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|OS| The Night Of the Storm And After (Page 3)

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:13am | IP Logged
Very nice and balanced. ASR would act like this...no emotions -- cool collected thoughts. Would have liked it if he told her the whole story -- that he knew about Shyam since Payash's wedding!

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
finally i got to read your work after such a long time
simply superb and fantastic

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:19am | IP Logged
*frantically searches the telephone/email of the CVs! I need them to read this! Brilliant brilliant brilliant!

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by napstermonster

                             *******************************SIGH*********************************

Peace. I feel peace, and happiness, and a sense of all being right in my little IPKKND world. Seriously, I didn't even know I needed this. I didn't know a simple OS could be written with such heart and soul, such simple elegance as to almost be medicine for the soul of the fan.  The shock to the system, the head clearing, wonderfully life affirming, logic defining excellence that was this One Shot went straight into me, and cured my depression.

I didn't know I needed to read this until I did read this, and---and my body just..relaxed.

I sighed deeply, clear to my toes and then out of my body.That sigh carried all the tension, the knots of anger, the extremely irritated feelings of WHAT THE F**K? right out of my body. This was the right ASR, this was  the right Khushi, this was the right way to deal with the narcissistic, obsessive, self-righteous dipshit that is Anjali in her current avatar .

This was what needs to be said to Manorama, to Aakash, to Payal. This was what families should be reminded off, and how wives should be treated.

And not only was this a perfect dose of refreshing "alternate therapy,"this was well written, poignant, meaningful, touching, stylish, simple and yet so damn...joyous...it was incredible.

Thank you. I'm going to go break my Ramadan fast now, and gorge on iftaar. I've already broken the fast of being all dried up and tense and unhappy about the current track by feasting on this OS.  Thank you.


Omg ... thank you so much for those words ... have read some of your work, and coming from you, this is awesome! Friday's episode has been sitting in my head and bugging me so much, I had to get it out of my system!!! Even without telling the entire truth to Anjali, they can progress Arnav giving his wife her rightful place and starting to deal with the Akash and Mami crap ... it needn't get resolved quickly if they want to drag it, but at least stop making Arnav and Khushi the typical SP wimp and bahu!!! That's not what this show was ever about ...

Am so glad you liked it! Ramadan Kareem!   

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Lovely, exquisite piece of writing. Only if we could see something like this in the show. Sigh...

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:25am | IP Logged
simply brilliant..loved it

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
How I hope this happens. Sigh.

I get Anjali, I really do. She is hurt and distraught and seeing things in a funny way and you cant really blame her but people need to stop letting her run away with her imagination. Arnav needs to make her realize that both ladies are important to him in different ways and restore respect for all relations within that house.

Good job. :)

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Beautifully expressed.I hope against all hope that something like this happens in the show ...Clap  Clap

Edited by spsharmila - 21 July 2012 at 7:27am

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