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Fantastic update jiji. Superb, amazing, mindblowing, Jus loved it.3 Claps for you.Clap Clap Clap Monkey Emoticons
I love Manyata's chharacter in this FF.Wink Wohoo first scene was mindblowing.Tongue Manyata wanted to leave the house but Uday stopped her, he threw her  on the floor n she hurted.Cry Cry Poor Manyata but thank god cos of this Uday again changed into a caring Uday, He loves  her so much but angry cos of that silly contract.Ouch Monkey Emoticons
Oh Krishy convo with Manyata n Uday on the phone, Sho cute.Monkey Icons Yoyo I love all the scenes of Krishy. MY SPIDERMAN.Monkey Icon
MajnuAngry Wolf in the sheep's clothing, Jhoota kahin ka.Angry  Monkey Icon
When Uday saw him with Manyata my heart was saying, 4-5 Punch maaro Uday iss Majnu ko"Monkey Winks
Uday n Manyata both went Devgarh palace to picked up Krishy for two days. Krishy came with his spiderman bag.LOL I jus love this boy.Monkey Icon
All scenes in devgarh palace was  very nice.Smile
Krishy in Jaigarh  palace n met with Majnu.Angry He's a cute messangerMonkey Icons Yoyo always gave messages to Unnati n Jay of Vijay n Raj.
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The whole update was amazing jiji, wonderful.  beautifully written.Clap Every scene ,every dialogue, everything was awesome.Monkey Icon Cici
OMG Precap was so scary, Krishy kidnapped.Shocked Amrit I'll kill you ChurailAngry  How dare you to kidnap Krishy.Angry I think her hand is behind this fiasco.Ouch Monkey Icons
Thanks for the fantastic update n PM.Monkey Emoticons
Great work jiji.Monkey Emoticon
Do update ASAP. I really can't wait to read the next chappy.Tongue
Pls,Pls, Pls update next part soon.Icon Monkey Yoyo
LOVE YOU JIJI.Hug Hug n sorry for the late comment.Embarrassed
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A+ FOR THIS UPDATE JIJI.Hug
Thanks Sona Bacha
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too many praises aur A plus bhi dehdiya itnah acha toh nahiye tha
I'm glad you enjoyed it
Yes mean UV jaldi seh caring UV bangaya
I love krishy too hes a very cute bacha i love spiderman too
Bacha you're doubting Ladoo again so this time ur convinced he bad... poor Ladoo... Uday didnt punch him this time maybe in the future episLOL
Yeah good prediction might be Amrit behind the kidnapping
I'm writng the next part right now if its done by tonight will post it if not 2mrw
 
 

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awesome update momClap

uday is behaving like a monsterOuchmanyta ko dakka mar ke hurt kiaOuchbad boyLOLakash is a loser i hate her and her sister amrit naam jitna acha kaam itne bureAngrystupid girl i hate herAngry krishy bacha is too cute is he lost?Shocked

do continue soon momHug

sorry for late commentLOLur ria bacha is too lazzyROFL




 
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i thought u like bad uvLOL
its majnu end of the day so obvious hes a loserLOL Amrit is worser true bacha
yh krishy bacha is adorable and cute... yh maybe keep reading it will be revealed in next partLOL
will update in a few minz... i know bacha its alrightLOL

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awesome update momClap

uday is behaving like a monsterOuchmanyta ko dakka mar ke hurt kiaOuchbad boyLOLakash is a loser i hate her and her sister amrit naam jitna acha kaam itne bureAngrystupid girl i hate herAngry krishy bacha is too cute is he lost?Shocked

do continue soon momHug

sorry for late commentLOLur ria bacha is too lazzyROFL




 
Thank Ria BachaHugMonkey Icon
i thought u like bad uvLOL
its majnu end of the day so obvious hes a loserLOL Amrit is worser true bacha
yh krishy bacha is adorable and cute... yh maybe keep reading it will be revealed in next partLOL
will update in a few minz... i know bacha its alrightLOL

mom i m ur bacha now tu muje bad boy uv kyun acha lage gaROFLyayy update fastBig smile

ps : mom app ne ek cheez note nai kiLOLmein ne akash ko him ki jaga her likha haiROFLsee Winki m very evilEvil SmileROFL

 
true bachaLOLROFL i am updating once im done with my food... i thought it was a typo very bad bacha poor majnu... evil toh nahiye ho kyunki ur my bacha LOLMonkey Emoticon

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Part 64

Krish- so now that I'm here Bua lets play

Manyata- Krishy first have your lunch

Krish- Bua I'm not hungry please

Manyata- No lunch first ok now come on

Krish- Prince Udayveer tell Bua I don't want to eat

Uday-  Krishy first you eat your lunch then we will all go out ok

Krish was very excited now

Krish- where are we going Prince Udayveer tell me

Uday- Krishy bacha that's a surprise ok so first lunch

Krish- ok Prince Udayveer

Manyata- Krishy Bua was saying for ages lunch you weren't listening very bad here I thought you were on my side

Uday- Krishy bacha I think you're Bua is jealous you love me the most

Manyata- shut up Uday Krishy loves me the most

Uday- he loves me the most

Manyata- no me

Krish- I love both of you (he hugged them)

Unnanti- Dada.. Bhabhi lunch is served chaliyeh come on Krishy bacha

Rajbir- Unnanti Krishy toh hum sabko bhool gaya hai sirf Manveer ko love kartha hai humhe nahiye hum Di aur Jiju seh complain karenghe

Remisha- good idea Bhai hum bhi

Unnanti- Krishy yeh hum kya sone rehay hai

Krishy- ok ok I love all of you so no need to be upset aur Mamu agar aapneh hammari complain ki mummy aur daddy seh hum aapko J mami ka letter nahiye denghe (he laughed)

 

Rajbir- J neh hamare liye letter diya kahaan hai give me

Krishy- baad mein ab i'm hungry

Manyata- chaloh bacha aaj sab kuch tumhara favourite banah hai

Uday- pasta, salad aur dessert mein chocolate cake

Krishy- yummy

Every had lunch now everyone was feeding Krishy chocolate cake

Manyata- me first

Uday- no I'm first

Rajbir- tum sanseh bareh hum hai me first

Unnanti- no hum pehele

Everyone was fighting

Remisha- hum sabseh choteh so me first (she fed him)

Krishy- thank you Maasi

Remisha- you're welcome bacha

Everyone else fed him too

Manveer- one more Krishy bacha

Amrit wasn't very happy seeing Manveer happy with all family

Amrit- Akash inne sabki jaan basti hai isse badmash bache par hamareh paas plan hai (muted)

Akash- nice plan Jiji lekin aapko sach mein lagtha hai Manyata Uday ko chordenghee

Amrit- 110% hum jo bhi plan karteh hai soch samaj keh karteh hai

Akash- of course Jiji you are best at making evil plans

Amrit- ab tum hamare saat ho get to work

Akash- yes Jiji hum aapkeh saat hai

Remisha- Akash tum wahaan kya kar rehey ho have lunch

Akash- I had lunch already ab hum apneh Krishy bacha keh saat khelenghe so Krishy Monopoly or Scrabble

Krishy- both I also like Ludo and snake and ladders

Akash- hum abhi lekeh athe hai

Everyone was playing games

Uday- Princess you cheated

Manyata- no I never cheat I won fair and square

Krishy- Prince Udayveer Bua is a cheater now start again ok I will be partners with you too Monopoly is my favourite game I want to win houses ok... mujhe Spiderman ka ghar chahiye ok

Manyata- miljaygha Krishy aur humhe Batman ka

Rajbir- hum jeetenghe aur Spiderman, Batman, the incredible,  sab mere

Akash- start the game

Krishy- Prince Udayveer hum jeetenghe ok

Uday- yes bacha hum he jeetenghe aaj thak Price Udayveer has never lost

Akash- maybe this is the first time you might lose.. I'm only joking may the best person win

Manveer and Krishy had won

Krish- we won we won wohooo aur mujhe Spiderman ka ghar milgaya

Manyata- aur humhe Batman, Cinderella, aur mera sabseh favourite Theodore ka ghar hes the cutest

Uday- humneh diya ok

Manyata- haan haan so hum ek team mein teh aur mera good luck charm Krishy bhi saat tha see hum hamesha ki tarah jeeteghe like we use to in London

Krishy- yes bua like old times (he hugged her)

Uday- where's my hug Bacha?

Kripa- sorry Prince Udayveer group hug I love you both

Uday- we love you too

Amrit wasn't very happy

Giriraj- Krish aiya hua hai kaise ho beta

Krish- I'm fine aur aap

Giriraj- hum toh bahuth khush hai aapko dhekar pureh ghar mein khushiyaan agayi hai... Uday beta humneh aapko itnah hasteh hue bahuth dino baad dhekah aiseh he khush rahiye hai

Giriraj went to the other room

Amrit- Giri Uncle hum aap keh liye chai mangvathe hai

Giriraj- no Amrit beta hum baad mein leghe hum toh aaj bahuth khush hai hamare ghar Krish aiya hua hai

Amrit-  Giri Uncle Krish toh sirf 2 days keh liye aiyah hai baad mein ghar chalah jaygha aur aapka ghar phirseh suno ho jaygha...hum umeed karteh hai aapko Jaigar ka waaris miljaye bahuth he jald lekin chances bahuth kaam hai akhir aapki bahu... koi baat nahiye akhir umeed peh duniya chalthi hai

Amrit went

Now Giriraj was very angry he went to his room

Akash- Jiji... Jiji

Amrit- kya hai Akash humneh tumhe kaha tha nah har waqt Manyata aur Uday keh saat rehenah tum yahaan kya kar rehey ho

Akash- Jiji woh hum aapko bataneh aiye teh keh Uday, Manyata aur wakhi sab bahaar geh hue hai

Amrit- Kya kaha

Akash- patha nahiye Ramesh Singh batha raha tha kisi park mein ghe hue hai sab

Amrit- tum bilkul bewaqoof ho ek number keh ghadeh ho tum saat mein kyun nahiye ghe

Akash- Jiji woh hum soh rehey teh apneh kamreh mein

Amrit- Kya isse waqt tum soh rehey teh hum khode jathe hai unkeh peeche tum kisi kaam keh nahiye ho

Akash- Jiji rokiyenah hum bhi chalteh hai

Akash ran after Amrit

Akash- Jiji I'm sorry humhe maaf kardijiye Jiji meri baat toh soniyeh

Amrit- Akash tum gharpeh raho useless ho tum

Amrit left

Now we see Manveer, Rajbir, Unnanti, Remisha all having loads of fun with Krish

Manyata- Uday hum bahuth khush hai aaj itneh dino baad itnah enjoy kiya thank you

Uday- no need of thanks ab aapko itnah pareshaan kiya hai made you cry so much ab khush karnah bhi mera kaam hai right

Manyata- yeah that's true (she hugged him)

Unnanti- Vijay hum busy hai sorry baad mein baat karenghe

Vijay- Unnanti busy ho aise kaise kya kar rahiye ho tum keh busy ho hum tumahare honeh waleh pati hai aur tum humseh baat nahiye karnah chahathi

Unnati- let me remind you abhi tum hamare pati nahiye ho ok aur hum apneh Krishy bacha keh saat bahuth enjoy kar rehey hai we are in funland park

Vijay- without me aap sab masti kar rehey ho you all are evil I tell you very evil ab dheknah hum bhi tumseh baat nahiye kareghe

Unnanti- that's fine with me bye Vijay

She disconnected the phone

Vijay- Unnanti hello Unnanti

J came inside the room

J- Vijay Bhai why are you screaming?

Vijay- Unnanti neh hamara phone khat diya she has no time for me aur woh sab Krishy keh saat funland mein geh hue hai

J- Vijay Bhai don't be upset ab kuchi dino ki baat hai phir Unnanti bhabhi yahaan ajayghi permanently ok till them aap hamare saat time spend kijiye hum sab shopping ja rehey Viraj Bhai aur Bhabhi wait kar rehey chaleh cheer up Vijay Bhai ok

Vijay- ok chaloh hum apne J bhai keh saat shopping karteh hai

J- yeah Vijay Bhai I got loads to buy

Back to Funland

Krish- Mamu humhe woh spiderman toy he chahiye hai

Rajbir- that one

Krish- yeah

Rajbir- ok Bacha Mamu will win it for you

Krish- yay!!!! Mamu you're the best

Rajbir- I know

Remsiha- that's not fair what about Maasi?

Krish- i love you too Maasi

Remisha- awww mere bacha

Uday- Krishy yeh loh candyfloss

Manyata- one for me and one for my Krishy bacha

Krishy- thank you Prince Udayveer, Bua I want to go on the big rollercoaster

Manyata- ok chaloh bacha

Meanwhile it was the perfect opportunity for Akash to get the real papers

Now we see Amrit in Funland

Rajbir- what are you doing here Amrit?

Amrit- Uday kahaan hai

Rajbir- Why tumhe iseh matlab?

Remisha- we came to enjoy ourselves you have no right to interrupt our outing

Amrit- Just shut up do you know who you're talking to hum Yuvrani Amrit hai samji stay in ur limits no one speaks to me rudely

Manveer and Krishy came

Manyata- I will never go on that ride again I thought I was going to die

Uday and Krishy were laughing

Manyata- not funny

Krishy- Its ok Bua (he hugged her) we all know you're very scaared aindha aapko saat lekeh nahiye jaighe ab hum humhe haunted house mein janah hai

Manyata- what no wahaan toh evil witches hothi hai aur bhoot no hum nahiye jaighe

Uday- hum zaroor jaighe agar nahiye janah hai hum utha keh lejayghe aapko haunted house is not scary at all everything is fake

Manyata saw Amrit

Amrit- Uday

Manyata- agayi sabshe barhi churail ab haunted house mein janeh ki zaroorth he nahiye iska chehra dhekloh

Krishy- agreed Bua

Both started laughing

Uday- Amrit aap yahaan

Amrit- Jee hum aapko disturb nahiye karnah chahateh teh lekin hum abhi jaanah paregha Rawalghar wahaan ek important meeting hai aur Giri Uncle ki tabiyaat tike nahiye toh humneh soacha hum aur aap chaleh jaye aur Manyata can look after Uncle Giri humhe abhi janah hai chaliye

Manyata- Amrit hum chalehjayghe saat tum ghar joa

Uday- Manyata tum ghar joa aur Dad ka kyaal raknah akhir tum unki bahu hoo hum aur Amrit chaleh jathe hai chaliyeh

Amrit- Jee chaliyeh

Uday- Rajbir sabka ka kyaal raknah

Rajbir- I will do don't worry

Mnayata wasn't very happy and Amrit was very happy that Uday went with her rather than going with Manyata

The next day we see Akash giving papers to Uday

Akash- yeh loh papers aaj humneh apna dosti ka faraz nibhadiya

Uday- hum ineh verify kareghe

Akash- wakeel sab aiyi

Lawyer- yes they are legal papers and they are correct

Uday- lekin agar humneh ineh destroy bhi kardiya Amrit keh paas copies hoghi aur (interrupted)

Akash- I got both copies Uday ineh jalah doh don't think too much hum Jiji ko dheklenghe hum hamesha seh tumhare aur Manyata keh saat hai

Uday burnt the papers he was very happy

He thanks Akash and went to talk to Manyata

Uday- Princess aaj seh yeh contract finish humneh papers destroy kardiye ab humhe koi alaag nahiye karsaktha

Manyata hugs Uday

Manyata- kabseh wait kar rehey teh tum humhe Princess kahoghe Manyata nahiye I'm very happy Uday

No we see Krishy and Rajbir playing football in the garden

Krishy kicked the ball outside so Rajbir went to get it

Rajbir- Krishy I will go and get it

Krishy- Ok Mamu

Akash- Rajbir Krishy kahaan hai he was with you

Rajbir- Krishy toh yahin tha Krishy bacha where are you???

Remisha- Bhai Krishy isn't inside either

Amrit- Remisha kya hua why are you crying?

Remisha- Amrit woh Krish patha nahiye kahaan hai

Akash- Remisha tum chintha maat karoh we will find him(he hugs her)

Manveer come down

Manyata- (happily) Krishy kahaan ho bacha your Prince Udayveer is taking us to cafe to eat your favourite ice cream sundai jaldi aao no more hide and seek

Uday- I will find him

Unnanti- (cryingly) Dada... Krishy ka spiderman toy milah it has blood on it (she hugs him)

Manyata runs outside

Manayta- KRISHY BACHA!!!!!!! KRISHY!!!!!!!!!

Uday goes after her

Manyata-(cryingly) Uday mere Krishy bacha kahaan hai agar auseh kuch hogaya toh hum marjayghe please find him please Uday

Uday hugged Manyata

Uday- we will find Krishy I promise

Amrit was laughing inside

Akash- JIJI!!!!! KAHAAN HAI KRISHY!!!!

Amrit- tumhe iseh matlab auseh humneh ek safe jhagha mein rakha hai don't worry kuchi dino mein leh iayghe auseh

Akash- Jiji hum aapkeh saat  hai so aapko humhe toh batanah paregha na

Amrit- auseki zaroorth nahiye hai tum joh jakeh une sab ko hauslah doh bechaari Manyata (she laughed)

We see Krishy in a basement tied up and unconscious

TO BE CONTINUED

 

 

 

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