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nice promo..,
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nice pic...

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amazing update
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it was awesome loved it

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
awesome yaar what an update it was amazing loved it

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
Woww . . . Its an awesome beginning . . . Loved it . . . Smile
So Ms Kria Ghai (or Rai Prakash) is back after all . . . LOL
Now waiting for your next update to see what Kria'll do to win Rey back . . . Tongue
Very interesting concept . . . Update soon . . . Big smile

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 9:25am | IP Logged

 

Hiii happy friendship day ...actually mera collg start honeyvalahey asliye update karna mushkil hoga ...i will try to update every sat and sunday all my ff ,os etc ...es bar i wil update a lamba part of ths ff  i thnk u all like ths part...or ek sharth pey if i should continue next part jadhey i need no of likes and accha bedhavala comments ...is ff keliye i vant to think a lot and a prepare a nice part and the main i vant u all make happy or satstifed ...i am tryng my best to make ths story real if kriya cm back thn vat vil happn so dnt 4gt  so i am gng to start 

part2

 

yek naye shuruvath 

 

 A gal whos entryng to st louis vth ful on attd ...every boys eyes is passing through her...some boys woww kash ye mera gf hotha...anther boys hot!!!!!!!!!!!!...some gals ye kya she s full on attd and her look mindblowng ... how she changed but one thng fabuls dancer she cant be never replaced.the gal just walk towards shivam

 

shivam;-miss beautiful ethny hot!!!!!!!!!! vat happn

 

gal;-kuch nahey 

 


shivam in mind god is she 4get everythng  yesterday i said the truth but also she ...the gal is none other than kriya guy... any way she s dam hot i like it ...shivam tum kya bolrahahey tum pagal ho kya 

 

kriya;- shivam shivammm??????????????

 

shivam;-haa kriya kya huva

 

kriya;-ye tho mey tumsey poochnahey

 

shivam;-i thnk u feel lonelly right

 

kriya;-no shivam ...becoz now i got a new frnd

 

shivam;-kon 

 

kriya;-tum ...and happy friendship day

 

shiavam;-me ur friend thankz alot and happy friendship day ... tum kissey dekraheyhu

 

there a handsm boy was shokd too se ths hot girl vith open mouth and also angry to see her vth shivam

 

rey;-ye kriya ko kya hogaya ethna hot par kyu kiskeliye...or shivam ke sath essey kya hogaya

 

 

gang;-hi hey kya huva tum ethny shock mey .he pointey towards kriya...the word utter from swayam s un predictable,viky hoottt ,amar kliya  hey kya ,bharath ethny accha look,nilesh sexyyy 

 kriyas dress


rey & bakky gals;-kyaaa

 

boys expt rey;-haaa


 

sab gals;-boys teek tho bolrahahey

 

neha;-neha dont  no kriya ethny changed

 

vishk;-ye sab hamrey vajasey


swayam;-par vo pehalesey beautiful hoga ya

 

viky;-swayam tu kyu neha jaisey bath karahaheyhu

 

shi;-hi guys meet my friend kriya guy

 

sab;-kya tumara friend

 

shi;-yaa  ...looking rey she s too hot right

 

taani in mind finally i am happy kriya move on her life aab rey sirph mera sirph or sirph mera

 

kriya;-hi i am kriya guy i am old student of ths collg ,becoz of sm persnal problm meney sabchodhiya ...now back to st louis not in anyothers life ...thn i vont distrb u all dnt worry

 

tum sab chodhiya dance be asound frm the back thats nicol

 

kriya;-nahey dance ke be nahey or dance haahaha loll mujey nahey patha ye dance kya hey or it s a new word forme

 

rey;-dance ke kasam

 

kri;-dance ki or maa ki kasam

 

all;-o god phirsey ye aunty bee naaa

 

shvm came near and forward his hand towards kriya but she dsnt react...rey caught taanis hand to make  kriya jelous now she thnks that rey s sers to taani i shdnt dstry there life...finally she gave her hand to shivam he caught it and covered vith his hand tightly 


taani rey chalona hamey vo report bananahey na tum javo  i vil cm

all left expt swaron

 

swayam;-hamey kuch karnapadey if not rey or kriya alag hoga i cant see that

 

shr;-ya mujey be par swayam did u notice smthng i feel kriya s actng ...

 

swayam;-mujey be ek negatv vibratn mila

 

shr;-par vo...

 

class room

 

all were sittng to there crrspndng couple but near to taani and kriya there s no one after some time  rey and shivm ente shivm trys to sit vith kriya unfortunatly i dsnt happn rey occupied the seat 

now shivam vas boiling too much and he sat vth taani ...that was the ecnomic class the lecture enter and  give a work to done himself...swaron were playing with paper and pen...shivam desnt no to do the workhe saw kriya she was done vth her work

 

shivam;-kriya can u help  me  i dnt no

 

kriya;-ya...

 

rey;-hey dnt worry i vil help u i new

 

shivam;-but

 

rey;-if u dnt mind i hav no prob 

 

shivam ok ...he teach him 

 

kriya;-ye rey ko kya huva 

 

now class left all went ...but kriya is there vn he was gng she slip slightly...some one caught her 

 

kriya;-swayam thanks

 

swayam;-thanks vo be frnds ke beech

 

kriya;-par ...

 

swayam;- happy frndshp day

 

kriya;-u tooo

 

kriya ye kya horahahey mey sab sey door hona chathahu par sab ultta horahahey

 

rey;-kriya tum kaisey ho

 

kriya;-mey??????

 

rey;-ha tum

 

kriya;-mey teek hu or aap

 

rey;- ya mey teek hu teek nahey bahuth  kush hu mera kayal karneykeliye taani hey na...he noticed kriya no expression after smtime he gave a wide smile now he vas shokd  

 

shivam aab merey kayal rekney ekyliye kriya hey.. I am the happiest persn

 

swayam;-rey or kriya ko princi bularahahey

both;-hamey ok v r cmng

 

princi;-kriya tumey weeklng team ke 6th dancer banna hoga …I new tumarey wajasey weeklng team finals thak ….or abb footloose completion be jeeth gaye vo dazzlers be so I vant u back beacoz es  salmey be footloose cmptng hey so v need u

 

kriya;-par sir mom

 

princi;-mom  sey mey bathkaroonga dnt worry

 

sawayam;-ya sir

 

vishaka;-no excuse u shud

 

princi;-ek or bath v selected our gs and ags according to the votes of students ….vn kriya left due to reys reqst v accpt taani as ags par ye teek bath nahey v give imp to students so v found a new ags vo none other than kriya guy

 

kriya;-vat?????????

 

Princi;-ya  …I dnt vant to hear anything ok

 

Rey;-but taani

 

Kriya;-yaa taani is gud ags …or rey or taani

 

Rdx;- all others can leave expt kriya nad rey

 

Sab;-yes sir

 

Taani;-kriya acchey hena vo merey liye princi ka sath reqst kiya par I thnk I dnt deserv it

 

Kriya;-sir rey or taani in relationship and 4 thm ths s the right opertunty

 

Princy;-rdx lets go no time to waste

 

Rdx;-ya byee ur the ags

 

Kriya;-sirrr

 

Rey;-kriya tumey keisey patha mey or taani ka relationship

 

Kriya;-ye sab ko patha hey

 

Rey;-kisko

 

Kriya moving back ward and rey cmng forward

 

Rey;-sab ko mathlab

 

Kriya ran away but re caught her by waist and put her inside fire exsist..now kriya cannt move she vas lokd by reys arms .. she was startled and turned quickly just to bump into him...he caught her by waist...he slowly lifted her in arms never breaking the eyelock... .he slowly passed his hand and cluthched the other end on her waist... he came up kissing and finally took her lips into his...after sometym he made his way through her neck ...she was not able to take the pleasure but she just let him do what he wanted.. she looked at him...tears rolled down her eyes..she feel the love that much he missed her  finaly he start to bit her lip so tightly now she s moaned from pain its so tough to breath ..tears r rushing out he still biting ……..the love bite long for a time she finally pushed back and ran of

 

Now kriya in locker room

 

Vishka;-kriya what happn its bleeding

 

Kriya;-kuch nahey mey kudh mera lip ko bite kiya eske vajsey

 

Neha;-kriya edhar baitto neha puts oilment on your pyareesy lip par

 

Simmi;-kriya 1st tum lip wash karlo

 

Rinni;- ya its bleeding too much

 

Kriya;-ya she washed ouch its too much paining universe j please mujey bacchavo

 

Sharon;-tum edhar baitto mey oilment apply kardett…

 

Neha;-kya tum

 

Sharon;-haa mey

Kriya;- par tum

 

Sharon;-koy prob

 

Kriya;-nahey

 

Kriya sits in a chair …sharon takes the oilment in her finger and slightly touch she seen kriya she s suffering from pain Sharon feels smthng wrong .. he came to no that it is alove bite …she calles swayam and told about it and said I thnk its all done by shivam…now our swayam was buring he s too much anger he went around to find rey finally he see rey in basket ball court he explain everything and blame shivam…the final word he said is mey ussey chodungi nahey mera dosth ko vo……my friend kriya she s suffering from pain actually he had lots of pain abb ye bee rey crach into pecies crying hardly .swayam vnt near to him …he was hell shock ..he saw the blood in reys lip now he understood….rey hugged him tightly and cryng

 

Rey;-kya mey ethna bura hu kya

 

Swayam;-no rey but

 

Swayam msg sharon…sharon reads the msg she was too shokd …kya rey ney …kyu??????? Already she hav lots of problem now he gave more pain ….omg he how dare????? I hate u rey I hate u tum ye kya kiya?????????

 

Precap;-the first meetng and convo of kriya guy and raiprekash …Sharon feels smthng spl  feel to kriya….sharon full on angry vith rey ….princi talking to smrithy abt 6th dancer and footloose …shivam feela smthng spl to kriya as love…rey jelous….kriyamfriendshp phirsey …..last ?n vil smrithy guy and raiprekash meet together ok now dnt 4get my sharth need lots of like and bedhavala comment if I didn't get sure I vont update next part ..

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