Unwanted Thread 2 Manveer FF LAST PART PG123 - Page 67

Originally posted by: sweetshab

nice update anam :)
Finally ManVeer ki shaadi hogayi ...but UV is still angry with bechari manyata ...jayy rabba akash ne meri manya kaha fittey muhh wo udayveer ki manyata hai :P ufff ye amrit ..anam do me favor add me in this FF aur mera 1 khoon maaf kardena :P

Cont soon :) :D

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏👏thanks...great...well done...👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Anam sorry for not commenting on time...I read it but thought will comment later as was a bit busy...really great episode and I liked the way the story is progressing...😊But plz Amrit ka chapter khatam karo plz...I dnt want UV to be so much angry on his Manyata...Plz their marriage should not break for this amrit-akash...

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

Superb update Anam dear👍🏼

So after so much suspense...finally marriage happened but UV is still angry with M...poor M😒

and m wondering more what is coming next...as that Amrit is so after UV and I think Akash is gonna play a cupid role...hai na😳

Update soon dear...story is on its climax scenes yaar...🤗

Originally posted by: Asmimelody

awesome di:)loved it:)pls pls continue soon...

Originally posted by: AndreaBaid

OMG OMG OMG I am so happy finaaly an update mommy you are too good luv ya 😉😉
now i really hate this amrit she is such a 🤬 and this aakash well he is perfectly fine till now but can't actually have a point of view about him right now as your precaps and saying are very MISLEADING like in the end of last update you was like "shaddi hogi bhi nahi" and i litereally was thinking ki manyata ki shaadi nahi hogi but hogayi so can't predict your next new.
PLus Manveer Manveer Manveer gosh gotta love them even though it was not that romantic but i have always loved there fights too cause at the end of the day i Know Manveer wll be Manveer and
i trust you with that now plzz update soon can't wait anymore plus plzz make aakash evil cause i love dramas aur manyata ko jealous bhi karwao mommy jaise app shivani grandma se hote the jaab vo papa ke saath maaze karti thi 😉😉 but once again 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
ACTION SPEAKS LOUDER THAN WORD LOL AB TO YOU WOULD HAVE BEEN DEAF AFTERALL SO MANY CLAPS SUNNI PADHE😃😃

 

hey... can anyone tell me how to write a ff... i will start writting it tomorrow... will giv u the link... do read...

Originally posted by: nityatandon

hey... can anyone tell me how to write a ff... i will start writting it tomorrow... will giv u the link... do read...

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Part 62

Manyata went upstairs to talk to Uday

Manyata- Uday ab bas hogaya stop ignoring me

Uday was still quiet

Manyata- Uday please talk to me yeh tumhe kya hogaya hai

She put her hand on his face

Manyata- please Uday humseh baat karoh hum apneh halkat vede ko bahuth miss kar rehey yaahan hokeh bhi tum humseh koi baat   (Uday moved her hand)

Uday- (Angrily) humhe tumseh koi baat nahiye karni hai

There was a knock on the door

Uday- come in

Amrit- Uday nashthe key liye bhulaneh aiye teh

Uday- haan Amrit chaliyeh  hum saat mein nastha karteh hai

Amrit and Uday leave

Manyata was jealous

Manyata- Isse Amrit ko mein nahiye choronghee mere Uday keh saat nahtha kareghi abhi iseh nashtha karwathi hoon

She also goes down

Manyata sat by Uday and Amrit was sitting opposite

Amrit- Uday yeh loh toast

Manyata- Uday ko toast pasand nahiye hai… humneh aaj hamaari peheli rosoyi banayi hai so Uday will eat kheer only kyun Papa ji akhir humneh itneh pyaar seh banayi hai

Amrit- lekin humneh toh toast aur fruit specially Uday keh liye banaya hai

Manyata- Uday sirf aur sirf kheer kiaghe right

Rajbir- kheer toh bahuth achi bani hai

Unnanti- amazing have some Dada

Giriraj- beta have some akhir hamaari Manyata neh peheli rosoyi banayi hai

Manyata served Uday

Amrit wasn't very happy

Manyata- kaisi hai Uday

Uday-(Angrily) bahuth buri too much sugar after eating this hum diabetic hojayghe humhe marneh ka iraadha hai kya Manyata (he threw the plate on the floor)

Amrit- Uday calm down tum ghusah maat ho yeh loh fruit salad

Manyata- Uday isse mein itni sugar nahiye hai humneh toh (interrupted)

Uday-(Angrily) just shut up Manyata ab please be quiet aur humhe araam seh nastha karneh doh

Giriraj- yeh kya batameezi hai Uday

Uday- Humhe kheer achi nahiye laghi so I threw it… isse mein batameezi ki kya baat hai

Giriraj told the servants to clean the floor

Akash came down

Amrit- Uday yeh lot fruit salad tum ghusah maat jo bechaari Manyata neh galthi seh hogaya hogha

Rajbir- iss mein sugar is perfect Uday Bhai

Unnanti- Dada aapko kya hogaya hai

Uday- humhe kuch nahiye hua ab humhe araam sehh nastha karneh doh.. Amrit fruit salad is perfect

Amrit- ofcourse hum joh bhi karteh hai everything is perfect

Manyata was upset and jealous

Akash- Manyata tum chintha maat karoh sab kuch tike hojaygha kheer sach mein bahuth achi hai I really like it

Manyata- Thanks Akash lekin hamare Uday ko achi nahiye laghi

Akash- don't be upset hum Uday ko aur Jiji ko acha sabak sikayghe tum chintha maat karoh… mujhe yakeen hai Jiji neh he zydah sugar dhalah hogha Uday ki kheer mein

Manyata- yeah I think so too kya tumhe woh papers mileh

Akash- Nahiye abhi nahiye humneh Jiji ka kamra search kiya kuch nahiye milah hum dhoond lenghe you don't worry

Manyata- Thanks Akash

After a while Viraj, Jhanvi and Krishy come to collect Manyata

Krish- BUA!!!!!!!!!!!

Manyata hugged Krish

Manyata- Krishy Bacha I missed you so much

Krish- Bua why are you crying please don't cry (he wiped her tears) Prince Udayveer what is this?

Uday- Bacha come on you know how your Bua is she missed you so much so she's being a cry baby

Krish- Bua no crying now hum aapko leneh aiye hai

Remisha- Krishy

Krish- Maasi!!!!! (he hugs her)

Remisha- hws my Krishy bacha?

Krish- I'm very happy I'm taking Bua home today

Remisha- What about Maasi?

Krish- Maasi you can come too

Akash- Krish beta

Krish- Akash Uncle kaise hai aap

Akash- I'm fine I'm very happy to see you

Amrit- Krish beta yeh loh mitaai

Krish- humhe nahiye chahiye hai

Uday- kyun bacha Amrit itneh pyaar seh lekeh aiyi have some it's very nice

Krish- no Prince Udayveer hum isee horrible aunty keh haato kuch nahiye kaighe

Jhanvi- Krish aise nahiye kehteh beta

Manyata- hum aapna bag lekeh athe hai

Amrit- hum leh athe hai

Manyata- nahiye I will get it myself

Manyata goes upstairs to get her bag

Viraj- Rajbir tumhaari shaadi keh baat hum sab London ja rehey hai maine tickets kardiya hai

Rajbir- Jee Bhai lekin aapneh isse bareh mein Manya ko bataya

Viraj- gharpeh baat kareghe.. I'm sure she won't have any problem waise bhi woh yahaan bahuth khush hai Uday keh saat

Uday- ofcourse Viraj Bhai aap chintha maat kijiye hum Manyata ko bahauth khush rakenghe itnah khush rakenghe she won't even remember you

Viraj- humhe patha hai isliye hum behfikar hokeh wapis ja rehey hai soon

Jhanvi- Manya agayi

Rajbir- Jiji humhe bhi saat leh chaliyeh nah

Jhanvi- no Rajbir tum Devgar nahiye chalsakteh tum yahin roh

Rajbir- not fair

Krish- Mamu don't worry hum Mami ko aapko message dehdenghe

Unnanti- kaunsa message

Krish- Mami its secret aur waise bhi aap 4 days mein aneh walhi hai Devgar Palace will tell you then (he hugged her) bye Mami (he whispers in her ear) aur haan Mami aapko Mamu bahuth miss kar rehey hai sham ko phone kareghe

Unnanti- (whispers back) hum bhi bahuth miss kar rehey hai aapkeh Mamu ko

Krish- ok Mami bathadenghe Mamu ko ab hum chalteh hai… bye Prince Udayveer shaam ko anah hamare ghar humneh ek surprise plan kiya hai

Uday- ofcourse aiyghe bye bacha

Viraj, Jhanvi, Manyata and Krish left

Amrit- Uday humneh shaam ko ek party rakhi hai aap ko anah hai

Uday- hum zaroor aiyghe.. Dad ab hum bahaar ja rehey hai

Uday left

Amrit was very happy

Now we see Akash and Amrit talking in Amrits room

Akash- Jiji yeh aap acha nahiye kar rahiye hai

Amrit- Akash yeh tum kya kehey rehey ho

Akash- aap jaan bhoje kar Manyata aur Uday (interrupted)

Amrit- hum jo kuch bhi kar rehey hai acha kar rehey Uday hamara hai ab bas yeh paanch mahineh pooreh ho aur hum Manyata ko isse mahal sehhh dhake markeh nikalenghe…

Akash- Jiji aap Manyata ka ghar barbaad nahiye karsakthi hum aapko yeh nahiye karneh dengeh

Amrit- Akash sab kuch ho chukka hai ab tum kuch nahiye kar sakteh hai… Manyata aur Uday neh divorce papers par bhi sign kardiye tehh binah papers pareh tike paanch mahineh baad seedhe divorce aur phir meri aur Uday ki shaadi

Akash- kya Jiji yeh aapneh kaise

Amrit tells him all the plan

Amrit- Ab Akash seedhe seedhe hamara saat doh hum jaanthe hai tum Manyata ko pasand karteh ho isliye auski tarafdari kar rehey ho… divorce keh baad hum tumhaari shaadi karwadenghe Manyata seh

Akash was in deep thought

Meanwhile we see Devgar Kingdom everyone is very happy to see Manyata…

Krishy- Mami, Mama jaldi sehhh choco cake lekeh aao humhe khana hai I'm hungry

Viraj- Krishy beta pehele Lunch ok no choco cake

Jhanvi- yeah ur Daddy is right

Krishy- not fair Bua tell them

Manyata- Krishy bacha pehele lunch karoh ok

Vijay/J- Krishy bacha did you give our messages

Krishy- I did lekin choco cake keh baad will tell you what they said

Vijay/J- not fair

Nishimah- kya baat hai Manya you look very upset

Raz- haan since you have come your very quiet

Manyata- nothing Bro, Bhabhi I'm fine

Viraj- Manya Bacha chaloh lunch is ready

Manyata- Jee Bhai

Everyone has lunch together

Shanaya/Vikz- Manya sorry sorry we are late went to do some shopping ab hum next week ko waapis ja rehey hainah London

Manyata- ab aiyi have lunch baad mein dono ki khabar lethi hoon

Krish- Mera choco cake choco cake

Rajmata- Krish aiseh shor nahiye machathe bad manners

Viraj showed his eyes to Krish

Krish- Sorry Great Dadisab hum aindah seh nahiye karenghe

Viraj- Krishy bacha ab yeh loh tumhara cake now eat it quietly

Krish- Sorry Daddy, Mummy, both Dadi and both Dadu's and everyone else

Everyone had chocolate cake

Krishy- Bua it's so yummy Mummy neh banaya hai its best

Viraj- aur haan bacha aaj humneh aapke liye pistachio ice cream bhi mangvayi hai

Shaina/Komal- Viraj beta tumhe patha hai she is allergic

Rohan/Brijraj- She will get ill so you cant have it

Viraj- sirf thoda sa itneh dino sehh isse neh kaya nahiye

Manyata- Bhai honestly I'm full baad mein khalenghe ab hum apneh kamreh mein araam karteh hai

Shanaya- mein bhi chalthi hoon saat

Vikz- mein bhi

Everyone goes to Manyatas room

Krish- Bua aaj raat roke jayeenah hum saat mein spiderman dhekenghe

Shanaya- Krish bacha hamare saat dheknah

Vikz- we will play the wi together fifa 13 what say Krish?

Krish- nice ideas lekin humhe hamaari Bua chahiye hai (he hugged Manyata)

Manyata- Mera bacha hum yahin hai ok

Its evening now

Giriraj- yeh Uday abhi thak ghar nahiye aiyah hai auseh janah hai Manyata ko leneh

Unnanti- hum abhi Dada ko phone karteh hai

Just then Uday and Amrit come back happily..Uday was quite drunk

Amrit- Uday aapneh kuch zydah he drink karliyah

Uday- he was challenging me Yuvraaj Udayveer ko challenge diya humhe jeetnah tha

Amrit- I know but aab aapko araam ki zaroorth hai aiyi hum aapko aapke kamreh mein chordethe hai

Giriraj- Uday yeh sab kya hai aaj phir apneh itnah drink kiya aapko janah hai Devgar Manyata ko leneh yeh sab kya hai… Amrit beta aap thi nah wahaan yeh saab kaise hogaya…. (he told servant) Yuvraj sa ko kamareh mein lejoa aur Amrit beta tum bhi araam karoh hum khode jateh hai Manyata ko leneh

Amrit- Uncle Giri aap araam kijiye Akash chalah jaygha leneh kyun Akash joaghe nah

Akash- Uncle Giriraj auseki koi zaroorth nahiye hai kyunki Manyata aaj Devgar mein rokeneh walhi hai… auseneh shaam ko phone kiya tha hum aapko bathanah bhool gaye

Giriraj- that's good udhar he rehey aur kal subha he Uday auseh leh aiygha…

Amrit wasn't very happy

Amrit- Akash hamare kamreh mein chaloh

Akash followed Amrit

Meanwhile we see Manyata waiting for Uday just then she received a text from Akash and Manyata wasn't very happy

Krish- Prince Udayveer kahaan hai humneh toh sab surprise plan karliya hai

J- Krishy hum abhi Jiju sa ko phone karteh hai

Manyata- auseki koi zaroorth nahiye hai kyunki aaj hum yahin rokeneh waleh hai apneh Krishy keh paas aur hum saat mein spiderman bhi dhekenghe

Krish- (happily) really Bua

Manyata- Yes bacha.. Uday humhe kal leneh aiygeh humneh ghar mein sabko batha diya hai

Krish- YAY!!!!!!!

Krishy was really happy

Viraj- chaloh Krishy Bua toh rokneh walhi hum aapka surprise kal dekaienghe jab Uday aiygha ok

Krishy- ok Daddy ab hum upar ja rehey hai to watch spiderman

J/Vijay- hum bhi arahaye hai

Krish- chaliyeh Mami, Mamu

Everyone goes upstairs to watch Spiderman

J- Krishy aapkeh Mamu neh kya kaha tha

Vijay- aur aapki Mami neh kya kaha tha

Krish- movie keh baad batehghe

Manyata- haan movie keh baad ab be quiet

Back at Jaigar

Akash- Jiji hum aapke saat hai yeh sab hamaari planning thi humneh kaha Manyata sehh keh Uday is at party gharpeh nahiye hai aur tum kal ghar ajanah acha kiya nah Jiji

Amrit- bahuth acha kiya Akash so tum hamare saat ho

Akash- Yes Jiji hum hamesha aapke saat hai

Amrit- welldone Akash

Back to Devgar

Jhanvi- Krish movie finished ab chaloh soneh

Krishy hugged Manyata

Krishy- nahiye hum bua keh paas soieghe goodnight Mummy I love you

Jhanvi- no Krishy chaloh

Manyata- Bhabhi reheneh dijiye na please

Jhanvi- ok fine Bua ko thaang maat karnah ok

Krish- I won't Mummy

Jhanvi- J, Vijay tum dono chaloh apneh kamreh mein

J/Vijay- hum thodi dher baad chaleh jayghe Bhabhi abhi thodi baat karni hai Krishy aur Manyata sehh please

Jhanvi- ok fine hum chalteh goodnight

J/V/M/K- Goodnight

Jhanvi left

Krish- before you guys speak Mami my Rajbir Mamu really misses you and he said he will call you so ab aap jayee hai aapki phone call aneh walhi hoghi aur Vijay Mamu Unnanti Mami really missed you too ab jayee sojayi im very tired now aur mujhe meri Bua seh baat karni hai so goodnight sweet dreams

J/V- Goodnight bacha sweet dreams

Manyata- Krishy bacha kya baat karni hai Bua seh

Krish- Bua hum Rajbir Mamu ki shaadi keh baad sab waapis ja rehey hai London… hum aapke binah nahiye janah chahateh aapbhi saat chaliyeh nah please… humneh toh Daddy seh kehdiya hai hum nahiye jaiyghe hamaari Bua keh begaair

Manyata- Krishy Bacha Bua will also go with you aise kaise you can't go without Bua hum khode baat karlenghe Bhai sehh

Krish- ok Bua ab hum sojathe hai goodnight Bua

Manyata- goodnight bacha

The next day we see Jaigar Giriraj is shouting at Uday for being irresponsible

Uday- relax Dad hum apni marzi sehh jaieghe

Giriraj- no marzi abhi joa tum toh hamaari bezaathi karvaoghe

Amrit- Uday ab chaleh bhi joa koi baat nahiye hum bhi saat chalteh hai

Unnanti- Amrit tum hamare saat chaloh humhe shopping janah hai

Remisha- haan humhe bhi shaadi keh liye kuch cheeseh lenhi hai

Akash- hum chalteh hai saat Jiji chaliyeh na sab saat mein chalteh hai

Giriraj- Uday aap jayee jaldi sehh... Aur Amrit Beta aap Unnati keh saat jayee shopping aur haan Rajbir beta tum bhi saat chaleh joa Remisha tum bhi joa

Rajbir- Jee hum chaleh jateh hai saat

Amrit- lekin hum (interrupted)

Unnanti- aapki choice bahuth achi hai so aapko chalnah paregha saat

Uday leaves and the rest go shopping

Now we see Devgar

Uday comes everyone is happy to see him

Krish- Prince Udayveer you're here

Uday- yes bacha I'm here hw r u?

Krish- I'm fine

Jhanvi- Krishy go and call your Bua

Krish- yes Mummy

Krish went upstairs

Krish- Bua

Manyata- kya hua Krishy Bacha

Krish- Prince Udayveer is here lets go down

Manyata- coming bacha

Manyata and Krishy go downstairs

Krish- Prince Udayveer and Bua I have a surprise for you these are some gifts for you guys

M/U- Thank you Bacha but there was no need for these

Krish- yes it was I will miss u 2 (he hugs them)

Viraj- lunch karkeh janah dono

Jhanvi- maine toh Manya ka favourite lunch bhi banaya hai

Uday- Nahiye Bhabhi woh sab shaadi ki tyaari chal rahiye hai gharpeh so hum nahiye roke sakteh char dine baad shaadi hai

Jhanvi- haan woh toh hai humneh bhi bahuth shopping karli  bas jewellery left hai Unnanti ko saat lekeh jaiyghe.. hum shaam ko auseh phone kardenghe

Manyata- Bhabhi hum batha denghe Unnanti ko

Jhanvi- haan tike hai lekin phirbhi hum phone karkeh time batha denghe tum bhi saat chalnah

Manyata- Jee Bhabhi

Viraj- haan Bacha kal hum tumhe pick karlenghe

Manyata- jee Bhai

Uday- ab hum chalteh hai

Krish- Bye Prince Udayveer and Bua (he hugged them)

Now we see Manveer in Jaigar talking in their room

Manyata- Uday humhe patha hai tum hamaari care karteh hai isliye humhe leneh aiye aur tum pyaar bhi humseh he karteh ho pehele he tarah… so please ab yeh ghusah chordo aur hamare pehele waleh halkat vede banjoa

Uday laughed

Uday- Manyata you are highly mistaken hum tumhe waapis lekeh aiye isse ghar mein because of Dad not because of myself ab humhe janah hai excuse me

Manyata- Uday humhe kuch samaj mein nahiye araha what is your problem? Itni naraazki humseh just because of 1 contract humneh jo kuch bhi kiya only for you and you're being angry on me like humneh kisi ka khoon kardiya kyun Uday why?  Haan tell me aur jabseh hum aiye tum hum seh zydah ause ghamandi Yuvrani Amrit keh saat baatien kar rehey bahaar ja rehey ho... agar Yuvrani Amrit he pasand thi toh humseh shaadi kyun ki tumneh ... hum bahuth pareshaan hai lekin tumhe sirf bahar janeh ki parhi hui hai... ek baar kehdo keh tum humseh pyaar nahiye kareteh hum hamesha keh liye chaleh jaighe waapis apneh ghar

The door was open Amrit came inside

Amrit- Uday humhe aapseh kuch baat karni hai so will you come to the study please

Manyata was very angry

Manyata- (Angrily) GHAMANDI YUVRANI AMRIT AB TOH UDAY KI SHAADI HOGAYI AB TOH ISKAH PEECHA CHORE GET OUT OF OUR ROOM TUMHE TAMEEZ NAHIYE HAI KISSI KEH KAMREH MEIN ANEH SEH PEHELE KNOCK KARTEH HAI AB DAFFO HOJO YAHAAN (Manyata shut the door on her face)

Outside Akash was going past

Akash- Jiji kya hua bahuth ghuseh mein lage rahiye hai aap

Amrit- hum isse Manyata ko chorenghe nahiye (she went to her room)

Akash followed her

Amrit- AKASH APNEH KAMREH MEIN JOH HUM BAHUTH GHUSEH MEIN HAI

Akash- Jiji humhe woh papers dhekneh teh hum yakeen nahiye ho raha Manyata jaisi Lawyer neh aise kaise papers par sign kardiye... Jiji hum papaers cross check karlethe hai akhir hum bhi lawyer hai

Amrit- abhi woh papers hamareh paas nahiye hai lekin unpeh humneh dono Uday aur Manyata keh signatures liye hai

Akash- hum toh chahateh hai Manyata hamare paas ho jald seh jald isliye hum ause Uday ko woh papers diknah chahateh hai.. I HATE UDAY AUSENEH HUMSEH HAMAARI MANYATA KO CHEENA PEHELE AUSE ARJUN NEH AB UDAY NEH HUM UDAY KO CHORENGHE NAHIYE!!!!!

Amrit- Uday sirf hamara hai tum auseh kuch nahiye karoghe samjeh.. apneh kamreh mein joa

Akash- Jaldi kuch kijiye Jiji pehele seh he Uday aur Manyata keh beech mein problem hai agar hum ab kuch kareghe toh acha hogha agar inki problem sort hogayi toh phir ineh koi alaag nahiye karsaktha

Amrit- tum chintha maat karoh hum jaldi he kuch karteh hai abhi tum joa

Back to Manveer

Manyata- Uday ab kuch kahoghe ya nahiye look at me tell what is your problem?

Uday- (Angrily) Problem tum ho Manyata tum ho meri problem jabseh meri zindagi mein aiyi kuch bhi tike nahiye ho raha hai... pyaar karthe teh tumseh ab nahiye karteh kyunki tumneh humhe contract keh saat baandiya hai... so jab thak contract hai yeh shaadi hai  so ab khush raho yahaan isse mahal mein... you had no trust or faith in me so now don't expect me to treat you nicely

Manyata- Uday agar hum tumhe itnah pareshaan kar rehey hai hum ja rehey apneh ghar aur phir kabhi yahaan nahiye aiyghe humhe nahiye patha tha hamaari ek galthi ki wajah seh tum hamara pyaar bhool joaghe (she got her luggage bag put her clothes in)

She was about to go

Uday grabbed her arm

To be continued...