Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani

India-Forums

   
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani

AbhIya FF - Yellow Peonies - Chapter V Page 13 (Page 15)

-JuniorAngel- IF-Dazzler
-JuniorAngel-
-JuniorAngel-

Joined: 01 September 2011
Posts: 3848

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 6:53am | IP Logged
awsome just loved itWink "love me change me" just loved this dialogueEmbarrassed
oh u are ending this ff so soonOuch try to extend it if u canSmile
continu soon...Tongue

SheDevil IF-Sizzlerz
SheDevil
SheDevil

Joined: 18 March 2011
Posts: 22852

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Awesome update dear.I so loved the way u described Abhiya's emotional scene.The bst line was 'I m scared of u have the power over my heart'. This line show tht even a predator is helpless infront of love.Love is human's biggest weapon & cure too.It gives pain & it takes too.
Panchi is retarded b***h.T is a sly vixen she too wnt 2 taste Abhay but na it will never gonna happen.EmbarrassedLOL
mahi4ever Senior Member
mahi4ever
mahi4ever

Joined: 19 June 2011
Posts: 507

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Fabulous update Big smile 
eeewww i hate dis dobrial family ( except piya LOL
dat panchi Angry n i think T vil b another big trouble Ouch 
loved abhay's mind reading ability, Embarrassed 

BeyondHorizon IF-Stunnerz
BeyondHorizon
BeyondHorizon

Joined: 27 December 2005
Posts: 25400

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Superb update Rafaella Clap It was too good Embarrassed Gosh I hate the Dobriyals Angry I wish Abhay had never saved birdie Dead n I hope Pia never has to set foot in that place Angry Abhiya moment was just WOW Embarrassed I also loved the last scene, was power packed Clap with wiccan magic. U r a terrific writer dear n please do continue soon but only if u get the time Embarrassed
Rmuk IF-Sizzlerz
Rmuk
Rmuk

Joined: 16 December 2011
Posts: 18697

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Woaaa fab updates. I read chp 4 and 5 just now, suoerb work yaar. Seriously loved it. I hope abhaiya alag na ho, like the witches part and abhiya parts. U are a brilliant writer, update asap ok
bellaaa IF-Sizzlerz
bellaaa
bellaaa

Joined: 07 October 2011
Posts: 12920

Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
read 2 chapters in one go
superb updates yar
loved the way u write and describe the story
its quite unique
aww piya wanted to end her realtion to abhay but our abhay is so cool how he can leave piya like this after all his soul mate yar
loved the scene f abhay introduction mate and last line the control of piya in his heart wow yar
t and panchi is such a jerks...
hope abhay always saved piya
cont soon


Edited by bellaaa - 23 August 2012 at 12:05pm
.rumki. IF-Sizzlerz
.rumki.
.rumki.

Joined: 06 March 2010
Posts: 11947

Posted: 23 August 2012 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
gr8 update
Panchi is a jerkDead
good that Abhay came in time and saved Pia
but why Pia want to leave Abhay?

Add me to pm list


Edited by .rumki. - 23 August 2012 at 2:52pm
Monami_50 IF-Rockerz
Monami_50
Monami_50

Joined: 03 February 2012
Posts: 8423

Posted: 27 August 2012 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Plz continue soon.Eagerly waiting for next part.

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
First Dance Abhiya fully Abhiya O.S.

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Author: Mrs.Peanuts   Replies: 63   Views: 20028

Mrs.Peanuts 63 20028 11 June 2013 at 7:06am by Fierce.Dreamer
ALINA Support system for ABHIYA will save ABHIYA

2 3

Author: matwamango   Replies: 19   Views: 3898

matwamango 19 3898 16 November 2011 at 2:44pm by matwamango
NeWs:Abhiya Ka Abhiya

Author: Khilonaa   Replies: 3   Views: 2428

Khilonaa 3 2428 19 October 2011 at 3:53am by Khilonaa
Abhiya VS Abhiya

2 3 4

Author: pyar-ishk   Replies: 27   Views: 6770

pyar-ishk 27 6770 06 August 2011 at 10:11am by pyar-ishk
yellow yellow dirty fellow

Author: payyal   Replies: 3   Views: 518

payyal 3 518 21 November 2010 at 5:15am by kwkidiwani

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani Topic Index

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index