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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Niha-

wow rajbir accepted jay wiv her child im glad he did
hmm next chappy is on da kidnapping for da third time she rly is popular
poor krish
cant believe its cornflakes fault shame on daddy lolz
update soon!
 
Yeah he loves her too muchLOL yes bacha 3rd time you counted right yh she isLOL yh lil bacha... no bacha its all Manyata fault she loves cornflakes not his fault so stop blaming daddyLOL I iwll do

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Originally posted by adventure_gurl

awesome  update! oh gosh hope they can find Manyata soon!
 
Thanks ShonaliBig smile keep reading to find out
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Part 49

 

The next day we see everyone on the breakfast table

 

Manayta comes downstairs

 

Manyata- bye everyone

 

Everyone was shocked

 

Uday- Princess no cornflakes today aise kaise you can't go without breakfast

 

Jhanvi- Manya seedhe seedhe beth jo warnah acha nahiye hogha eat your breakfast then go to work

 

Viraj- nahiye no nashtha chaloh Manya

 

Jhanvi- Viraj yeh aap kya kehrehay hai breakfast is the most important meal of the day

 

Uday- haan Princess you never leave cornflakes for anyone nashtha karkeh joa kya jaldi hai it's enough time

 

Manyata- No nashtha today Uday aaj Viraj Bhai humhe nashteh keh liye bahaar lekeh ja rehay we are going Subway ok so I will see you in the evening bye

 

Uday- lekin (interrupted)

 

Viraj- Uday hum haamari behen ka ache seh kyaal rakenghe don't worry

 

Manyata and Viraj leave

 

Jhanvi- aaj Viraj ko kya hogaye hai bina coffee piyeh chaleh gaye aur Manya ko nashtha bhi nahiye karneh diya

 

Uday- Princess didn't have cornflakes kuch baat to hai

 

Jhanvi- I don't know Uday aneh do Viraj aur Manya ko phir dono ki khabar lethi hoon… tum nashtha karo

 

It was 4pm

 

Shaina- Jhanvi hum abhi Birmingham ja rehay hai Viraj keh dost keh ghar mein function hai….  Raat ko ajayghe ab chaloh Krishy bacha jaldi she tyaar hojo

 

Krishy- I don't want to go Dadi I want to stay here with Bua and Prince Udayveer please I will be good

 

Jhanvi- bacha Papa bahuth daanthe ok so u have to come

 

Krishy- No I am not going Prince Udayveer tell them I want to stay home me and you can watch Batman and Robin

 

Uday- Bhabhi Krish ko ghar reheneh dijiye aur waise function mein bore hojaygha hum isska ache seh kyaal rakenghe promise

 

Jhanvi- ok fine Krishy be good bacha ok

 

Krishy- I will Mama

 

Shaina- Viraj will directly meet us there…. Aur haan Uday Manya ka phone aiya tha she's gone with Remisha and Rajbir to the jewellers… Rajbir auseh ghar chordehgha tum chintha maat karnah ok… aur haan Vijay, Unnanti and J bhi hamare saat ja rehay hai

 

Uday- tike hai Aunty

 

Everyone leaves only Uday and Krishy are at home

 

After a while Manyata also comes home

 

Manyata was shouting

 

Manyata- where is everyone? I'm hungry no food

 

Krish- Bua there all gone to Birmingham Daddys friend's house party function, Daddy, Mummy, Dadu, Dadi, princess J, Princess Unnu and Prince Vijay also gone... I'm hungry too but don't want this sabzi

 

Manyata- Where's Uday?

 

Uday- I'm here Princess kya baat hai bahuth ghuseh mein ho

 

Manyata- Its 7pm everyone's gone without telling me

 

Uday- Princess it was a function and you weren't home they told me to inform you when you come back... right so Krish shall we watch Batman and Robin I made pasta also

 

Krish- yes Prince Udayveer

 

Manyata- I will make chocolate cornflakes

 

Krish- Yes Bua yummy

 

(She went to the kitchen opened the drawer no cornflake left)

 

Manyata started screaming

 

Uday and Krish ran to the kitchen

 

Uday- What happened Princess?

 

Krish- Bua what happened?

 

Manyata- Uday, Krishy no cornflake left

 

Uday laughed

 

Uday- Princess just because of cornflakes you started shouting omg now please don't start crying

 

Manyata- shut up Uday I want cornflakes now

 

Krish- me 2 Prince Udayveer

 

Uday- ok ok I will go get it from the shops Princess agar cornflakes insaan hotha you will surely marry him

 

Manyata- how I wish he was anyways abhi lekeh aao ok agar nahiye mileh go to other shops don't come back till you buy cornflakes

 

Uday- ja rehay Princess tum araam seh betho hum abhi lekeh athe hai cornflakes yeh sach mein hamara sabseh barah dushman hai cornflakes agar insaan hotha toh hum iseh chorteh nahiye

 

Manyata- joa abhi don't call my Mr Cornflake dushman he's my everything

 

Uday- toh phir hum kaun ha I thought I was your everything

 

Manyata- tum bhi ho lekin pehele cornflakes ok you are last ab joa now!!!

 

Uday- ab nahiye jayghe hum last aur yeh cornflake first ab toh kabhi nahiye jaighe

 

Manyata- Uday abhi joa now warnah hum tumseh baat nahiye kareghe

 

Krish- Bua, Prince Udayveer please stop arguing can you go buy cornflakes I will wait for you then we can watch Batman and Robin hurry up... Bua don't be mean to Prince Udayveer say please he will go then

 

Manyata- fine sorry Uday can you please please buy me cornflakes pretty please (she made a cute face)

 

Uday- Princess ab tumneh please kehdiyah hai hum abhi jakeh athe hai ok

 

Uday leaves

 

Krish and Manyata were watching TV together just then someone started banging the garden door... Krish got scared and went running to Manyata

 

Krish- Bua someone in the house

 

Manyata- Krish you sit here I will go and check

 

Krishy was hugging Manyata tightly

 

Krish- Bua don't leave me alone we will go together

 

Manyata- fine chaloh bacha

 

Manyata and Krishy went to the kitchen the garden door was open

 

Just then someone came from behind and got Manyata

 

Manayta- LEAVE ME!!!!

 

Krish- LEAVE MY BUA!!!!!!!

 

Krish got the kitchen brush hit the person on the head he let go of Manyata...both Manyata and Krish ran in the lounge.. he ran after Manyata caught her again and put chloroform on her mouth Manyata passed out..this time he pushed Krish on the floor and picked Manyata up and took her outside.

 

Krish hurt his head

 

Krish- LEAVE MY BUA!!!! (He ran outside after them but it was too late the car was gone and the house door was shut and Krish couldn't go inside the house)

 

He started crying

 

Krish- BUA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Meanwhile we see Uday with cornflakes walking it home

 

Uday- finally milgaya yeh cornflakes went 3 shops

 

He saw Krish crying he went running to him

 

Uday- Krish Bacha what happened?

 

Krish- (Cryingly) Prince Udayveer he took my Bua someone tried to rob our house then he took Bua (he was crying and crying)

 

Uday picked him up

 

Uday- ssshhh Bacha I will find your Bua I promise stop crying

 

Uday didn't know what to do he couldn't ring Viraj or go home coz the door was locked he had no key, so he decided to go to Rajbir house.

 

Rajbir- Uday tum isse waqt Manya kahaan hai aur J… Krishy why are you crying bacha what happened? Andar aao

 

Uday told him what happened

 

Rajbir- Remisha Krishy ko upar lejoa

 

Krish wasn't letting go of Uday

 

Krish- I want to stay with Price Udayveer I'm scared he wore black mask he took my Bua (he started crying)

 

Uday- ssh bacha you're my brave bacha and strong so no crying ok here have some water… that's like my bacha get some sleep ok I promise I will find Bua

 

Krish went to Remisha she took him upstairs

 

Uday- Rajbir I need to find my Princess I'm sure that Arjun done all this aur ab hum auseh choreghe nahiye

 

He was about to go out

 

Rajbir- Uday we should inform the police you can't take matters in your own hand… if it's a kidnapping case they will surely ask for Ransom they should ring anytime soon

 

Uday- Rajbir this isn't a ransom case

 

Just the Uday phone rang

 

It was Viraj

Viraj- Uday its me Bhai we wont back till 2mrw evening I hope that's ok Manya aur Krish ka kyaal raknah

 

Uday- ok Bhai I will do bye

 

Viraj- acha zara Manya she baat karanah

 

Uday- she's in the shower I will tell her you phone bye

 

Uday disconnected the phone

 

Uday- I had to lie to Viraj Bhai just because of this Arjun

 

Rajbir- Who is this Arjun why would he kidnap Manya

 

Uday- it's a long story for now I need to look for my Princess

 

Rajbir- mein bhi chaltha hoon saat lets go raaste mein police complaint bhi kardenghe

 

Now we see Manyata locked in a garage

 

Just then Uday phone rang

 

Uday- Hello

 

Guy- mein bhole raha hoon now listen to me carefully agar Manyataaa zinda chahiye hai toh mujhe meri Jainandani do kal isse pathe peh ajanah warnah mein Manyataa ki lash tumhare paas poachdoongha…. This time I am very serious Udayveer Singh tumhaari aur iss Manyataa ki wajah seh meri bahuth bezaathi hui hai ab bas mujhe sirf J aur mere bacha chahiye agar police ko bataneh ki koshish ki anjaam bahuth borah hogha

 

Uday- ARJUN HUM TUMHE ZINDHA NAHIYE CHORNGHE AGAR HAMAARI PRINCESS KO ZARAH SI BHI CHOT AIYI… HAMAARI BAAT KARWAO ABHI MANYATA SHE

 

We see Manyata and Arjun in a garage

 

He pulled her hair

 

Arjun- TALK TO YOUR LOVERBOY JALDI I DON'T HAVE TIME

 

Manyata- Udaayy!!!

 

Uday- Princess aap tike toh hainah I will find you I promise

 

Manyata- Uday kabhi bhi iski baat na manah aur hamaari behen ko idhar maat lanah hum tike hai humhe kuch nahiye hogha

 

Arjun slapped Manyata acrossed the face

 

Uday- ARJUN!!! DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH MY PRINCESS

 

Arjun- agar Princess zindah chahiye hai toh kal he J ko hamareh paas lekeh aao samje

 

Manyata in the backgroud

 

Manyata- NAHIYE UDAYY ISKI BAAT MAAT MAANA

 

Arjun slapped her across the face again

 

Arjun- kyun nahiye maneh J is mines agar nahiye manegha I will kill you!!!  RAGHUBEER ISKA MOO BAAND KARO... YOU HAVE TILL 2MRW 

 

He disconnected the phone

 

Precap- Uday was in dilemma

 

Manyata or J

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
Hey Anam, though I haven't tried your FF till now... but will do so soon!!
Will love to read your work too!...
Just wanted to say your work is gonna come under my scrutiny too lol
so bachna aye writer!


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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
mind blowing update anam Big smile i just hate that  arjun  plz do cont soon  nw suspence is killing me that what will uday do nw
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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 1:17am | IP Logged
awsomeee...ohhh...good this arjun...pehle manyata ke pime tha ab J ke pi6e...this suspence killing me...cnt wait for next part...now what will uday do J or manyata...and if this arjun come back then what about J and rabeer..
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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 6:30am | IP Logged
wonderful and awesome loved it i mean absolutely outstanding and marvelous the suspense is killing me now anam please update soon please please please and continue soon and this was so nice  i wonder what uday will do now u rock anam and thanks for the pm

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