New FF: A New Beginning - Chapter 1 Pg 13 Updated - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
this is awesome...
u left me misty eyed yet again...
i knew u had da talent in emotional stuff too...
but this one my love exceeds my expectations...

love u gal...🤗
Posted: 11 years ago
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i loved the prologue! cant wait till arnav steps into the picture and mends her broken heart *lalalalalalalala*

the story seems captivating update soon JALDIII!

thanks!
Edited by -Grace- - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Fari,it sounds so intersting...u must continue it...but pls...ibadat n then ur health come first...we can wait 4 d updates patiently😊...BTW...Where is Ashum...i m missing her SCREAMS OF JOY...YE YE  ...I M 1ST 2 COMMENT😃
Posted: 11 years ago
Oh wow, I loved the start! Interesting new story :) Cant' wait for you to continue!
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome,interesting...
continue soon...
Posted: 11 years ago
Wid dis start...i cant wait for long...it has raised a hell lot of ques...where is ARNAV here...is khushi alone...was payal married to aakash???...

Oh god!! Curiosity grl...
Update soon

Btw loved it...
Posted: 11 years ago
amazing start!!!! refrehing, but saddening at the same time... i'm waiting for more of this!! :)
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome... plz continue soon.. Happy Ramadan :D
Posted: 11 years ago
Reserved😳
Will edit on Tuesday!
 
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Fari, a new FF!!!😳 I enjoyed reading the prologue, heart-touching!!! So, Khushi is alone with Payal's child! So sad that Payal and Akash died!
 
Can't wait to see how things slowly evolve and how your characters are shaped!!
 
Waiting for the first chapter😳
Edited by tash10 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
sounds interesting
was Payal married to Akash?
and is Arnav Akash's brother??
I'm waiting..!!!

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