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Unwanted Thread 2 Manveer FF LAST PART PG123 (Page 120)

andy.a IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 September 2012
Posts: 6861

Posted: 03 February 2013 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Wow anam
loved this update it was very nice
finally amrit turned to a new leaf
really felt sad reading amrit manyata convo
happy that manyata servived the operation
so finally manveer is together with their bundle of joy jasmine
it was really awsome
anam dont stop writing
please start a new one
thanks for the pm

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Archi02 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 June 2012
Posts: 5332

Posted: 03 February 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Supparbb update. Awesome, just fabulus. Very beautiful ending. Loved it very very much. Thanks for giving us such a beautiful story.

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TuTeradekh IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 12 June 2012
Posts: 38266

Posted: 03 February 2013 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Awsomee...update di
itani jaldi end kar diya bhebhebhebhe... was it happyly ever after...thanx for PM.

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Asmimelody IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 April 2012
Posts: 9442

Posted: 03 February 2013 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Superb,fantastic,great update naani saabwhole update was AwesomeThumbs Up yayy!ManVeer ko Baby girl paida hui  Jasmine Nice name naani saabStar Starthank you soo much apne happy ending rakha baby bohoth cute haiaur samne usse dekhne ke liye line lagadi so sweet aur sabse acchi baath Amrit acchi bann gayi!Clap Clapaur sabki dua kaam aagayiEmbarrassed phir unka raajyabhishekh bohoth accha tha aur unka nokh jokh bhiBig smile Big smilebohot emotional part tha, mujhe toh rona aagaya aur aakhri part thaCry Cry Cry aur aap doosri kahaniyan kyun nahi likhoge?aap itna accha likhte ho...
 great update Naani saabthanx for the PMHug Hug

Edited by Asmimelody - 03 February 2013 at 8:41am

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..IshqShava.. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 May 2012
Posts: 16990

Posted: 03 February 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
OMG what an updateClap  Clap  Clap i had expected i'll end up in tears after reading this update but you surprised us once moreSmile Big smile brilliant update di...Amrit turned good, that was greatSmile ManVeer's baby girl is so cuteHeart Thanks for the PM diHug i'll miss reading this SSDisapprove

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Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

Joined: 11 November 2005
Posts: 64778

Posted: 03 February 2013 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Laiba-

RESERVEDDD yayy will edit later on ^^


OMG you almost killed me lady xD i thought i would have a panic attackLOLi was expecting the end u were pllanning to mke but thk god u didnt otherwise it would ne too sad and i would end up crying as u know im a big rotlu LOL!!!
The part was awsome, i totaly loved the way u added so much suspense on the fact tht it was either baby or manya who wuld be alive. i wuldnt have guessed LOL You made Amrit positiv tht was cherry on the cake LOL i wasnt expecting this witch to turn positiv LOL but thk god u sent Agam for her haha!!
Udhay omg wht to say abt it... he is just FAB i wish every girl culd get a hubby like him xD the way he cares like when he say tht it matters when baby is healthy and mom has to be healthy as well...
Im so glad that baldy didntLOL turn out negative LOL otherwise he wuld be dead haha LOL after a lot of tears the ending on a happy note was the best u culd give EmbarrassedBig smile Big smile Thank you and seriously im gonna miss ur FF a lot Cry you know that i4ve always been a fan of ur writting skills and i just LOVE each and everything u write!! this one was a hatrick Wink
Im not expecting this to be ur last FF xD im hoping for u to come bck after a lot of rest with something else and different as u always do Embarrassed
I LOVE YOU fr everything LOL i still remember hw i stayed awake till 6 in morning to read the whole ff xD and how i was despo in pk for nt being able to read ur ff LOL
again AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME !!! Super Duper HIT!!!!
rated 10/5 LOLLOLStarStarStarStar

Love you and im gonna miss u alot Cry

PS: see u on whats ap right after the comment haha LOL
Thanks LaibuBig smile
I'm glad you enjoyed it yes I had to change the ending otherwise I would of made all the readers upset I didnt want that so changed the ending... yes that was too obvious.. yes I thought I might as well make the only villan Amrit good... I know Laibu you have read all my fanfics thank you so much for being a great reader luv u 2Hug yes I remember then u catched up once you were backLOL
-TeriMalang- IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8019

Posted: 03 February 2013 at 1:00pm | IP Logged

Happy endings

It was awesome reading this FF !

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Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

Joined: 11 November 2005
Posts: 64778

Posted: 03 February 2013 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrincessZaneb

Awesome ending
Thank u so much for a happy ending :)
Hey have a question did uay find out that manyata had complications
Thanks ZanebBig smile
No need of thanks I changed my mind for all the readers I personally didnt want to seperate Manveer
Yes regarding your question I didnt show it in the part where they talked about it as I mentioned Manveer talked a lot.. I know it was quite a serious part of the ff but I didnt mention it wanted to keep it all happy..

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