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I love your story and thanks for the nice update.Sneha's case was brought out very well and I admire Maan for trying to make sure that he's unbiased towards her as well as Vicky from all sides. 

However, my earlier standpoint stays. I am one of those people (or maybe the only one!) who had said that Maan's gave "them" up too quickly. I still stick by it. 

I was a bit surprised at Geet forgiving him easily after her initial outburst and similar with his parents and the Handas. Handas and Khuranas seem to have forgotten that this episode happened as well. I am sure a girl's father wont forget so soon if he's seen his would-be-son-in-law's MMS clip in such a compromising position.

Infact, in my eyes, whatever he has done, he hasnt still been able to redeem himself. What has he done anyway? His explanations to Geet post the event were vague as well. I dont find any indication in Maan's behavior that he is regretful and wont repeat it again. In fact, he seems kinda too contented and sure of himself about winning Geet. He should be more humble that he's got another chance. he was going to lose everything due to his one mistake.To be realistic, if it happened to any of my friends, I would ask her not to trust him. For me, he has to do something drastic, out of the world for me to be able to see him in the prior light.

But thats my pov. You neednt worry about a single reader's discomfort if everyone else seems fine😊

Awesome Update!!!

loved it😊

pls continue soon