This content was originally posted by: ShagnikaHmm... And when will you post your story? I am waiting ... Even Mallika ! Where is she? I was waiting for you people's stories. Post it na !
Entry 3
One could see scenes happening in front of eye, exceptionally described all the scenes. Altogether different type of story. Enjoyed reading it. Although I had to re-read to get to few things but I loved the way story is woven. Totally Abhijeet centric story. Hallucinogen-- good use of it in story and motive so that CM doesn't stand in elections quite different.
Your style of writing grasps readers mind more than story. I don't know but it happens with me. I don't know its positive thing or negative thing but your style of writing always make more impressing on me than story. Even if story is awesome your style of writing still can't beat that, you are just awesome writer.
This content was originally posted by: sunnyp1414
Thanks to all of you. I really loved reading all stories (2 stories I haven't read yet). I missed CID from last few weeks. Instead of watching serial I preferred reading stories first. I really enjoyed it. 😃 👏👏.yes Now adays its Good to Read IFiens Stories rather Watching CID Episodes...😆SUNNY First of all... THANK YOU so much that U extract Time and Read all Fantastic Stories written by Big Writers including ME...😉Thank alot... Hope to have Ur Precious Comments and Feedback in Future...😊
Entry 1Great connection and story was linked beautifully. Exceptionally connected story, great suspense about Eagle. But eagle as pet ??. Nice to know Abhijeet remember his past 😆. Anyways Loved the way Saamdaar was introduced and utilized in story. Serjent Suri, Saamdaar, Zorawar were exceptionally connected to the plot. Fully justified. Loved reading this story.Thanks alot about Liking this Story... Bundles of Thank You for These too Big Big Compliments from a well Known Writer of CID forum...😃abt ABHIJEET Sir Remembering Past Idea... I took it from ABHIJEET KAY ATEET KA RAAZ... in that Series ABHIJEET Sir only remember the Incident without Refrence and Background... but obviously I did not Handle it Correctly so i'll care it in Future...😊the EAGLE part... yes I had the Idea that I used it as a Touching Stuff which touched by Serjent Suri but when I wrote that patch, I found that jusy by Touching its Difficult to Confirmed that the Impression on anything was EAGLE😕... after that at the End I had this one and without any Research I put it in Story either ASTONISH told me that Keeping EAGLES are Banned in India, but I tried to use that Pet to an NRI...😆Entry 6
Nice story. Each skillful, orphanage killed-- unique motive. Psycho Killer. Quite soft side of Abhijeet is shown in this story. (Just kidding) and loved Freddy's gyan being actually used and implemented. Story was clear with no confusion.When Geeta was killed at forensic lab Salunke saying behoshi ka spray kardiya when he is forensic doctor and can confirm rather than just speculating.Thank You Again😊... and Yes the Stuff was only a Speculation.. He and Nobody Confirmed about it till ABHIJEET Sir told by Himself that the Culprit Inject something and He was turned Unconcious...I am again Very Thankful to U😊... the Feedback, Comments, Praise, Criticism from a Good and Big Writer really Boost a Low level Writer like me to atleast try to work Better...😊
😳😆This content was originally posted by: visrom
The drama part - the story theme was like that...ask the organiser why she wanted this. 😆
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