CID

India-Forums

   
CID
CID

Adi Sir BDay STORY CONTEST -- **RESULTS on pg 16** (Page 11)

gadhadada IF-Addictz
gadhadada
gadhadada

Joined: 27 August 2010
Posts: 74874

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged

@ALL, thatswhy Main Thread per Open Reviews Nahi deta... Thank You so much who take it in Positive way and So Sorry to Every Participent who feel Sad with My Reviews...Unhappy

Shagnika IF-Rockerz
Shagnika
Shagnika

Joined: 02 February 2010
Posts: 7856

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Only one person has sent in Marks to me ! What about others?? 
astonish IF-Sizzlerz
astonish
astonish

Joined: 24 January 2010
Posts: 12932

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shagnika

Only one person has sent in Marks to me ! What about others?? 


Patience Tongue

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Shagnika

Shagnika IF-Rockerz
Shagnika
Shagnika

Joined: 02 February 2010
Posts: 7856

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Okay !! LOL Lets see !! 
astonish IF-Sizzlerz
astonish
astonish

Joined: 24 January 2010
Posts: 12932

Posted: 27 July 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Only 2 more days left !!! I have to read two more stories and write reviews for the remaining ones

Edited by astonish - 27 July 2012 at 5:32am
visrom IF-Stunnerz
visrom
visrom

Joined: 26 November 2009
Posts: 31245

Posted: 27 July 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
2 days???? I can't read today. Can make some time tomm afternoon only. I have 3 more stories to read.
visrom IF-Stunnerz
visrom
visrom

Joined: 26 November 2009
Posts: 31245

Posted: 27 July 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Finished reading story no 1.

I had some difficulty in understanding it because of the grammar. Request the writer to give some attention to this aspect.

However the story was very good. Smile it was nice idea to take up the Zoravar track... Clap

Abhijeet remembering his past is tough to digest but we can assume that all his old friends have kept in touch with him and tried to tell him stuff about his past.

Then the thing about Daya's secret mission...was it linked to finding Zoravar's whereabouts? The reason why he was away was not clear. Maybe you could have connected it more clearly.

Overall I liked the story. Very nice attempt. You have some good ideas, so please try writing more stories.

Edited by visrom - 27 July 2012 at 9:01am

The following 5 member(s) liked the above post:

DemonStarBhavanabastonishdebasree04gadhadada

debasree04 IF-Sizzlerz
debasree04
debasree04

Joined: 13 August 2010
Posts: 19986

Posted: 27 July 2012 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Just started reading stories now with entry 7...will try my best to complete before deadline...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

astonish

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
WRITE A SCENE CONTEST - RESULTS OUT!

2 3 4 5 6 7

Author: visrom   Replies: 49   Views: 14986

visrom 49 14986 04 March 2013 at 5:37am by ..optimist..
Story contest - disqualified story(late entry)

2 3

Author: visrom   Replies: 19   Views: 9065

visrom 19 9065 07 July 2010 at 10:53pm by prabha.
STORY CONTEST - 1 : CRY FOR HELP [Contest Closed]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 22 23

Author: prabha.   Replies: 181   Views: 31284

prabha. 181 31284 14 June 2010 at 10:49pm by jeet.
STORY CONTEST - Contest I [Closed]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 21 22

Author: prabha.   Replies: 171   Views: 23405

prabha. 171 23405 27 May 2010 at 1:21am by metor
*CID Banner Contest* - Contest Closed

2 3 4

Author: SuhanaSafar   Replies: 25   Views: 7606

SuhanaSafar 25 7606 10 July 2008 at 11:28am by luna_lovegood

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

CID Topic Index

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index