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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: -Niha-

Chii chiii what has amrit done? and Akash OMG! 🤣 akash is becoming a very popular kidnappers nowadays. anywayz

wow i hate amrit soo much
shes a big problem for manveer now
i hope they sort her out
and please no more kidnapping
becheri manyata, shes been kidnapped more then 3 times now 🤣
loved the updated mummy
do update soon
and thank you for the PM :)

 
Thanks Niha Bacha😃 she just told uncle Giri the truth bout Manyata... Akash has come too I dont know why but hes here... bacha no kidnapping let me clear the confusion Akash just sent Manaytas reports to Jaigar and Amrit said welldone to him... no more kidnapping now... I will do soon.. its alright😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: sweetshab

nice update anam :)

Sangeet hogaay
Reports bhii aagaye
Stupid manyat and super stupid contract poor UV
Amrit bahh i dnt even wanna say anything abt her she annoys me :/
Amrit kaafi nahi thi jo akash bhi aagay

Cont soon :)

 
Thanks Shab😃 yh sangeet is done yep all thanks to Akash he sent them... yeah Manyata had to explain to uncle giri uno how hes like otherwise no manveer wedding... yh i know she does... i duno why Akash is here keep reading to find out.. I wil do soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: rocker12

fab updates anam 

sorry dear for not commenting for soo long as i wasn't present on if it was an awesome chaps to read i am glad the flavour of ever  so stubborn m is still there loved them thnx for the pm :)

 
Thanks Haz😃  its ok at least u read now... yh she is still stubborn... its alright😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Anam Ali

 
 
Thanks😃 i do too😆 



Yaar uss Amrit ki bachi ko mere UV se shaadi math karne dena kk
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏👏thanks.well done.wonderfull...superb👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: afreshbegin



Yaar uss Amrit ki bachi ko mere UV se shaadi math karne dena kk

 
Keep reading to find out I will update 2mrw 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏thanks.well done.wonderfull...superb👏👏

 
Thanks a lot😃 I'm glad you enjoyed it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: swetsurati

Plzzz...update.

 
I will update in the evening😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 59

Uday was drunk and really angry he threw everything in his room

Rajbir and Unnanti saw all this

Unnanti- Dada yeh sab kya kar rehay hai aap yeh kya haalat bana rakhi hai apni

Rajbir- itni sharaab Uday Bhai aap toh keh rehey hum drink nahiye karthe aap aiyi hamare saat

Uday- nahiye I'm fine aap sab yahaan seh nikiliyeh humhe akelah chordijiye

Unnanti- Dada please bas kijiye (she took the alcohol bottle)

Uday snatched the bottle back

Uday- Unnanti, Rajbir niklo yahaan seh now yeh hamara hokum hai RIGHT NOW!!!!!!

Rajbir- Unnanti chaloh hum baad mein ajayghe

Unnanti- lekin hum Dada ko aise chorkeh nahiye ja sakteh

Rajbir- Unnanti we should leave now abhi Uday baat  karneh ki haalat mein nahiye hai

Uday- NIKLOH YAHAAN SEH NOW!!!!!

Rajbir and Unnanti leave

Unnanti- yeh Dada ko kya hogaya pehle jaise baatien kar rehay hai aur phirseh shaarab ko haat lagaya

Rajbir- patha nahiye kya hua hai Unnanti lekin aaj kuch toh hua hai sangeet mein shaamko patha nahiye kya

Unnanti- Dada aur Manyata ka jhagada hua hogha hum abhi Vijay ko phone karteh hai

Rajbir- aur hum J ko

They contacted J and Vijay both said everything was ok and Manyata was asleep.

 Now Rajbir and Unnanti were confused

Amrit- Unnanti, Rajbir kya baat hai aap loge jag rehey hai kal subha Uday ki haldi hai aur sham ko shaadi aap logo ko sonah chahiye hai

Unnanti- hum jah rehay hai aap apneh kaam seh matlab rakhiye why aren't you asleep?

Amrit- hum Uday keh kamreh mein ja rehey teh kuch zaroori baat karni thi

Unnanti- auseki koi zaroorth nahiye aap jayee apneh kamreh mein

Rajbir- Uday Bhai is asleep

Amrit- itni jaldi aaj uneh neend kaise agayi (she laughed)

Unnanti- matlab

Rajbir- Amrit tum toh janthi hoghi akhir hua kya hai humhe kuch samaj mein nahiye araha hai

Amrit- aap dono bhi na hum toh keh rehey teh kal unki shaadi haina isliye ab hum chalteh hai

Rajbir-  Unnanti ise Amrit ko zaroor kuch patha hai

Unnanti- haan hum kal Bhabhisa seh pochteh hai

Rajbir- yeah ab soa joa chintha maro ok goodnight

Unnanti- goodnight

Uday was really angry he was drunk his phone rang he didn't answer it

10 miss calls from Manyata

It rang again

Uday-(Angrily) WHY DO YOU KEEP RINGING WHAT DO YOU WANT MANYATA ANYTHING ELSE LEFT TO SAY ...I DONT WANT TO TALK AB KISI AUR CONTRACT KI BAAT KARNI HAI HAAN BOLO NA WHY YOU QUIET??... EVERYONE IS MAKING MY LIFES DECISION I WILL NOT BE QUIET NOW

Manyata- Uday try and understand I am also upset as much as you are please this is hard for me also... but it's the only way we can be together please try and understand humseh baat karo humneh jaan bhoje kar kuch nahiye kiya ok... I made a good decision aur you have faith in me in us so why are you so upset Uday kahiye tumneh drink toh nahiye kiya

Uday-  FAITH IF YOU HAD FAITH IN ME US YOU WOULDN'T BE SAYING ALL THIS SO IT'S BETTER IF YOU DONT TALK ABOUT ALL THIS... I CAN'T BELIEVE TUMNEH HAMARE PYAAR KO CONTRACT KEH SAAT BAANDIYA HAI SO BE HAPPY NOW YOU GOT YOUR WAY LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO... BUT LET ME TELL YOU FROM NOW ON I WILL DO WHAT I LIKE I WILL DRINK I DONT WANT TO TALK TO YOU MADE A JOKE OF ME

Manyata- UDAY TUM SHARAAB PIKAR HUMPEH CHILAH REHAY I'M TRYING TO EXPLAIN NICELY TO YOU BUT TUMHE SAMAJ NAHIYE ATHA HAI TOH SUNE HALKAT VEDE AB HUM TUMSEH SHAADI NAHIYE KAREGHE KHUSH REHAY APNI GHAMANDI YUVRANI AMRIT KEH SAAT... KAL JAB HOSH MEIN HONGHE HUMSEH MAAFI MAAT MAGNAH HUM BHI TUMSEH KOI BAAT NAHIYE KARNEH WALEH SAMJEH HAAN NAHIYE TOH

Uday- TUMHE KYA LAGTHA HAI HUM MARI JAREHAY HAI TUMSEH BAAT KARNEH KEH LIYE THEN YOU HIGHLY MISTAKEN YOUR HIGHNESS YUVRANI MANYATA... HUMHE TUMSEH KOI BAAT NAHIYE KARNI HAI... GO TO HELL!!!!

 (HE DISCONNECTED THE PHONE)

Manyata was really angry now

Manyata- HALKAT VEDI KHAMUNU KHANA SOOR KI AULAD HUMSEH AISE BAAT KI... AB HUM TUMHE MAAF NAHIYE KARENEH WALEH HAAN NAHIYE TOH

Uday was too drunk he fell asleep too

The next day we see Devgar palace Haldi Preparations were going on

Jhanvi- Krishy bacha please have your breakfast Mama has a lot to do today so please sit down and eat

Krish- I'm waiting for Bua

Jhanvi- Bua should be coming

Nishimah- I will go and get Manya

Jhanvi- No Nishimah you can't keep climbing stairs it's not good for your health, you sit down and have your breakfast I will go and get her

Viraj- Jhanvi!!!!

Jhanvi- Viraj your breakfast ready I need to go and get Manya

Jhanvi went upstairs

Raz comes down

Raz- Krish have your breakfast

Nishimah- I was saying the same to him also but he wants to wait for Manya

Vijay- he's very stubborn just like Manyata Bhai Krish at least have your toast she will be coming

Krish- No I will wait for my Bua

Manyata- Bua is here!!!! Mera Krishy Bacha (she hugged him) no being stubborn here's your jam toast now eat it

Krish- Yay Bua is here now I will have my breakfast

Jhanvi- Manya here's your cornflakes... Viraj here's your toast and tea... Raz tumhaari coffee and Nishimah coffee aur toast... how else is left? J kahaan hai

J- Bhabhi hum yahaan hai I ate ab bas kijiye aur betijayee hum aapko serve karteh hai ok

Jhanvi- Fine I will eat aak bahuth tyaariyaan be karni hai haldi hai afternoon mein aur sham ko shaadi

J- Bhabhi aap pareshaan maat hui sab ache seh hojaygha

Viraj- Manya bacha tike seh nashtha karo ok

Manyata- Don't worry Bhai I will waise bhi humhe koi kaam karnah he nahiye hai so hum araam seh nastha kareghe then me and Krishy are going to watch spiderman right Krishy

Krishy- Yes Bua

Jhanvi- Manya sham ko shaadi aur kuchi ghantoh mein haldi tumhe Spiderman dheknah Krishy keh saat

Manyata- Bhabhi abhi bahuth time hai now I'm done chaleh Krishy

Krish- Yes Bua

Manyata and Krish leave

Jhanvi- patha nahiye kya hogaya hai iss ladki ko zara bhi excited nahiye apni shaadi keh din

Nishimah- haan Bhabhi humhe bhi aiseh he lag raha hai

Raz- Nishimah tum aur bhabhi aiseh he stress kar rehay ho Manya is right its only 10am haldi toh 1 bhajeh hai aur shaadi 7.30pm so bahuth time hai

Viraj- exactly sab tayaariyaan hojayghi ok no need to worry

We see Manyata and Krish watching Spiderman both were really happy

Krish- Bua I want to be just like Spiderman

Manyata- Krishy Bacha you will be better than Spiderman when you grow up... you will the best superhero ever

Krish hugged her

Krish- Bua you will be leaving today I will miss you

Manyata- Krishy Bacha (she hugged him) I will miss you too don't worry Bua isn't going forever ok I will come and visit and every weekend sleepover ok one weekend I will come and next weekend I will take you

Krish- yay!!! that will be great Bua

Komal and Shaina came in the room

Shaina- Krish go downstairs now Mama is calling you

Krish kissed Manyata on the cheek

Krish- Bua I will be back later Mama is calling me

Manyata- ok Bacha

Krish went downstairs

Shaina- beta it's your haldi in 1 hour and your watching movies with Krish.. Manya when will you grow up.. Honestly at least aaj keh din toh (interrupted)

Manyata- Mama please ok it's still time yet ok I don't take years getting ready

Komal- Manyata beta yeh hai aapki haldi ka suit aapko yellow aur orange pasand nahiye isliye hum yeh walah suit lekeh aiye hai pink aur purple kaise hai

Manyata- (happily) bahuth acha hai Ma I love it (she hugged her)

Shaina- Manya ab jaldi seh tyaar hojo ok hum abhi athe hai

Komal- aur haan beta yeh set bhi pehnah

Manyata- ok Ma pehelenghe don't worry

Komal and Shaina left

Manyata got ready and went downstairs wearing this

Meanwhile in Jaigar

Unnanti- Dada aapki tabiyaat toh tike hai

Uday- Yes I'm fine Choti humneh haldi ko haat lagha diya hai ab tum iseh Devgar lejoh

Unnanti- Jee Dada hum jah rehay hai

Amrit- chaliye Unnanti ab Uday ki haldi toh hoghi ab hum Manyata ko haldi laghaeghe

Giriraj- Amrit beta papers bhi lejanah

Giriraj- Jee Uncle Giri lehjayghe

Uday got pissed off and went to his room

Now we see Unnanti, Amrit and Remisha in Devgar

They all put haldi on Manyata

Jhanvi/Nishimah- Ab hamaari turn agayi yaad hai haamri shaadi par kitni haldi lagayi thi humhe

Manyata- Sorry Bhabhis please thodi si lanah

Jhanvi/Nishimah- aise kaise no ways (they put loads of haldi on her)

J- ab hamaari turn

Manyata-  J ki bachi just a little bit ok warnah dheknah teri haldi par hum kaise baldala lenghe

J- ok ok Jiji thodi si tike hai happy

Manyata- very happy

Unnanti- ab hamaari turn (she put loads on)

Manyata- Unnanti ab deknah hum teri haldi mein tumhe choorenghe nahiye

Unnanti- Bhabhi sa I love haldi so I don't mind

Amrit also put haldi on Manyata

Amrit- (whispers) Papers tyaar hai jaldi seh sign kardo Manyata...

Manyata- kardenghe itni bhi jaldi kya hai Amrit

Amrit- woh humhe Uday keh bhi sign leneh hai isliye

Manyata- Uday neh sign nahiye kiye

Amrit- Nahiye lekin baad mein kardenghe for sure yeh loh pen jaldi seh sign karoh

Manyata was about to sign just then Krish came

Krish- Bua I want to put some paint on you as well

Manyata- ok Bacha but this isn't paint it's called Haldi

Krish put haldi on Mayata face

Manyata- thank you bacha

Amrit wasn't very happy

Amrit- (to herself) isse bewaqoof bache ko abhi anah tha... jaldi seh yeh papers sign hojaye phir humhe Jaigar ki Maharani baneh seh koi nahiye rokesaktha

TO BE CONTINUED...

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 11 years ago
me cheating se first :D :p

Awesome update anam :)
UV drunk and they fought :
P seriously manyata is stull childish ...i like her this way poor poor UV his life is getting to be fixed match...every1 else is deciding for him ..hmmm i guess amrit is upto sumthing bad did she made any alters in the papers ???

Cont soon :) Edited by sweetshab - 11 years ago