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AbhIya FF - Yellow Peonies - Chapter V Page 13 (Page 8)

..Bournville.. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 22 February 2011
Posts: 29639

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:31am | IP Logged
nice update. i really like the way you are writing this story,
pia is as selfless as ever and wants to heal the person who was cheering someone who wished her dead. 
lets see what happens next

--geny-- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 03 September 2011
Posts: 12546

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
awesm update..brillient...waiting wht vl happen nw...n i dnt want abhay to help bloody panch...plz ...
hope pia vl undrstnd abhy n abhiya 2gethr...
Divya6696 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 13 June 2011
Posts: 5272

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Raffella.. Hug that's a good name dear..!
coming to the chapter.. I've already told you that you write brilliantly..!! the fight scene was beautifully written..!
Piya's words helped Abhay to get up and fight back..! lovely..!!

Piya surely loves her family a lot..! she asked Abhay to heal Panchi even though she was his enemy's soul mate..!!

update soon dear.. :) :)
.SmokeySilence. Coolbie

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Amazing update Raffaella Clap
Im just loving the plot. so unique it is. hats off to you for the concept. Loved the description of the fight. the situation reminded me of the gladiator. LOL
Loved the selfless Pia and how her love saved Abhay Embarrassed
Loved how she selflessly wanted to help Panchi... waiting for the next one.. fabulous Clap
MS-meghasharma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 18528

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
fab abhay was angry dat pia hadn't come to cheer him & got pumped up d moment she connected to him.pia had asked abhay to heal panchi & i do feel that he might listen to her.u hav a unique style f writing & m really luvin it. Thanx 4 pm & nice name:)
Andromeda001 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 10 May 2012
Posts: 14039

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Danish asked 4 this!Challenging Abhay that too when Piya is involved boy u were waking up a dormant Volcano!
Loved it when Abhay's heavenly blue eyes searched 4 his soulmate in d crowd 4 his support nd mentally being angry with her too.
So finally Piya is also softening with an overwhelming feeling of love towards Abhay nd way she fought 4 his life was just great.
Loved the post fight meeting of ABHIYA.Abhay doesn't want 2 heal panchi! Lol i also don't want.
Overall u are a superb writer.
Our forum is already adorned with some of the best writers nd u are a recent addition.
SheDevil IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 18 March 2011
Posts: 22852

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged

wow yaar awesome update.Ur name is gud.Oh i so loved ur update tht fight & whole soulmate connection was hot.So its lke if one soulmate is imjured thn other will feel the pain too?Oh I love the way both Abhiya talked Telepathically.Oh Gosh Abhay is one dangerous angry man & the way he punished Metz was uff.Plz cont..I will try 2 read novel recommended by u

trishnawaliya IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 January 2012
Posts: 3994

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
nice part and thanks 4 prolouge but its sad dat danish was killed and being his soulmate panchi is in pain... hope abhay help her...

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