravar track... Clap

Abhijeet remembering his past is tough to digest but we can assume that all his old friends have kept in touch with him and tried to tell him stuff about his past.

Then the thing about Daya's secret mission...was it linked to finding Zoravar's whereabouts? The reason why he was away was not clear. Maybe you could have connected it more clearly.

Overall I liked the story. Very nice attempt. You have some good ideas, so please try writing more stories.

Edited by visrom - 27 July 2012 at 9:01am

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Just started reading stories now with entry 7...will try my best to complete before deadline...

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Entry 7 -
Finally completed one story !!!
I really like the way u used the plot of Serial Killings and last target Abhijeet sir Clap...thodasa hatdke !!! Clap
I said already really appreciating how u used Facebook...Clap
I also like the details u used for appointment letter...Clap
But duo aur facebook LOL nice thought Wink
Story plot is very simple but still i enjoyed it...Clap

"Abhijeet: Lagta hai maarne wala nahin chahta tha ki koi ise pehchaan sake. Salunkhe hi kuch bata sakte hain iske baare mein."

I think its due to small typing mistake...Abhijeet sir do not call Salunkhe sir by his name...


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