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Originally posted by: -Laiba-Finaallyyy got time to read it O__________o
The part was brilliant as always 😃 you rock it 😛
As always i'm loving the Krish and Udhay bond , they r sooo cute ^^
wonder if vijay is gonna mak somethg for unnati 😆 always running behind her but true, never does anything xD he is such a lazy boy like me haha 😆
awww loved that J consultation part, thk god u made everythg normal!! manyata is soo funny the way she gets nervous seeing all this 😆
but u r making me worry and again leaving me with suspense ( famous suspense in all ) 😆 whats gonna happen with manyata case???????? again dear, again dear you'll have to update reallly quickk nd make it reealllyy long like this one 😆😆😆 still cant believe u could write all of it until sehri! i would be sleeping before even sehri would start xD i cant control my sleep 😆
so excited for the wedding shopping 😛continue soon!
Love, Laiba
Thanks😃... in the next update will be more Manveer scenesOriginally posted by: livvyNice update even though I wanted more manveer scenes
Thanks😃 🤗 its ok,... will do 2mrw insh allahOriginally posted by: gargibgreat update dear n continue soon n thanks for the PM...n ya Ramdan Mubarak!
Insh allah 2mrw with double update for you guys😊Originally posted by: smiley12when u will update ur next part?
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Hi everyone here's the double update that I promised I'm sorry it could've been better but I'm not too well I was awake till sehri and wrote all this. I haven't proofread it properly so it might have some mistakes in it. Do read and comment/criticise and all suggestions are welcome. I'm looking forward to seeing your comments.
We see Manyata in her bedroom she was still awake in thinking mode, she was really upset
Manyata- it's my fault should have been more careful today all this wouldn't have happened... I will try my best from now on I won't be scared I'm going to be brave for Uday's happiness... don't know what the doctor will say (she started crying) please god my reports come ok please god
In Udays room
Uday- I can't be so selfish I'm going to put my princess so much pain just so I could be a father to my little princess...all these tests machines my princess was so scared and in so much pain
Just then Uday's phone vibrated it was Manyata
Manyata- Uday u awake?
Uday- yh I'm awake Princess what happened? Why aren't you sleep you have work tomorrow
Manyata- I can't sleep I have no sleeping tablets left either I take them when I can't sleep
Uday- Princess try and sleep ok
Manyata- I'm trying but I keep getting bad thought in my head
Uday- Princess think good things ok not bad things that's why you're really stressed out I know after today the machines and all you got really scared
Manyata- no Uday I will be fine I'm worried about my results so worried like I can't sleep maybe that's why your awake too
Uday- Princess don't be worried we will find out tomorrow what it is don't worry ok until you sleep I will stay on the phone
Manyata- No Uday its fine you go to sleep I will try and sleep and if I still can't I will ring you ok... nyte
Uday- goodnight Princess I love you
Manyata- I love you too
The next day we see everyone downstairs Shanaya is back from Paris and Nishimah, Vikz, Raz have come to visit.
Shanaya- OMG UV how are you? When did you come?
Uday- Hi Shanaya I am fine we came 2 days ago
Shanaya- that's great finally Manya realised her true feelings for you... great now I came to tell you guys we are all going shopping and you guys need to come too
Uday- Shanaya I won't be able to come.. Princess has gone to work won't be back till 5
Shanaya- oh Manya has started her internship she didn't even tell me... ok well we will be shopping like all day so come later, J, Unnanti, Vijay Bhai you guys can come with us
Uday- yeah we will come later you guys carry on.. J be very careful ok
Unnanti- Dada don't worry I'm with her I will make sure
Now we see Manyata and Uday wedding shopping
Manyata- Uday I have half day today so I told the others I'm coming now where is everyone?
Uday- I don't know Princess where they are no one is answering their phone I'm waiting here since ages
Manyata- ok Uday until then we can do some shopping together let's go there
Uday- ok Princess lets go
Meanwhile we see Nishimah, Raz,Shanaya, Viks, J, Unnanti and Vijay shopping
Vikz- J what a plan? Manyaa and Uday are finding us
J- yeah don't worry they will do their shopping I will bbm them later saying we have gone home...
Nishimah- so make sure they don't see us
Raz- they won't don't worry Nishimah
Manyata chose a nice lengha for herself I want this for the wedding
Uday- Princess that's beautiful aur sangeet keh kiye yeh walah how is it
Manyata- it's nice aur yeh dono tumhare liye
Uday- Princess hum toh suit peheneghe
Manyata- No tum shervani pehenoghe ok
Uday- lekin princess
Manyata- no lekin wekin humneh kehdiya toh kehdiya
Uday- Ok Princess jaise tum kaho as long as you're happy I'm happy Princess for reception you should wear a sari that pink one is beautiful
Manyata- no Uday no sari not again I wore it once that's it I don't feel comfortable in sari and I can't handle it, choose me something else
Uday- ok Princess as you wish I will choose something else
Uday was looking around just then he saw Unnati and Vijay holding hands shopping together..
Uday- Choti aur Vijay bana yahaan peh
Vijay saw Uday
Vijay- Unnati Uday bana bhi idhar he hai chaloh yahaan seh
They quickly hided themselves
Uday went to the place where they were standing but he didn't see them
Uday- CHOTI!!!! VIJAY BANA!!!!! I'm sure I just saw them here kahaan gaye
Manyata- Uday what happened?
Uday- Princess I just saw Choti and Vijay bana standing here
Manyata- no one here Uday stop imagining thing... I'm going to try these on now
Just then Manyata saw someone familiar walking around the shop she quickly rang Uday
Uday- Princess are you ok what happened
Manyata- UDAY HUMHE ABHI WOH PINK SARI CHAHIYE
Uday- lekin Princess you said you didn't want the sari
Manyata- I changed my mind abhi lekeh aao hamara liye I want to try it on
Uday- ok Princess I will get it
Uday went to sari section
He got the pink sari and came back he went to the changing rooms
Uday- here you go Princess
Manyata- Thanks Uday
Uday- I will wait outside
Meanwhile we see the other shopping in the same shop
J- Jiju sa is over there guys hide
Vijay- J we will go to the shop next door I told you guys they were still in this shop
Shanaya- yeah but I wanted to buy this blue sari I saw it's from this shop can we quickly buy it, Manyaa has gone to the changing room she takes years trying clothes on so by then we will be done
Nishimah- Shanaya hurry up then no way we want Manya to see us
Raz- she won't Nishimah you buying the sangeet lengha from here
Nishimah- I don't know I will see
J- Nishimah you can buy your sangeet lengha I'm going to bbm jiji and jiju sa that we have gone home
Unnanti/Vijay- that's good J do that
Back to Manyata and Uday
Manayta- Uday stay here ok
Uday- Princess I'm waiting hurry up
Manyata- I'm coming
Manyata comes out
Uday- Princess you didn't even show me how the suit looks
Manyata- Sorry Uday I was in a hurry you can see at the function plus its bad luck ok
Uday- bad luck princess how is that possible
Manyata- I will explain after now lets go and pay for these
Uday- ok
Manyata- Uday I think I saw J over there
Uday- Princess no one there J told me everyone has gone home
Manyata- I'm sure I heard Vikz and J talking only Viks has that annoying voice
Uday- Princess you are mistaken no one there J told me they are at home on bbm
Just then Manyata saw someone coming
Manyata- Uday lets go now I want to buy that black dress
Uday- Princess
Manyata- come on Uday let's go
Uday- Princess what's wrong is someone following us
Manyata- No lets go I need my dress now chalo
Now we see Uday and Manyata shopping
Manyata put loads of dresses in the basket
Uday- Princess so many dresses
Manyata- yeah you see Uday we are all throwing Nishimah Bhabhi a Bachelorette party.. so I can't wear a anarkali suit there so I'm buying loads of dresses some for work and some for the party this black dress is beautiful what do you think
Uday- Princess where will this bachelorette party be... this dress isn't that nice I like this one
Manyata- Sorry Uday I can't tell you where it is... no that dress is too simple I might get it for work as you chose it but for party this black one is very elegant I will try it on
Uday- Princess now this isn't fair where is this party
Manyata- its girls only Uday so tum nahiye asakteh ok to be honest even I don't know where it is Shanaya is organising it
Uday- (Angrily) great now that Shanaya is organising it's bound to be (interrupted)
Manyata- Amazing now no need to be jealous Uday I will be right back
Just then we see Uday waiting for Manyata
Uday- Princess I'm very tired now hurry up you're taking years
Manyata- Uday I'm coming ok I need to try all the dresses on
Just the someone walks in the changing rooms
Girl- Yuvraj Udayveer ghama khani kaise hai aap
Uday- Yuvrani Amrit aap yahaan ghama khani hum tike hai aap kaisi hai aur aap London mein hai what a pleasant surprise
Amrit- Haan hum ek business deal keh liye aiye teh deal is finalized now so humneh soacha thodi shopping karleh.. humhe aapko dhekar bahuth khushi hui
Uday- humhe bhi Yuvrani Amrit I must say you look very beautiful
Amrit- Thank You woh toh hum hamesha he lagthe hai aur aap bhi hamesha ki tarah bahuth hi handsome lag rehay hai
Manyata heard their conversation and she wasn't very happy
Manyata- (to herself Angrily) khushi hui dhekar Uday hum abhi tumhe tike karteh hai aur ause Yuvrani Amrit ko.. (she came out the changing room) UDAY CHALEH!!!!
Uday- kyun Princess you're not done yet so many dresses left yet
Manyata-(Angrily) I'm done let's go!!!!
Amrit- Ghama khani Yuvrani Manyataa
Manyata gave her a dirty look
Manyata- Ghama khani ab hum chalteh hai excuse me chaloh Uday
Amrit- Bye Uday ab hum yahin hai kuch dino keh liye humneh tumhara number lehliyah hum bahuth he jald aapseh milenghe
Uday- of course Yuvrani Amrit hum zaroor milenghe
Now Manyata was fuming in anger
Amrit was really happy
Uday and Manyata went outside the changing rooms, she brought the dresses and now we see Uday and Manyata in the car she wasn't speaking to Uday
Uday- Princess kya hua itni jealousy achi nahiye hai
Manyata ignored him
Just then they bumped into Vijay and Unnati and all the shopping bags fell
Vijay- I'm sorry we didn't see you guys (he looked up and saw Uday)
Uday wasn't very happy
Vijay- (scaredly) Uday bana (interrupted)
Uday- aap dono yahaan kya kar rehay hai I thought J said you guys are at home
Vijay- Uday bana we had a few things to buy so humneh soacha hum yahin roke jaye
Unnati- haan Dada woh hum shopping kar rehay teh isliye
Uday- I can see your shopping holding hands and all humhe yeh sab bilkul pasand nahiye hai
Manyata- Vijay Bhai, Unnanti you guys carry on hum ghar chalteh hai have fun shopping
Uday- I will speak to you when you come home aur haan jaldi ghar anah
Now we see Manyata and Uday at home
Manyata went straight to her room
J- Jiju sa what happened to Jiji she is in a very bad mood
Krish- Bua is very angry Prince Udayveer what happened?
Jhanvi came with Krish food
Jhanvi- Krishy here's your cheese toasty
Krish- Thank You Mama
Jhanvi- Uday how was shopping?
Uday- it was good Bhabhi
Krish- Then why is my Bua in a bad mood
Jhanvi- kya hua Manya ko
Uday- nothing Bhabhi... Princess will be ok in a while Krish bacha how was school?
Krish- it was good Prince Udayveer I have sports day next week I'm very excited and you have to come ok
Uday- I will come I'm sure my Krish bacha will win
Krish- yeah I always win Prince Udayveer
Just then Shaina came fromt he kitchen
Shaina- Uday beta adhe ghanteh mein hospital janah hai Manyata kahaan hai
Uday- she's upstairs hum abhi athe hai
Uday went upstairs to Manyatas room but her bedroom was locked
Uday knocked the door
Uday- PRINCESS OPEN THE DOOR!!!!!!
No Anwser
Uday- PRINCESS STOP BEING STUBBORN PLEASE DARWAZO KHALO
No Anwser
Just then Krish came upstairs
Krish- Prince Udayveer!!!!
Uday- Krish bacha look you Bua isn't opening the door she's very angry with me
Krish- Prince Udayveer let me talk to Bua she's never angry for long (he knocked the door) BUA!!!! ITS KRISH PLEASE OPEN THE DOOR!!! PRINCE UDAYVEER HAS GONE DOWNSTAIRS (Whispered to Uday) prince Udayveer you hide over there ok let Bua open the door then you can come ok
Uday- ok Bacha
Manyata opened the door
Manyata- what happened Krish?
Krish- Bua let's go inside first
Just then Uday came inside too
Krish- Bua please don't be angry with Prince Udayveer ok
Manyata- Krish tell your Prince Udayveer I don't want to speak to him
Uday- I said I'm sorry Princess it's not my fault you get jealous quickly
Manyata- Krish tell him jealous I don't think so he was the one who was flirting with that arrogant Yuvrani Amrit I so hate her... I was telling him let's go he was too busy flirting now I won't ever speak to him get out of my room Uday now!!!!
Uday- Princess you just spoke to me you know I was only trying to make you jealous it worked I'm sorry ab kaan pakreh look I'm sorry
Krish- Bua see Prince Udayveer is saying sorry na he's even holding his ear now listen to me clearly Prince Udayveer if you ever make my Bua jealous again or upset I won't ever speak to you again and if you two fight again I won't speak to both of you. Bua Maasi wants me to come to stay I will go to my Nani house so if you two don't say sorry to each other I will go Nani house for weekend I don't like it when you 2 fight (he made a sad face)
U/M- No you can't go to your Nani house
Krish- say sorry to each other and be friends again
Uday- Sorry Princess
Manyata- Sorry Uday
Krish- yay Bua and Prince Udayveer friends again (he hugged them both)
Viraj- KRISH BACHA!!!!!!!!
Krish- PAPA IS HOME!!!!!!!
Krish went running downstairs
Manyata- Krish be careful bacha on the stairs
Krish- I'm fine Bua don't worry
Manyata- Ok
Uday- Princess I'm really sorry (interrupted)
Manyata- it's ok Uday let's not talk about it we should be going now to hospital
Uday- yeah let's go
Now we see Manyata and Uday in hospital
Manyata closed her eyes and prayed
Manyata- please god the results be good please god
Doctor came with the results
Uday holded Manyatas hand
Uday- Princess it will be ok... Doctors come
She still didn't open her eyes
Doctor- Uday beta where's Shaina?
Uday- Aunty couldn't make it how's the results
Doctor- beta relax I will tell you both I think Manyata is really nervous beta please relax ok now listen to me clearly 4 tests have come negative but the 2 main tests have come back positive so after some treatment there is a 50% chance you will be able to conceive
Uday- Doctor what kind of treatment?
Doctor- The treatment is going to take time but I can't guarantee the result
Uday- I don't want Princess to have (interrupted)
Manyata- Doctor I want to do the treatment if there is a chance I will take at least I tried my best from my side either it works or not
Uday- Princess it's no guarantee and you have to go through so much pain, I don't want you to go ahead with this treatment I can't see you in pain, because in the end it will be nothing we rather cry now then later let's go home
Manyata- Uday how can you say all this you always said that I should think positive now that I am you should support me, look I am willing to do everything do you not want our little princess to come it is a chance of her coming and I won't leave it Doctor I want to sign up for treatment either you take my side or not Uday I will go ahead with this treatment
Uday- No Princess you will not
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