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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
amazing update i loved it
thanks for pm update soon

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Itz had been days apart..plz update soon far..
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 1:59am | IP Logged
sharon;-kriya ye tumara room or vo mera kuch help chaiye cal me ok

kriya ;-okSmile

reyam

swayam;-rey i vant 2 c my buddy

rey;-me tooo

swyam ;-ooo nooo dnt lie u vant 2 see kriya right

rey;-shut up i dnt care

sw;-kya u dnt care dnt lie

rey;-swayam Angry

swa;-ok ok cool

finally both reached sharon house and reyam started to go resptcd rooms of their buddy but destni played the role...rey gon totward kriyas room and swayam to sharon but unfortunatly our brautiful cute 2 dolls were dancng in their room after their bath(so i nt vant to descrb the look u can guss it)

swaron

swayam enter the room and got shok to see her ..she s wearng a towl nthng more and cnfsd too becoz actually its gust room ..never she gav her room to any one but 1st time she gav her room to kriya

he moves toward her ...and bumpd vth her ..she s hell shok and so shy tooo 1st time our diva s so much of shy infront of swaron the song starts

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya


swayam move forward and catch her waist from back and rotaes her




Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

took her in his arms and kissed slowly


Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin

she kissed back and put her arms on his shoulder


ehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

swayam slightly bite his shoulder due to the pain she slowly put her hands inside his shirt and started playing


ehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar


this irritate him he put her on the bed and fall toward him and coverd vth blanket

kriyansh


rey enter the room and serch for sharon but he saw a different sharon facng back wearng a short dress vth vet hair...he said u r soo hot  she replied is it ..rey said no...she replaid vat u mean i am gng actually she tought it vil be swayam...so i vil challang u miss my buddy  cant u show me a hot dance if u r hot..kriya;- y not buddy i can but u shud also dance vth me ..rey challang accepted...

air started blowing toward the gal fastly her hair is dancing in the air vth water drops..for a second reys heart skip and he feels very spl...she turn towards him both of thn got shokd

rey;-u

kriya;-

rey;-its shrons room

kriya;-par for few days i am here

rey;-ok ok Wink u vil loos kriya guy

kriiya;-ok ok let challang it

yup the sitvtn is correct out side its rainning thundernfg etc etc ...the full on fresh air is blowng toward kriya ..here she starts vth his seducive look and hip step
dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga - (2)
saiya baiya chhodna, kachchi kaliya tod naa - (2)


moved towards rey and caught his coller ang tightend ...he loosd her stamina and bilinknhg towards that seduciev eyes
she slowly moved him towards her

 dil se dil mil gaya, mujhse kaisi yeh haya - (2)
tu hai meree dilaruba, kya lagti hai wah re wah - (2)
dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga


she gave a kiss to him were his heart is beating so fastly for her her each movement is so seducive

now our handsum hunk cant do anythng he too goined vth her vth full on passion


apna kaha jab piya tune mujhe, mai mithe mithe sapne sajane lagee
dekha meree rani jab maine tujhe, meree soyi soyi dhadkan gane lagee
jadu teraa chhane laga, meree nas nas me samane laga
khud ko mai bhulane laga, tujhe sanso me basane laga
rishta abb yeh rishta, sathi tutega naa tode kabhee
dil se dil mil gaya mujhse kaisi yeh haya
dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga


he caught her from back and gave a small bite towards her hip ...a drop of tear came from her eyes ..he moved toward her and slowly taste it and wispered
the same taste vch my tear have ...then bend her toward bothe left and right side vth full on power ... i vant u in my life
but u never vant me in ur life right but mey tumey eysey nahi chodungi ...or kya tumey ek nayi frnd mila right kya hey uskanam shivam ..kabe mey tumey or
vo shivam ko eksath dekka sure mey ussey mardhoongi or tumey vahasey lekkar aagavongi ...or tum phir be uska sath gaya tho ..he took her
lip and giv a bite on it another drop escape from her eyse ..he caught that drop in his lip

 uljhi hai kalee kalee lat teree, jara inn julfon ko suljhane toh de
itani bhee kya hai jaladi tujhe, ghadi apne milan kee tu aane toh de
aise naa bahane bana meree rani abb toh bahon me aa
aise naa nigahe mila koyee dekhega toh sochega kya
masti chhayi hai masti, aake lag jaa gale se abhi


this time kriya caught reys shoulder and make move towards her tough her both hand now he was gripping her
its her turn ...she slowly vent back and started lik his wole body ..he started to shivar slighly and surprsd too and went near his troat and gav a
painful love bit and wisper ...i ahte taani if i never seen u vth her sure reyansh singaniya u r dead ..u r mine i vnt allow any one 2 use u
...kabi be uskasath dekka tho tum gaye


 dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga - (2)
saiya baiya chhodna, kachchi kaliya tod naa - (2)
dil se dil mil gaya, mujhse kaisi yeh haya - (2)
tu hai meree dilaruba, kya lagti hai wah re wah - (2)
dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga
dil se dil mil gaya, mujhse kaisi yeh haya


now the speed of the dancng incrsd both were dancng like their is no more finally pulled her towarsd bed
and he started to giv her small lovely pains ..shown the love towards her..and finallydrifted to sleep




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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 2:58am | IP Logged
ErmmEmbarrassed marr gayi mei...aaj kuch zyada ho gaya...baad mei aati hu...update ke barei mei kya bolu kuch samaj nhi aa rha...mera dhyaan vaha hi aatak gaya hai...1000 volt ka jhatka diya...

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
awesome...
loved it...
thnx for d pm...


Edited by alisha.a.s - 24 October 2012 at 7:20am
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 7:25am | IP Logged
awsome update
thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by d3riya

ErmmEmbarrassed marr gayi mei...aaj kuch zyada ho gaya...baad mei aati hu...update ke barei mei kya bolu kuch samaj nhi aa rha...mera dhyaan vaha hi aatak gaya hai...1000 volt ka jhatka diya...


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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
kya freaking hawt update tha
i loved it
kriyansh dance LOL
thanks for pm

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