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Avita SS-*~~*Chaahat*~~*

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Hello Everyone...
here is my new Avita SS..
its all about love and Passion...what happen when Love Crosses its limits
and turn to someone's Passion...
When it turn Chaahat...
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"Vo Chaahat hi kya..jo zamane ki hadon ko tood na de"
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He was the unthrowned king of Lallanpur…the lion …death angel for sinners and god's angle for down trodden.

the world address him goon,criminal,anti social element, who can kidnap any one ,ask for protection money if you are setteling in his territory…protection from his own wrath…
He was well known for his anger, for the way he treats his enemies…"a bullet in heart.." and that's only if he finds him (enmy) worthy of it for rest his cluthes were enough, shedding blood was his daily business ..breaking necks and bones in seconds… for his opponents he is Devil in true senses …
No doubt he was the lion in real sense…a wild lion. But One day it all get changed…as an Angel entered in his barren life and he get obessed by Her…

He had seen her in a brawl (form his point of view it was nothing) at market…she was escaping from blasts and was hidden behind a poll when he was about to shoot that bloody Natte Thakur who dared to step in , in His territory …
When His eyes met her's ..he felt lost…as world was paused, there was no time no space for him…he pulled the trigger but for the first time in his life his bullet missed the aim and Natte was shot in arm only. That was the first time he heard her voice..no actually her scream…as Natte's blood reached her when the bullet struck his arm. And her scream made him realize that he had missed the shot… He was wondring how he waiseted his bullet…but when he looked up for his angel she was not there…he don't know why…but he felt a fire in himself …a fire of desire to see her one more time…he frisked out whole market but she was no where..she just disappeared .
Since that moment he find himself stucked in that moment, in those eyes…there was nothing for him…still he find a solace in them…
Will he be successful to find that solace again…what will he do when they will meet next time? Will they meet again? What will be her reaction toward his passion?

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
interesting intro waiting for first updtBig smile n yes awsm avita creatationThumbs Up perfect...
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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 3:26am | IP Logged

And here we go for the first Update of this SS...


CHAAHAT


For the first time in his life , he was returning home without killing his enemy and somewhere it was bothering him but he was still in that moment when he saw HER…those eyes…those were filled with fear yet they were so captivating, He fell  on chair staring at ceiling and remembering of HER.

No one has guts to disturb him in that state, for rest of people around him , he was tense as for the first time his enemy dodged him. That time Bahuji console him –"Kauno baat nahi babua ji… kabo kabo ho jaat hai, baki hoi sakat hai uuki zindagi ke kachu din abhi bakki hon… ab imaa Aapki kauno galti nahi."

Her touch caused him to return in reality from his dreamland as she placed her hand on his shoulder.

Avdhesh-"Haan!.."

Bhauji-"Are Haan kaa? Hum kab se aapse baat kar rahen hain aur aap pata nahi kaun khayalon me khoye hain…(She sensed that it was not only Natte's escape which was bothering Avdhesh)Kaa baat hai? Sab theek to hai naa!"

Avdhesh felt bit more restless and frustrated as he find himself unable to reply for her question. It was first time he dn't want to reply her, even he don't want to see anyone around himself, except that Girl. But Why? He was unable to get that and this inability was more frustrating and he replied back in anger

-"Ka hona ka hai… Sab theek hai…(He looked back in anger, to find his Bhauji hurt by his words, so he tried to cover his anger)Bas uu Naate nikal gaya haumre haath se."

Bhauji thought it was really frustration of Naate that he replied her in anger, after all everyone was well aware of Bhaiya ji's anger.

Bhauji-"Kauno baat nahi Babua ji, aaj nahi to kal…marna to uuka aapke haatho se hi hai naa…akhir Lalanpur me apne pair jamane hi koshish ki hai usne."

She was putting fule in the fire of his anger… while Avdhesh was trying to forget that girl and revenge from Natte was only way seemed to him, to made himself busy. At that moment Chulbul came running-

"Bhaiya ji…" but he stopped his word in mid as he found Avdhesh talking with Bhauji.

Avdhesh-"Ka hua Chulbul…aise bhaage kahe chale aa rahe ho, kahun aag lagi hai kaa?"

Chulbul-"Bhaiyaa ji…Uuu.."

Avdhesh-"Uu Uu ka be bol naa ka hua? Kauno khabar haath lagi kaa?"

Chulbul-"Haan Bhaiyaa ji…uu Natte… uu sasura aaj itni maar kha bhi nahi sudhra…khabar aai hai ki uu kauno ladki ka badi banaye hai..uu jungal maa"

Avdhesh-"Bandi banaye hai…humre hote…uu sasura humre gaon walon se firouti lega… Chalo re…"

He roared and left to kill his enemy again…this time he was firm to kill him only…and no one can stop him, not any girl…not any pair of eyes..not anyone else. But at somewhere he was still stuck with the memories of those eyes and expecting to see her some day again.

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EmbarrassedThis is all for this Update hope you liked itEmbarrassed

Embarrassedam i correct or not please let me knowEmbarrassed

EmbarrassedThanks for readingEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 9:03am | IP Logged
very nice Thumbs Up u u ladki hamri arpita he hogi naWink
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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
wow wonderfull update my sweeto joli. love it tooo
mere naam par hahaha
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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged
ChahatDay Dreaming

Mera toh dil aa gaya tere SS par... kab update karegi???????????????EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Ayyee Hayee... Lion Avdhesh and Angel Arpita.. make striking pairWinkWinkWink
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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prash_t

ChahatDay Dreaming

Mera toh dil aa gaya tere SS par... kab update karegi???????????????Embarrassed


Ayyee Hayee... Lion Avdhesh and Angel Arpita.. make striking pairWinkWinkWink


Sacchi Mrs.Thakur :)

Chal kal karti hun Update...vo bhi fullto OS type

Mean looonggg wali Embarrassed

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suvarnaawt

very niceThumbs Up u u ladki hamri arpita he hogi naWink

Thanks for liking Suvarna dear...:)
About the gal hehe...who else it can be ;p
don't forget to check out tomorrow for coming update Wink

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