Unwanted Thread 2 Manveer FF LAST PART PG123 - Page 61

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by udaymanyata07


👏👏thnaks.love dit.i hope nothing bad happens...👏👏
 
Thanks😃 keep reading to find out
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by sweet_gargi


loved the update Anam..Plz continue soon...😛..hope Amrit is not successful in her mission
 
Thanks Gargi😃 I will do in 5minz or so just replying to all the comments... keep reading to find out
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Manveerangel


Amazing anam 👏
Ahhh i hate princess amrit 😡
But i know in the end manveer will live happily ever aftet ❤️
Plzzz update next part soon   ❤️ 👏
 
Thanks😃 I do too... you have to keep reading to find out😆 I wil do in 5minz
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by rocker12


ohh dear missed alot of chaps was full of work now got time reaed all of them which i missed out ohh u are making me hate that amrit to hell surely i wanna kill her lol though enough of amrit the updates were truely fab brilliantly written :) 
 
Thanks Haz😃 i hate amrit too😆 I'm glad you enjoyed it
Posted: 11 years ago
 Where's the  next update Jiji? I'm waiting for it.
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by mrs_kapoor


awesome update mom 👏i hope krishy  contract papers kharab kar decant wait to read more plz update soon👍🏼love u     ur sonria😳 
 
Thanks Ria Bacha😃 Good idea u never know he might keep reading to see what happens... next update in 5minz... awww mere bacha 🤗
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Manyata5


it was an owsum 1
I m suer amrit is upto smthing...
please pm me if u can
 
Thanks😃 good predictions keep reading to find out... I will PM u when i update
Posted: 11 years ago

Part 60

Amrit- Krish beta aap jakeh apni Mummy keh paas joa please humhe Manyata seh baat karni hai (she grabbed his arm and moved him)

Krish- that hurt Bua this bad aunty hit me

Manyata- Bacha are you ok Amrit how dare you touch my Krishy Bacha yeh papers hum baad mein sign kardenghe koi zaroorth nahiye scene bananehki

Amrit- Jaldi seh sign karoh

J- Krish come here

Manyata- joh Bacha... Mami keh paas I will call you after this horrible aunty is gone ok

Krish- Ok Bua you Aunty if you hit me again see what happens to you

Krish went to J

Amrit- barah he batameez bacha hai... hamare pass waqt nahiye hai jaldi seh sign karo

Manyata- tumhe koi haq nahiye bantha mere Krishy keh saat aiseh pesh anah ab hatho yahaan seh hum contract apni marzi seh sign kareghe

Amrit- kya kaha marzi no marzi abhi sign karo warnah humhe abhi Giri Uncle ko phone karnah paregha

Manyata- Baldy Sasurji kuch naiye karenghe so don't give me threats

Amrit- Manyata tameez seh pesh aao woh hamare bareh hai aur yeh unka hokum hai jaldi seh sign karo

Manyata was pissed off

She signed the papers without reading

Manyata- yeh loh happy ab joa koh papers aur baldy uncle ko bhi khiloh honestly Amrit how disgusting are you (interrupted)

Amrit- cut the crap I don't want to hear your rubbish I need to go now hamara kaam hogaya ab shaadi peh milenghe ab hum ja rehay hai hamare palace Jaigar hamare Uday keh paas

Manyata- ek baat yaad raknah hamare Uday seh dur rehenah warnah tumhare liye acha nahiye hogha samji he is mines!!!

Amrit started laughing

Amrit- Uday seh baat toh karni pareghi akhir yeh papers sign karneh hai auseh warnah yahaan koi baraat nahiye aiyghi... Manyata humko sab patha hai Uday aapseh bahuth ghusah hai koi baat bhi nahiye kar rehay patha nahiye shaadi mein aiyghe ya nahiye so tum apni socho ok (she laughed) Amrit ko jo pasand ajaye woh auseko samji tumhe sirf kuchi mahino keh liye bardasht karnah paregha then you're out of Jaigar and Uday's life

Amrit left laughing

Manyata was very angry now

Unnanti- Bhabhi sa hum ja rehey sham ko mileghe

Manyata- Unnanti kya Uday tike hai

Unnanti- Bhabhi sa Dada ghuseh mein hai patha nahiye kya baat hai I tried asking him he just said nothing kya aap dono mein jhagada hua hai

Manyata- No Unnanti tumhe patha hum aise he larteh hai bewajah ab tum joa hum sham ko milteh hai

Unnanti- jee (she wasn't convinced she knew something was up) kuch baat toh hai hum patha lagha keh rehenghe

Remisha- Unnanti Jiji chaleh

Unnanti- haan chaloh Remisha

Krishy hugged them both

Krishy- Bye Maasi and Mami

U/R- Bye Krish

They left

Now we see Jaigar

Rajbir- Uday Bhai what is the problem agar koi baat hai toh humhe batiyeh hum aapki maadat karsakteh hai

Uday- Rajbir koi baat nahiye hai hum kabseh tumhe samaja rehey hai koi baat nahiye hai

Servant- Ghustaki maaf Yuvraj sa koi Kunwar Akash aiyah hai darwazeh peh

Uday- Akash? Yeh kaun hai kyun aiyah hai

Akash- Ghama Khani Yuvraj Udayveer hum Kunwar Akash Sodhi hai Amrit Jiji keh Bhai... aaj he aiye hai London seh Jiji neh kaha tha seedha yahaan anah... hamare Mom, Dad, Jiji nahiye nazar arahey hai

Uday- woh athe honghe aap inkeh saat jayee aapka kamrah dekadenghe

Akash left with servant

Rajbir- Yeh Amrit kaam thi ab iska Bhai bhi agaya

Unnanti and Amrit were back

Giriraj- Uday, Amrit zara Study mein anah koi zaroori baat karni hai

Amrit- Jee Giri Uncke hum abhi athe hai chaleh Uday

Unnanti- Hum Dada she kuch (interrupted)

Amrit- tumhaari baat important nahiye hai Unnanti tum baad mein baat karlenah Uncle Giri is calling us

Akash- JIJI!!!!!! (he hugged her)

Amrit- Akash I'm very happy aap agaye kaise ho

Akash- I'm fine Jiji aap kaisi hai

Amrit- Hum bahut khush hai Akash hum aapseh baad mein baat karteh hai

Uday went to the study and Amrit followed

Akash went to the lounge to watch TV

Unnanti- Rajbir when did he come

Remisha came inside

Remisha- Bhai who J Bhabhi neh kaha tha (interrupted)

Akash- Remisha!!!!

Remisha- Akash tum yahaan

Akash- haan meri family yahaan hai till the wedding is done kaisi ho

Remisha- I'm fine aur tum

Akash- I'm fine too itneh saloh baad dheka tumhe

Rajbir- tum dono ek doosreh ko jaanthe ho

Remisha- Yeah we went to the same University

Akash- yeah

Unnanti- Rajbir kya tumneh Bhai she koi baat ki

Rajbir- I did try he keeps avoiding the question aur har bar keh rehey hai koi baat nahiye hai… tumneh Manya seh baat ki

Unnanti- haan I did she said nothing too

Rajbir- kuch baat toh hai hum study keh bahar sonthe hai ky apatha kuch patha chaljaye

Unnanti- Rajbir agar Dad neh dhekliya humhe chorenghe nahiye

Rajbir- He wont ab chaloh

Meanwhile we see Vijay Bhai and Manyata talking

Vijay- M Bhai kya baat hai hum dhekrehay hai tum pareshaan ho

Manyata- No Vijay Bhai aisi koi baat nahiye hai hum toh bahuth khush hai… aaj hum apneh halkat vede keh mahal janeh waleh hai… aur aap chintha maat kijiye agleh paanch din baad aapki shaadi hai toh hum toh bahuth enjoy karenghe

Vijay- M Bhai are you sure koi baat nahiye patha nahiye humhe lag raha hai tum kuch chupa rahiye ho agar koi baat hai tum humseh share karsakthi ho

Manyata- Vijay Bhai I know lekin koi baat he nahiye hai toh hum kya bataaye…. Aap batiye isse box mein kya hai

Vijay-  ok ab tum keh rahiye I will take your word for it… isse box mein aapka gift hai

Manyata opened it

Manyata- yeh toh mere favourite Diamond bracelet hai jo maine choose kiya tha shop mein

Vijay- haan aur humneh iseh karidliya ab shaadi mein tum yahin pehenoghi ok

Manyata hugged Vijay Bhai

Manyata- Thank you Vijay Bhai I will surely wear it

Viraaj,Jhanvi, J and Krishy came inside

Krish- BUA!!!!! I brought my gift too

J- I got gift for Jiji too Vijay Bhai how dare aap hamareh binah he agaye

Vijay- J you take years getting ready aur hum pehele he tyaar teh so I came first to give my gift

Krishy- Very clever Mamu but I'm the smallest I should of come first

Vijay- I know Krish but I was in a hurry

Manyata- So Krishy Bacha what have you brought for Bua?

Krishy- Here you go it's a frame of you, me, mummy, daddy, dadu number 1 dadi number 1 then dadu number 1 and dadi number 2… great dadima, Princess J I mean my mami and Prince Vijay my mamu

Manyata- Bacha I love it thank you (she hugged him)

J- Jiji yeh hamaari taraf seh

Manyata- mere favourite perfume thank you J (she hugged her)

Viraj/Jhanvi- ab haamari turn yeh hai diamond set hamaari taraf seh

Manyata- Thanks Bhai, Bhahi I love it (she hugged them)

Rajmata- Manyata beta hum umeed rakteh hai aap Devgar air Jaigar ka maan rakehghi aur dono riyaasto ko sambhaleghi ache seh ab hum ek hai

Manyata- jee Dadisab hum vaada karteh hai hum apna farz ache seh nibayghe… Dadisab Mama, Ma, Dad, Papa kahan hai sab

Komal/Brij/Shaina/Rohan- Hum yahaan hai beta aapko bahuth miss karenghe

Manyata hugged them all

Manyata- hum bhi aapsab ko bahuth miss kareghe (she had a few tears in her eyes)

Rajmata- Ab bas kijiye koi nahiye roigha abhi bidaai nahiye hui hai

Vijay- Nanisab tike keh rahiye hai

Rajmata- Manyata beta aap tyaar hojayee kuchi ghantoh mein shaadi hai…. Aur aap sab bhi jayee

Manyata- Jee Dadisab

Everyone left

Nishimah and Shanaya came to get Manyata ready

Shanaya- Manya stop ringing Uday abhi thodi dher mein shaadi honeh walhi hai

Nishimah- Yeah ab phone mujhe doh

Manyata- Bhabhi.. Shanaya bahuth zaroori baat karni hai lekin auseka phone switched off hai

Shanaya- Manya no talking now ok warnah I will tell Raz Bro to take your phone…ab idhar dekho humhe make up karneh doh aur yeh phone mujhe do mein iseh abhi switched of karthi hoon

Manyata- (to herself) Uday humhe patha hai tum aoghe please hamaari kasaam maat thornah

In Jaigar we see Giriraj, Uday and Amrit in the study

Uday- humneh kahana hum sign nahiye kareghe

Giriraj- Manyata neh sign kardiye tum bhi kardoh warnah hum baraat lekeh nahiye jaighe aur yeh shaadi cancel

Amrit- Uday agar tum sign nahiye karoghe Manyata will be very upset phir shaadi nahiye hoghi socho Devgar aur Jaigar ki itni bezaathi hoghi… aur Manyata ka kya hogha bechaari itni khush hai isse shaadi ko lekeh

Uday- joh bhi ho hum apneh pyaar ko ek contract ke saat nahiye baadenghe

Giriraj- toh tike hai hum abhi shaadi cancel karteh waise bhi unoneh humhe dhokah diya apni beti ki asliyaat humhe nahiye batiye dhokeh she yeh rishtha jorah hum uneh choorenghe nahiye

Amrit- ek minute Uncle Giri hum baat karteh hai

Giriraj- jo bhi hai humhe 10 minute keh baat hum phone kardenghe ab jaldi seh sign karo

Giriraj left the study

Amrit- Uday agar aapko apna pyaar chahiye jaldi she sign kardijiye warnah yeh shaadi nahiye hoghi

Outside Rajbir and Unnanti heard everything

Giriraj- aap dono yahaan kya kar rehay jayee jakeh tyaar hui

Rajbir and Unnati left

Uday- hum parkeh sign kareghe aap jayee

Amrit- Uday itnah time nahiye hai yeh papers Giri Uncle neh khode banaye hai don't you trust him….

Uday- (Angrily) hum apneh ilawa kisi peh trust nahiye karteh hai

Amrit- tike hai pariye time bahuth kaam hai hum aapke saat hai

Uday- (Angrily) humhe aapke saat ki koi zaroorth nahiye hai hum Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh hai yahaan she nikiliyeh GET OUT!!!!!!!

Amrit- lekin Uday hum toh (interrupted)

Uday- GET OUT NOW!!!!!!!

Amrit- tike hai ja rehay hai aap papers sign kardijyegha akhir aapki Manyata neh bhi sign kardiyeh hai ek baar mein she didn't even think about it twice aur aap itnah soch rehey… hum thodi dher mein athe hai

Amrit left

Now Uday was really angry he signed all the papers as well

Uday- (Angrily) Manyata aap neh ek baar bhi nahiye soacha hamare bareh mein hamare pyaar ko contract keh saat baandiya I thought you will think about it and change your mind but you signed it……. ab hum aapko bateyghe binah pyaar keh shaadi kaisi hothi hai

PRECAP- EVERYONE ARRIVES IN SHAADI HALL

-MANYATA AND AKASH MEET

-MANVEER SHAADI WILL IT HAPPEN OR NOT???????

 

 

 

 

Posted: 11 years ago
RESERVED.  
ME FIRST ME FIRST YUHOOO.
EDITED.😉
Awesome, superb, mindblowing, amazing, great n beautiful update Jiji.👏 👏 👏 
How dare you Amrit to touch my spiderman Krishy? You Witch.😡
He's my fav. baccha.🤗What you did Manyata? You signed papers without reading it jus like in the show.
Manyata- ek baat yaad raknah hamare Uday seh dur rehenah warnah tumhare liye acha nahiye hogha samji he is mines!!!  Ye keep it in your mind. UV is only Manyata's n mines. Got it.
Vijay-Manyata-J-Krishy scene was great, so sweet.
Oh God Baldy Sasurji Pls don't use your lil mind n Pls don't play role of Amrish Puri between UV n Manyata.

Majnu is Amrit's bro.🤣 Kya Khoob jodi hai bhai-bahan ki.😆 Welcome Majnu.

UV was also angry with Manyata n also signed without reading contract paper. Hey Bhaggu.
Precap was so exciting n damn superb.
Great-great-great update Jiji.👏 👏 This one was one of the best chapters of Unwanted.👍🏼 👍🏼  👍🏼
Youincluded all the characters n their dialogues so beautifully without any mess up.This is the best thing in your FF jiji, every character get chances in updates.😊 
SIMPLE, SUPERB N SWEET UPDATE.
Thank you so much for the wonderful upate n PM Jiji.
Please update next part ASAP.😉 I'm really excited to read the next chapter.But I don't want to  end Unwanted after Manveer Marriage. 😳 Please continue it after the Manveer marriage.😳 If it's possible for you.😊
You're my one of the fav. writer of DEK Forum .🤗 Love your simple writing Jiji.😛
Thanks once again for this amazing FF.😊
Great job.👍🏼
LOVE YOU N HUGS FOR YOU.🤗  🤗 🤗 


Edited by Vasishtha - 11 years ago

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