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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshab

nice update anam:)

loved itt

I hate this evil evil amrit dafa karoo na ussey

Ahaaa akash is being all sweety sweet guy :P
Cont soon

Thanks Shab😃
I'm glad you enjoyed it
I do too 😡
Yeah he is😆
I will do 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

oh freak ye akash bura hai ya acha i'm so confused...
nice and luved the update...

Thanks Mahi
You need to figure that out yourself😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

nice and awesome update twini👍🏼

but good that krish will safe and will come back😊

and you made akash a good boy still he is gonna have a punch from uv...poor akash stuck from every side😆

thanx for the pm twini and update fast...🤗🤗

PS fast means fast😎

Thanks Rubaaa Twiny😃
Yeah he will do or he might not u never know😆
Twiny u have faith in Akash yeah obviously he will get a punch its UV end of they day he hates Akash😆
I will do twinny😊
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Part 66

Uday- Amrit I haven't come here to listen to your rubbish you said you wanted to discuss something important

Amrit- It is important you do know how much I love you I'm only here for you

Uday- Amrit I'm married I love my Manyata very much more than my life no matter what the situation no one will ever take her place so don't even try I suggest you leave Jaigar as soon as possible I don't want to see your face have some respect for yourself stop stooping so low

Uday left

Amrit was very angry

Uday went to check on Manyata she was fast asleep

Uday- Get well soon Princess I can't see you in this state (he kissed her forehead)

Uday then went to the study he was very disturbed regarding Krishy kidnapping fiasco and Manyatas health

The next day Manyata woke up Uday wasn't in his room

Manyata- Uday kahaan chalah gaya subha subha

She got ready and went downstairs

Manyata- Akash what happened? Why did you call me in the garden?

Akash- Manyata humhe Krishy bacha ka patha chalgaya hai yeh loh baat karoh auseh

Manyata- WHAT!!!!  Krishy bacha

Krishy- BUA!!!! I'm missing you all very much I'm fine ok don't worry u guys don't come so soon I'm getting royal breakfast here having so much fun games as well got the new WI... X BOX 360 so nice

Manyata- bacha how did you get all this?

Krish- Akash Uncle he's awesome bye Bua my breakfast is here see you soon lunch I will have with u

Manyata- bye bacha I love u

Krish- love u too

The phone got disconnected

Manyata hugged Akash she was very happy

Uday saw all this he wasn't very happy he came and punched Akash

Uday- Akash what do you think you're doing? (He kept punching him)

Manyata- Uday leave him

Akash- what did I do wrong?

Uday- I'm not deaf and blind since you have been here you're always after my wife stay away from Manyata or else the consequences will be very bad

Manyata was angry now

Manayta- Uday what the hell are you talking about me and Akash  are only friends

Akash- yeah we are old friends there is no need to be insecure we can fight about this matter after as well it's not important  I will explain all this is all Jiji  (interrupted)

Amrit- Akash, Uday, Manyata look who's back

Krishy- BUA!!!!!!!!! PRINCE UDAYVEER!!!!!!!! AKASH UNCLE!!!!!!! I'M BACK

Manyata- mera Krishy Bacha thank god you're ok how did you come?

Amrit- We received ransom call this morning  aur hum Krish  ko leh aiye right Krish  ab chaloh andar

Krish- No I want to stay with Bua

Amrit- Krish zide nahiye karethe beta you need to have complete rest chaloh

Krish- I said NO!!!!!

Viraj- Krish don't you dare raise your voice say sorry now

Jhanvi- Krishy bacha jaldi seh apna saaman loh we are going home ok everyone is waiting for you in Devgar

Krish- I will not say sorry to this witch Aunty I hate her Daddy

Viraj was getting angry now

Uday- Krishy bacha lets go inside

Everyone went inside

Viraj- sorry Amrit Krish is just a kid he doesn't understand thank you so much aaj tumhaari wajah seh humhe Krish milah

Jhanvi- haan tumneh humpar bahuth barah ehsaan kardiya hai

Amrit- Please aise maat kahiye I love Krish very much isliye i saved him

Viraaj and Jhanvi went inside

Akash- Jiji yeh sab aapneh

Amrit- (Angrily) just shut up Akash don't speak to me again you tried to double cross me all along you were on Manyata side hum sab kuch jaanghe teh aur isliye humneh apna plan change kardiya ab hum jo kareghe all of you will see (she smiled evily)

Akash- sorry to say Jiji but ab aap kuch nahiye kareghi we are going to our mahal after Unnanti wedding

Amrit- you mean you're going home Akash not me hum yahin hai hamare Uday keh paas

Akash- Jiji why don't u understand Uday is married he won't ever leave Manyata

Amrit-  He will you just wait and watch

Amrit went inside

Akash- Jiji I won't ever let that happen

Giriraj- Amrit beta yeh toh aapneh bahuth acha kiya Krish ko dhoond liya

Amrit- Giri Uncle sab police neh kiya hai right commissioner

Police commissioner- not without your help Amrit beta kya soch aapki sab plan patha karliya aur humneh paise bhi waapis lehliye aur kidnappers ko bhi jail mein dhaldiya

Uday was very happy seeing Krish Manyata was smiling again

 

Uday- Thanks Amrit but why didn't you tell me  or anyone else

 

Amrit- It's ok Uday I informed the police that was more important plus you were so stressed since last night so I thought I shouldn't disturb you...Jhanvi Bhabhi humneh Krish keh leh lunch banaya hai so Krish beta make sure you eat before you go home

 

Krish- I want to go home to my both Dadimas and Dadu's and my Mamu and Mami

 

Rajbir- Krishy bacha Mamu yahaan bhi hai roke joa nah for lunch please

 

Unnanti- haan Krishy stay

 

Remisha- Krishy unfair tumhaari eklauti Massi hoon so humneh kehdiye toh kehdiya ur staying for lunch

 

Krishy- Fine hum roke jathe hai aap loge bhi kya yaad rakoghe now stop sulking so no roi roi now ok

Prince Udayveer humhe pizza khaanah hai yeh walah khaanah nahiye yeh isse witch aunty neh banaya hai.. Bua my favourite wala pizza maangvaai hai from pizza hut jaldi seh

 

Viraj and Jhanvi started laughing

 

Virjha- Bacha yahaan pizza hut nahiye hai

 

Krish- what? Prince Udayveer how can you not have Pizza hut here

 

Uday- Bacha yahaan nahiye haina its in the other city... we also have a pizza shop here also hum abhi phone karteh hai they will deliver it ok

 

Krish- ok Prince Udayveer I will have that Pizza Daddy when we go back to London you have treat me pizza hut me and Bua will have exactly the same as usual right bua hamara

 

Manyata/Krishy- cheese pizza

 

Both Manyata and Krishy hugged each other

 

Now Viraj and Jhanvi were in deep thought

 

Viraj- bacha ab no talking sit down and have some snacks till your pizza comes

 

Akash- Krishy yeh loh loads of chocolates hum abhi yeh sab tumahre liye lekeh aiye hai

 

Remisha- Akash unfair humhe bhi chahiye hai

 

Akash- Sorry Remisha yeh sab Krishy keh hai

 

Manyata- kya kaha Akash aise kaise humhe bhi chahiye hai

 

Akash- none for you both yeh sab only for my Krishy bacha (he hugged him)

 

Krish- yay you're the best Akash Uncle

 

Rajbir- Uday Bhai yeh Akash kuch zydah he Krishy keh close ho raha hai hamra toh numher he cut jaygha

 

Uday- I know isse Akash ka kuch karnah paregha

 

Manyata- Akash humhe bhi do chocolates warnah hum tumseh baat nahiye karenghe

 

Remisha- humhe bhi chahiye hai

 

Akash- ok ok ab bas tum loge itnah keh rehey hai tum logo keh liye kal subha leongha ok

 

M/R- Kya subha no now

 

Krish- Bua, Maasi stop sulking like little kids yeh loh one for u Bua and one for you Maasi

 

M/R- Thanks You Krishy Bacha (both kissed Krishy on his cheek)

 

Uday- Krishy Bacha Pizza agayah come on eat now

 

Manyata- I will serve everyone

 

Uday-  Ok Princess you do the honours

 

Manyata served everyone food

 

Everyone had lunch together

 

Uday- Princess medicine time

 

Manyata- no Uday baad mein please  ab hum Krisy keh saat khelenghe

 

Uday- No medicine time now

 

Amrit- hum abhi tablets lekeh athe hai

 

Akash- Jiji Jiji aap kyun pareshaan ho rahiye hai Uday hainah Manyata ka kyaal rakneh keh liye aap hamare saat chaliyeh kuch baat karni hai

 

Uday- haan Amrit aap jayee Akash keh saat

 

Viraj- Uday Manya ab hum chalteh hai sab Devgar mein intezaar kar rehey Dadisab ka phone aiyah tha

 

Krishy- Daddy, Mama can we take Bua home please please

 

Jhanvi- Bacha... Bua ki tabiyaat tike nahiye hai ineh araam ki zaroorth hai  ok kal aiyghi Bua aapse milneh ok

 

Viraj- haan bacha aur gharpeh aapke Vijay mamu, aur J Mami aapke liye uneh ek bahuth barah surprise rakha hai

 

Krishy- Surprise mere liye yay!!!! Lekin Daddy why can't Bua come home hum Bua ka ache seh kyaal rakenghe na Prince Udayveer can I take Bua home please pretty please

 

Uday- ofcourse Bacha Bua ko ghar lejoah I don't mind anything for my Krishy Bacha

 

Manyata- Uday hum ghar ja sakteh yay!!!!! Hum abhi apna saaman pack karteh hai

 

Manyata ran upstairs

 

Krishy- YAY!!! AB MEIN AUR BUA SAAT MEIN REHENGHE

 

Viraj- Uday are you sure

 

Uday- yes Bhai hum apneh Krishy bacha ko kabhi manah nahiye kareteh hai hum abhi athe hai Manyata ko medicine deni hai

 

Viraj-  tike hai

 

Giriraj- Krish beta aap ja rehey hai aaj hamara ghar toh sunah hojaygha

 

Krish- Sorry hum phir ajayghe promise (he hugged him)

 

Giriraj was very happy

 

Jhanvi- Uncle thank you very much aap sabneh Krish ka bahuth kyaal rakha aur I'm very sorry agar Krishy neh kisi ko pareshaan kiya ho

 

Giriraj- no Jhanvi beta Krishy neh kisi ko pareshaan nahiye kiya jabseh Krishy aiya hai hum bahuth bahuth khush hai aur Uday woh bhi bahuth khush hai itnah khush humneh uneh kabhi nahiye dekha Krish sach mein yahaan akeh isneh toh sabko bahuth khushi di hai hum sab iseh bahuth miss kareghe

Bas yahi umeed hai hamara poatha/poathi jald seh jald aiye aur woh bhi hamare Krish jaise ho

 

Jhanvi- Uncle woh dine jald aiygha aap bhagwanji seh dua kijiye hum har roze yahin dua karteh hai

 

Giriraj- Haan beta hum sirf dua he karsakteh hai sab kuch bhagwanji keh haat mein

 

Rajbir- Krish humneh sareh chocolates aur cakes pack kardiye hai aur haan J Mami ko hamara message denah ok patha nahiye kyun auseka phone baand hai

 

Krish- message dehdenghe don't worry Mamu

 

Unnanti- Krishy yahaan aao aur Vijay Mamu seh kehnah hamara phone nahiye utayah toh hum shaadi cancel kardenghe

 

Rajbir started laughing

 

Rajbir- Bechara Vijay

 

Unnanti- Shut up Rajbir warnah J seh kehenghe aur tumhaari shaadi bhi cancel

 

Rajbir- ok ok sorry hum kuch nahiye kehenghe

 

Viraj- Krishy yeh sab kya ho raha hai

 

Krishy- Daddy Mamu Mami are giving me (interrupted)

 

Viraj- giving you what

 

Rajbir/Unnanti-  Chocolates/sweets to take home Akash brought so many hum kya kareghe itneh chocolates aur sweet ka so all for Krishy bacha

 

Krishy- but daddy

 

Rajbir picked Krishy up

 

Rajbir- chaloh Krishy bacha hum Akash Uncle ko thank you karkeh athe hai (whispers) kyun humhe marvanah chahteh ho haan you know how Viraj Jiju is like

 

Unnanti- haan Krishy yeh hamara secret hai samjeh

 

Krish-ok ok fine nahiye bateghe ab khush

 

Akash- Krish bacha aap ja rehey hai ghar

 

Krish- yes Akash Uncle aur Bua is going also

 

Akash- what why is Manyata going?

 

Krish- Because I said Akash Uncle I miss my Bua

 

Remisha- Krishy Bacha I got all your luggage going to miss you loads

 

Krish- Me 2

 

Back to Manveer

 

Uday- Princess Princess enough now how much packing are you going to do pureh mahinah janeh ka iraadha hai kya

 

Manyata- haan nahi toh soch rahiye ho pureh mahineh keh liye joaan

 

Uday- WHAT????? NO!!!!

 

Manyata started laughing

 

Manyata- I'm only joking Uday  I will be back in 2 days akhir Unnanti ki shaadi ki tyaariyan bhi karni hai  so don't worry hum jaldi seh ajayghe aur haan ause Amrit churail seh dur rehnah samjeh  auseka bharosa nahiye hai humhe

 

Uday- Princess these 2 days will be like 2 years I will miss you loads

 

Manyata- is that so idea why don't you come with me?

 

Uday- Princess idea is great but I can't you enjoy yourself because after all the weddings are done Viraj Bhai, Jhanvi Bhabhi, Krishy and J are all going back to London.. I'm here not going know where and you are here with me forever so you should spend time with all of them

 

Manyata got upset

 

Manyata- everyone going to go back

 

Uday- Princess no getting  upset spend lots of time with all of them ok aur haan where's your medicines?

 

Manyata- I had it already and I put the medicine bag in my handbag

 

Uday- you sure

 

Manyata- yeah don't worry Uday hum apna ache seh kyaal raksakteh hai I'm not a baby

 

She hugged him

 

Uday- I have to make sure na end of the day you are my baby (he kissed her forehead)

 

There was a knock on the door

 

Krish- BUA!!!!!! BUA!!!!!! WE ARE GETTING LATE!!!!!

 

Manyata- coming bacha right Uday I have to go now hum apneh ghar ja rehey hai aur haan stay away from the(interrupted)

 

Uday- churail Amrit humhe patha hai don't worry.. I only love my Princess

 

Manyata- I love my Prince too loads ab hum chalteh hai

 

Uday- I will get the bags

 

Now we see everyone downstairs

 

Akash- Manyata make sure you look after yourself have loads of fun

 

Manyata- I will do Akash aur haan jo humneh samjaya tha make sure you remember

 

Akash- Yes I will don't worry hum Jiji ko Uday seh bahuth dur rakenghe ok you can trust me on that

 

Manyata- I know akhir tum mere dost ho so obvious aur haan baad mein hum tumhaari love story bhi set kardenghe ok

 

Akash- Manyata dheereh bholo koi sunelegha

 

Uday- kya baatein ho rahiye hai

 

Manyata- I will explain (interrupted)

 

Akash- Manyata no thats our secret

 

Manyata- Sorry Akash I don't hide anything from Uday end of the day hubby and wifey shouldn't hide anything from each other it's not good... I tell Uday everything right Uday

 

Uday- Yeah if you hide things in relationship not good so Princess jaldi seh batoah kya secret hai

 

Akash- no Manyata tumhare pait mein koi baat nahiye rehtehi honestly you're the same as before  hum jah rehey hai batoh dah patidev ko

 

Manyata- awww sharamagaye Akash stay kahaan ja rehey ho it's only Uday not your to be wifey (she laughed)

 

Uday- Princess akhir baat kya hai

 

Manyata- you see Akash ko Remisha pasand hai aur he told me this aur Remsiha also likes Akash too so jab hum aiyghe waapis inki love story set karenghe haan nahi toh

 

Uday- Princess ab lawyer seh love guru bankeh ka iraadha hai kya (he laughed)

 

Manyata- No hum lawyer he tike hai hum yeh sab Akash keh liye kar rehey hai he's a good friend  aur hum chahteh hai woh bahuth khush rehey hai ok subha you punched him for no reason auseki koi galathi bhi nahiye thi make sure you apologise ok

 

Uday- Princess don't worry hum Akash seh baat karlenghe ok

 

Krish- Bua lets go now bye Prince Udayveer (he hugged him)

 

Uday- bye bacha

 

Amrit- bye Krish bye Manyata have a nice time in your maikka

 

Manyata- Amrit your zeherili churail mere Uday seh dur rehnah samji

 

Amrit- Manyata Manyata hum toh Uday keh paas he rehenghe forever you don't worry about it ab joah

 

Manyata gave Amrit a dirty look

 

Manyata- tumhara sach mein kuch nahiye ho saktha you're truly disgusting

 

Viraj- Manya chaloh we're getting late

 

Manyata met everyone and left

 

Now we see Akash and Uday talking

 

Uday- Im sorry Akash humneh tumhe galath samjha

 

Akash- Yeah  you should be sorry.. but I will forgive you  

 

Uday- so friends  Akash

 

Akash- forever Uday I need to tell you something (he told him about Krishy kidnapping fiasco and how Amrit is after Uday and all) so please Jiji seh dur rehnah ok auseka koi bharosah nahiye hai

 

Uday- humhe patha hai thanks Akash

 

Akash- no thanks in friendship ok ab hum chalteh hai ok goodnight

 

Uday- Goodnight

 

Akash went to his room

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update! Glad Krish is safe!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsomeee...very nice update di...hailaa...ye aksh uncle toh bada goody goody nikala...
Urghhh...that amrit is too much...always after uday...krishy is right she is a witch aunty...last manveer scene was superb...
Lolzzz...manyata-amrit u zeharili chudail mere udau se dur rehna...hahaha...was damn funny...update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great episode Anam.👏.thank god Krishy is back..and misunderstanding between Aksh and UV is cleared...Amrit should be punished well😡
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read all the updates in one go
its great
do pm me if possible
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved the update! Glad Krish is safe!

 
Thanks Shonali😃 
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