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AbhIya FF - Yellow Peonies - Chapter V Page 13 (Page 10)

matwamango IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Wow this is amazing. I just couldn't stop reading. U are a breath of fresh air Raphaellla. I have come across this name before in Novels i used to read. But its a beautiful name "God heals" Your parents chose wisely. I believe names should have meanings to suit the person.

Back to your amazing FF. Manasa had recommended i read this and boy was she right!!! I just had to read more. I hope U update soon so i can read more. 

Its such an adrenaline rush and i am loving the futuristic storyline reminded me of the Hunger Games sorta and Gladiators The way U express these characters, you've given every character a purpose. Its a master piece i tell U.

Please PM me when U update thanx

Edited by matwamango - 26 July 2012 at 9:54am

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-JuniorAngel- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
awsome update  raffaellaWink im just in love with ur storyDay DreamingLOL
the way u write is just marvellousClapStar
abhay killing danesh after piya said to him was fabEmbarrassed
just loved the lake sceneDay Dreaming
will something happen to piya in the forestWink
continu soon...
bellaaa IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
amazing update yar
loved ittt
every part of fight to angry abhay
awsome yar
cont soon
.AgapiMou. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Freakingly awsum update rapz!!
I luvd the way pia's words became a powerhouse 4 abhay..the fight was quite lively..i cud feel it playing b4 my eyes..pia z so selfless n abhay a way stubborn..PanDa r soulmates..oh!i wonder if abhay vl heal her or not..but pia's pleadings vl surely make him do that.isnt it?update soon..
abhiya_kapi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Hey since I don't remember the names easily, so in-short I'll call you Raph, as that's the easy way to remember your name. LOL

No doubt you are an amazing writer. Clap Sorry yaar to comment so late, I was bit busy.

Anyways coming to the chapter. I must say your writing is very creative and the fight scene was brilliantly taken over. I could visualize that scene very well. And yeah loved Pia being selfless and want Abhay's to save Panchi. I hope he saves her. Even though I don't like Panchi's character, but for Pia, surely Abhay will do it. Wink
Trouble. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 31 July 2012 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Awesome updtClapClap
-JuniorAngel- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
plzz continu soon Big smile eagerly waiting Embarrassed
snitchseeker IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Update soon dear

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